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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 going every1 👏
my turn now

so sumit faals asleep...so does kk
the next very day..rahul decides that he is going to make sumit confess his love..he has a solid plan 😉

he tells every1 that they will b going out at sum place 4 breakfast

su-kk were sleepy..but he forces them to get ready

they went to a scenic place where they could have their breakfast njoying themselves in the beauty of nature

rahul..priya..kul..veena..all knows what's going to happen in few moments..

hold ur breath guys 😊

every1 about to eat n rahul n sumit both were together at sum place
ra - sumit..kuch hi dinon mein tum kk k bahut acche dost ban gaye ho
su wonders why he is saying so n says - haan..
ra - to tum mera ek kaam karoge
su - haan sure
ra - yeh dekho ( he shows him a photograph of a very handsome person)..kaisa hai
su - well..dekhne main to accha hai..personality bhi hai...good looking hai
ra - kk ke liye kaisa rahega
su shocked says - kya 😕
ra - kk mujhse to baat karegi nahin..to main chahta hoon ki tum usse jakar uski shaadi ki baat karo..wo tumhari baat zaroor maan jayegi
su was about to faint - is ladke se..
ra - kyun..abhi to tumne kaha ki bahut accha hai
su - are lekin chehre se hi kisi k behaviour ka pata thode hi chalta hai..aap ko pehle is k baare main poori information leni chahiye...kya karta..kya kamaata hai..aur phir iski family kaisi hai
he tried his best to convince rahul
ra - are main ise bahut acchi tarah jaanta hoon..yeh mr.malhotra ka beta hai..well educated aur acha khasa business hai unka
su was really helpless..heart broken...😭he wanted to tell rahul that he luvs kk but didn't had that courage to accept his luv..he was scared of what rahul will do after knowing this
ra - to tum kk se baat karoge naa
su - haan..koshish karoonga.. he says this with a sigh

just then kk arrives in her bubbly nature..she don't know anything
kk - are bhaiya aap yahan hain..bahar khana lag gaya hai..sab aapko bula rahe hain..sumit tum bhi chalo na
ra - haan chalo kk..
kk - aap chaliye bhaiya main sumit k saath aati hoon
ra - kyun..mere saath nahin aa sakti
kk surprised with his behaviour
kk - theek hai..chaliye
rahul keeps his hand round her shoulder n they went
sumit stood there heart broken with a little tear in his eyes
su to himself - bas..bahut ho gaya..ab waqt aa gaya hai sab ko sachayee batane ka

i'm running short of ideas..sum1 continue from here 😊
Edited by amrit23 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 goin evry1!!!!!! 👏
chalo ab jaldi se aap sab sumit se uske pyar ka izhaar karwaao 😳 😳.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Amrit...thanks for pitching up the ball so well...i'll surely take the catch...and make sure Rahul goes back to the pavillion for a duck as soon as i get home from uni today.... 😉

n for any non cricketing people that means i've got an idea as to what will happen next...n i'll write it up shortly!!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
u explained me very well that u've got the plot 😆
will b waiting 4 ur part
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Posted: 18 years ago

Su watches sadly as kk walks of with rahul…

At breakfast everyone is busy chatting away but su is really quiet…kk keeps lookin at him waiting for him to do some shaitaani but he doesn't…she senses theres something wrong.

Ra: agar nashta katum hogaya hai to hum chalien ghoomney…kitne khoobsurat juga hai…

Every1 agrees and get and walk of in their pairs…leaving su and kk.

Kk: sumit nahi chalna hai kya? 😳

Su: (gazes around and sees every1 has gone) sub kahaan gaye? 😕

Kk: arre abhi to keh kar gaye hai naa….key ghoomney jaana hai

Su: oh….haan of course 😳

They get up too and follow the others…kk is talking to su but sees that his mind is elsewhere 😒…kk looks at every1 else there busy doing their own thing…so she grabs su by the arm and take him away from the others…

Kk: ab tum mujhe please baatogey key kya hua hai?

Su: (looks at her and sees that she is really concerned) kk who..

