FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 10

Originally posted by: raji05

wow!! 😛 That was another great scene too!!

Thanks!

I just hope u guys enjoy reading as much as i enjoy writting! 😳

Originally posted by: amrit23

awesum part henna 😊
culdn't think of anything rite now 😆 😆 will cont. soon

Thank you Amrit....

....hey ne1 know where Verni has run off too?!!!

oh and peepz v still need more writers...so plz do give it a shot

...u neva know u mite enjoy it! 😉....

Hey amrit was jus reading ur bit again!

n i gotta say dis line is jus too funny

"hai k nahin gadha kahin ka"

kumkum ki to...😡 ...su ko aeisa keh rahe hai...ab su ko bhi uss key baare mein kuch bura kehna parega...i'll make sure of it! 😉

hahahahahahaha! 😈 (laughs evilly)

i'll ask Nidz uss key paas koi na koi acha hindi word hoga kk key liye!

acha kumkum ki bachchee is baar chor rahe hoon...😡

aglee baar su ❤️ ke baare mein aeisa kuch kaha to mein uss ke shaadi mini key saath karadoongi....sumjee? 👎🏼

😈 😈 😈 😈 😈 😈 😈 😈

(am jus kidding guys hope the last 2 posts made u laff!!!) 😆 😆 😆 !

Ok so both families are going to alibagh….the wadwas r to go to kk's house from where they will all travel together.

Outside Wadwa house

Veena: aap ne sub kuch rakh liya hai na?

Kul: haan…bus ab saab zaadey aagein to hum nikal jaein! 😛

Su comes outside and goes towards his own car

Kul: arre mister yahaan..is car mein

Su: (thinks to kk mere paas kaise baatege) nahi papa…uss car mein to samaan wagara hai na to juga nahi hogee

Kul: acha…samaan peeche dikey mein rakah hai yah seat per? 😆

Su: (thinks..papa kyun nahin sumaj rahe) erm papa wasse bhi mujhe apne dost se milna hai jaane se pehle to aap log chaleye mein jaldi aaonga.

After much persuasion he manages to convince them to go!

Su: uff…tak gaya mana mana kar! 😳

He gets into his car and goes of to meet his friend ( the phool wala)😆 haha.

He gets a lovely bunch of flowers and then goes to kk's house.

At kk house every1 is ready and sitting in the car ready to go! Rahul has especially made a space for kumkum to sit behind him. So its kul and veena (oh and their samaan) and kk's mum in one car…priya, rahul and akshat in the other and they are waiting for kk to join them.

Both kk and su take ages in coming….kul getting impatient…he tells rahul they need to re-fuel so they will meet them at the petrol pump just nearby and they drive off. Meanwhile su arrives. Kk too comes out seeing his car. Both smile at each other.

Rahul: kk aao baito! 😊

Kk: (looks at su) Bhaiya who mein….😳

Rahul: kya hua?....chal aa nah

Kk: (again looks at su…he's motioning kk to come sit beside him) Bhaiya…😕

Bhabi: (not understanding the situation) kk dare ho rahee hai

Kk: (goes to open the car door)

Sumits enormous grin fades…n he looks down at the flowers…feeling upset. 😔

Kk can see that he is upset so becomes sad too. 😒

She open the car door and is about to sit when she sees akshat asleep on the back seat.

Kk: phew!...bhaiya who akshat yahaan pey soya hua hai

Bhabi: arre kumkum usse utana mutt raat ko bhi who dare se soya tah

Kk: (little smile) Bhaiya ab mein kahaan batoo? 😃

Rahul: erm…

Bhahi: ja sumit key saath…aur koi raasta bhi nahin hai 😉

Kk: (pretending to go unwillingly) acha to phir mein jaate hoon bhaiya 😈

Quickly she goes and sits with Sumit…both smile. They wait until Rahul has gone and hug each other tight! 🤗

Su: yeh tumhare liye ( taking the flowers from the back seat and handing them over) 😛

Kk: (smiling ) thanks…ab chalein?

Su: kahaan…(naughtily) under?....ghar pey koi bhi nahin hai ( coming closer) acha moka hai 😃

Kk: (puts her arm out to stop him coming closer) haan haan sub pata hai mujhe…pata hai kitne himmat hai tum mein 😳

Su: azmana nahin chahoge? (moving his face closer) 😉

Kk: who to mein already azma chuke! 😛

Su: (stops coming closer) acha…(surprised) kub?

Kk: jub maine tumhe jacket utaar ne key liye kaha tah 😆 ( she laughs at him) kitna gubra gaye tey tum! 😳

Su: mein…aur gubra gaya(he can't believe what he's hearing) 😕

Kk: haan sumit …tum 😃

Su leans over….coming closer and closer…he put one arm around her waist and leans the other on her seat…there is only a tiny gap between them.

Su: (whispers in her ear) ab kaun gubra raha hai?

Kk: (gubratey hui whispers) sumit…aeisa mutt karna plz…

Su: (shaking his head naughtily) 😆

Kk: knows she won't b able to stop him 😳

Su kisses kk on her neck…she likes the feeling but still moves away…he pulls her closer….kk is about to speak…but su stops her

Su: sssshhhh! (puts his finger on her lips) 😊

He's about to kiss her when her phone rings…😛

Kk: Bhaiya hain!

Su: (lets go of her) koi baat nahin…yahaan nahi to alibagh mein sey

Kk is on the fone

Ra: acha to phir tum dono jaldi aao hum intazaar kar rahein hain..su ke parents key saath.

Kk: teek hai bhaiya

She puts the fone down..su is staring at her

Kk: kya?

Su: tum mere baat itne jaaldi kyun nahi maan ti? 😡

Kk: kyun ab kya hua? 😕

Su: tum khabi 'teek hai sumit!' kyun nahin keh sakhti…tum nahin jaante kitna maza aaeyga! (he grins at her) 😆 😛

Kk: (see that he's gonna start again…slaps his face lightly) acha kehdoonge khabi na khabi…ab to chale rahe ho na…sub intezaar kar rahein hain…aur bhaiya ko zayaada gussa dilaya 😡 na to mere bajai yahaan akshat ko bitaa dein gaye 😉 😆

Both laugh and finally get going…

really superb.
i am just imaging the story it lokk great 😊 😃

Originally posted by: raji05

awesome guys!! you rock!!

~ 👍🏼 ~

Originally posted by: preethi

really superb.
i am just imaging the story it lokk great 😊 😃

Thank you Preethi 😉

n u r most welcome to this thread! 😃

Gr8 going Amrit... 👏 👏 👏

...was really funny! 😉

i jus love the Akshat bits there so sweet! 😳