FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 12

thnx 4 all ur coments guys 😊
it really feels nice sum1 appreciating ur effort 😳
and verni..don't b sorry
as u r back now..we shall hope to see u writing too 😉

thanks amrit for forgiving me.......i myself am too worried.......well i cont....

su tries coming closer to kk but then akshat shouts : uncle.
su moves away : kya hai ?
ak:woh dekhiye...slides mujhe sliding karni hai.
su: to aisa bolo naa daraa diya..........jao kar lo magar door matjaana.
ak:okk aap log bhi yaheen rehna.
kk:okk par no masti and shaitaani..jao
ak soon indulges in playing with other kids.......and su gets closer to kk.

su: kk
kk (without even looking at him) :hmm
su : idhar dekho.
kk:main akshat ko dekh rahi hoon...
su:theek hai to usko hi dekhti raho...
kk:naaraaz kyun hote ho.......achcha baba bolo kya hai?
su:hamari baat adhoori reh gayi thi....
kk:kaun si?
su (yeh aise nahi maanegi) :okk woh chodo ek baat batao i gave u a gift in diwali....okk
kk: haan
su:mera gift kahaan hai?
kk:kyun?
su:kyun kya? mujhe kuch nahi milega....
kk:oho ........gussa kyun karte ho bolo kya chahiye?
su coming closer:bataaon.
kk (not realizing what he can ask for):batao.
su coming more close :sach mein dogi naa.
kk:haan baba..bolo to.
su:theek mujhe woh chahiye jo maine tumhe kal us gift ke pehle di thi........aur jo aaj subah dene wala tha but tumhare bhaiya ka phone aa gaya.......
now kk understands that he is asking for A KISS...............
...........

..............i'll go onnnnnnn.........

kk tries moving away...
su:ahan....kahaan jaa rahi ho....? gift to mujhe chahiye hi.....u promised..
kk:su...
su comes very very close and says:haan
kk:su plz....
then su realizes that she is feeling uncomfortable...
su:okk nahi chahiye kiss khush.....
but he did not move away...
kk:su ab kya?
su: kya?
kk (shyly looking down) :to aise kya dekh rahe ho?
su:tumhe.......ab dekho kiss nahi le sakta to kam se kam tumhe dekh to sakta hoon..
su keeps looking at her continuously........
kk:su plz mujhe.....mujhe sharm aa rahi hai.......
su:naa tum mujhe kiss karne se rok sakti ho........tumhe dekhne se nahi.........
kk gets redder....and finally keeps her head on his chest and hugs her....
su:yeh kya....
kk:mujhe sharm aati hai.......
and su hugs her toooooooo..........


bachcha log ab to mujhse naraaz nahi ho naa..........

i say sorry to hina and amrit once more....... 😭
i can't help it.......

now conttttttt.......... 😊

Hey verni yaar wat are u saying....

...me and amrit are totally not upset with u!!!

honestly...we were just missing ur twists in Su-kk's love story thats all 😃

we really really missed u!...acha! 😳

bachcha log are totally not naraaz with u!!! 😆

very cute scene!! wonder how sumit is going to confess his love in front of everyone!!

wow! Verni....u've made quite a come back...😃

look at all ur fan mail! 😉 😆

looks like u've taken the lead in writting romantic scenes...😛

...gr8 wrk keep it up! 👏

Hey don't know if u guys are gonna be in the mood to read today...after seeing the news going round the forum....i've jus got i piece of advice tho...theres no point being upset over something that hasn't or may not happen....and things only happen for the best...keep up the positive attitude and u'll sail rite thru the problem...for sure!!!

Alrite enuff of my speech...back to the story!!! 😉

They spend quite some times at the gardens enjoying the views….and it gets late. Su is holding akshats hand

Su: beta teek se chalo

Ak: nahi sumit uncle mein tak gaye hoon! 😳

Su: (looks at kk) 😊

Kk: (smiles back)

Su: chalo mein aap ko utah lehta hoon phir.

He picks him up and after a while he falls asleep on su's shoulder!

Su: ab chalien waapis…is akshat ko to need agaye hai…yeh nah ho key tumhare bhabi bhi mujhe daante key iss bhuka kyun soney diya…😳

Kk: looks at him and is so surprised that su has started caring so much for Akshat…but she doesn't say nething…she admires him as he lays akshat down on the back seat…she feels extremely happy. (coz she thought he would have got annoyed 😡 by now with akshat) 😛

Su: chalo baito….(looks at her)….kya hua?

Kk: (still not seated yet) idhar aao! 😉

Su: (goes up to her thinking) pata nahi ab kya galati ho gaye hai! 😕

Kk: (gives him a big hug and he smiles) 😆

Su: (still hugging) yeh kisliye? 😃

Kk: bus aeise hi! 😳

Su: (kisses her on her cheek) yeh bhi aeise hi….(and smiles cutely)…chalien ab?

They reach the hotel….

Su: picks akshat up and takes him inside leaving kk outside

Kk: mouth is left hanging open…acha to ab yeh akshat zyaada impt hogaya hai 😲

Su: turns around…smiles and shouts….haan….then he hurries of inside 😉

Su gives akshat to priya

Pr: thanks su…zyaada tung to nahi kiya?

Su: arre nahi bilkul nahin actually kaafi mazza aya

Pr: acha ab jakar araam karo

Su: (he is about to go..but then stops) erm wasse sub (meaning rahul) hai kahaan? 😛

Pr: Rahul to kub ka soogaya…aur bakhi sub bhi aapne kamre mein chalegye…maine to bus tum log ka intzaar kar rahein tee

Su: (yawns purposely 🥱 ) acha to phir goodnight! 😆

Pr: goodnight! (she walks of towards her room)

Su sees kk coming in…he starts to walk of towards his room

Kk: (calls out to him) Sumit! 😃

Su: (turns as tho he's really tired) haan…kya hua? 😕

Kk: tum apne kamre mein ja raho? 😊

Su: haan bohut neend are hai naa 🥱

Kk: (feels sad she doesn't want him to go just yet)…acha 😕

Su: maine jaon? (smiling to himself) 😉

Kk: (looking down) hmmm

Su: kk…

Kk: (thinks that hes not gonna go…smiles) haan 😃

Su: haath to choro…😳

Kk: oh sorry! 😒

And su walks of to his room. Kk really disappointed that he went…she also goes to her room

Kk in her room…

Kk: hmmm yeh sumit bhi na aaj itne jaaldi so gaye hai…ab akele kya karoon?....

Kk really wants to be with sumit but decides to try and take her mind of him…she sits down and ons the t.v….flicks thru the channels but nothing catches her eyes…then she tries reading a book (romantic novel) it reminds her of su so she closes it and puts it away…she puts her head on the pillow and closes her eyes…but she can only think of su…

Kk: uff!..😡.ab mein kya karoon…that's it mein uske paas ja rahi hoon….

Gets up and walks across the corridor to su's room and knocks on the door!

Su is still awake too he knew kk would finally come and rahul is asleep so no1 can disturb them….he laughs to himself 😈…quickly he messes up his hair and the blanket on the bed and offs the light before opening the door to make it look like he was sleeping.

Opens the door (pretends to be sleepy) 🥱

Su: …kk… tum yahaan? 😲 (as if he didn't know) 😆 😆

Kk: su…erm..woh kya hai naa….erm tum so to nahi rahe tey? 😳

Su: nahi mein bus cricket khel raha tah…tum kelogee?

Kk: makes a sad face

Su: (softly) kk maine kaha tah naa key neend aarahe hai to obviously so raha tah…(trying to stop a smile from appearing on his face)

Kk: acha to phir tum jakar so mein bhi jaati hoon….😒

She turns to leave…..su standing in the doorway watching…shes looks back at him really wanting to be close to him…..

Su: kk aeise na mujhe dehko…(even he can't resist now…he pulls her into his room and shuts the door)

It is completely dark!!!! Kk feels uncomfortable…

Kk: sumit light to on karo naa…

Su: (hugs her from behind and puts his head on her shoulder) nahi mujhe neend a rahe hai…to mein so rahaa hoon…mujhe disturb mutt karna light on karke

Kk: par mujhe neend nahi a rahe to mein light on karoonge…b4 he can stop her…she reaches the bedside lamp and ons it

Su: kya hai kk…(pretending the light is hurting his eyes 😆) mere room mein aakar mujhe hi baata rahe ho key kay karna hai

Kk: (smiles) haan 😃

Su: gee nahi…yahan to sirf mere marzi chalege 😊

Su goes near her and both sit on the bed…she starts talking and he pretends to be very sleepy…he lies down

Kk: tum so nahi saktey! 😡

Su: kyun…agar neend a rahi hai to kyun nahi so sakta…🥱

Kk: su this is not fair! 😡 😡

Su: (sits up) acha baba ab teek hai

Kk: (sees that he looks very sleepy) acha nahin phir tum so jao 😕…sorry tumhai disturb kiya…mein ja rahe hoon…(gets up to leave…)

Su: (sees this & grabs her arm and pulls her real closer to him) ab kaho kahaan jaana hai 😛

Kk: (put her arms on his shoulders) kahin nahi…bus tumhare paas anaa tah 😳

Su: acha to yeh baat thi…😉 (kisses her hand and then hugs her tight)

Kk: (extremely happy now coz she got his attention) 😃

Su: to pehle kyun nahi kaha….mein to hoon hi tumhara…sirf…tumhara

Kk: (is overjoyed and hugging him real tight) 😆

Su: lehkin kk ab such mein mujhe bohut neend aa rahi hai….plz ab mein so jaon? 😉

Kk: ok

Su: per kk torhi dare mere paas baitogi?

Kk: nods 😊

Su lies down whilst kk sits beside him…he holds her hand close to his heart….and soon enuff he falls asleep…kk just admires him…unwillingly she slowly removes her hand so that she doesn't wake him…she pulls up the blanket to make sure he is warm…brushing her fingers thru his hair…and lightly kisses him on his forehead…

Kk: luv u su! Goodnight! ❤️

She smiles and turns off the lamp and leaves….😳

....Picks his head up to see if she has gone 😉

Su: luv u too kk….bohut zyaada! ❤️ ❤️ Lagta hai tumhare bhaiya se bohut jald baat karne paregee! Ab aur intazaar karna muskil ho raha hai…

gr8 parts n hope sumit confess his luv infront of every1 der

wowwwwwww henna n verni gr8 write ups yaar...luved thm lots 😃