Kk: (again interrupts) su…such such batana mujhe! 😳

Su: (feels he is compelled to tell the truth now) kk…Rahul tumhare shaadi kahein aur karne key bare mein soch raha hai…😭

Kk: kahein aur?...yeh tum kya keh rahai ho sumit…😲

Su: such keh raha hoon (shows her the photo)

Kk: (getting really worried) Su…kahein tum phir se muzzak to nahin kar rahe 🤔

Su: kumkum, rahul nay khud mujse baat ki hai…aur yeh kaha tha key mein tumse kahoon…

Kk: nahi sumit tumhai unse baat karni hoge aaj…balke abhi…nahi to baat zyaada na baar jahey…kehein dare naa hogaye…😕

Su: lehkin kk mein kya kahoon unse?

Kk: mein nahi jaante lehkin tumhai bhaiya ko batana hoga…mein kis aur ki nahi hosakte…khabi nahi …😡

Su: aur agar rahul ney munah kardiya toh?

Kk: (puts her hand on his mouth) aeisa mutt kaho…bhaiya aeise nahi kar sakhtey!..(she hugs su tight) 🤔

Su: hugs her back….both have tears in their eyes 😭

Kk: wada karo sumit key bhaiya ka faysila jo bhi ho tum mujhe chor kar nahi jao gaye…please mujhe se wada karo…😭(puts her hand out)

Su: tumhai mujse se cheena itna ahsaan nahi hai…hamare beech koi bhi nahi aa sakta…koi bhi nahi…😭(put his hand on hers) wada!

Kk: to sumit tum bhaiya se kahogey naa?

Su: nods trying to control his tears

Both wipe each others tears and join the others again…Rahul comes up to Su

Ra: Sumit…tumne baat ki kumkum se? 🤔 (looking desperate to know)

Su: (quietly) haan 😔

Ra: (eager) to kya kaha kk neh?

Su: woh…

Ra: haan kaha naa? (looking extremely hopeful) 😃

Su: (sees this and can't bring himself to talk)

Su walks away…😭

Ra: kya yaar sumit tum to serious hogaye…mere behan ko sataney ki to tumhe saza dehnee parege…(chuckles to himself) 😆

Kk goes to su

Kk: sumit tumne bhaiya se baat ki naa? 😊

Su: shakes his head…nahi…kumkum mujhse yeh nahi hoga…tum neh nahi dehka unki aankhon mein kitne umeed thi…mujse nahi hoga 😒

Kk: (shocked to hear this)😲 yeh tum kya keh rahe ho!

Su: (looks into her eyes and then looks away) nahi hoga…mujse! (sighs)

Kk: (pulls his arm so that he faces her…getting angry) 😡 to pyar hi kyun kiya tah mujse!!!...keh nahi sakhtey 😡…sumit agar pyar kiya hai tumne to kabool karo ussey…itne ahsaani se ussey jaane mutt do 😭

Su: (put his hands on her face to calm her down) kumkum yakeen mano mera mein kehna chahta hoon magar keh nahi pahra 😔

Kk: (removes his hands from her face and holds them) please sumit tum kehdo…bhaiya maan lehngey tumhare baat…please

Su: (not knowing what to do) kumkum mujhe soch ne key liye tora waqt do…

He walks off…kk wipes her tears

Kk: mujhe yakeen hai tum kaho gaye…zaroor kahoge!!!

Su goes back to the hotel, whilst the others spend the day out…kk stays with them but doesn't enjoy herself she is only thinking about if su will tell rahul. Its evening now and all return to the hotel…they freshen up and get ready for dinner…

Kk: main sumit ko bulati hoon!

She knocks on his door but he doesn't answer…she knows he's there so goes in. Su is lying on his bed. Kk goes and sits next to him.

Kk: sumit…(he doesn't answer her)…touches his shoulder…softly…mein jaante hoon tum so nahi rahe 😊

Su: (turns towards her…his eyes are numb) kya hua?

Kk: (becomes sad on seeing him like that so doesn't ask him about it) 😔 sub khaney pey hamare liye wait kar rahein hai

Su: tum jao mein aata hoon 😕 (kk knows he won't come)

Kk: saath nahi chaloge? 😳

Su: (knows what she really means by that) nods slowly.

Su-kk sit down to dinner with every1…

Ra: hey mein aap sub ko ek good news sunana bhool gaya…😛

Kul: to jaaldi batao naa beta…kya baat hai? 😊

Ra: (looks at su) bata doon inhe bhi? 😉

Su: (looks away…not wanting to answer) 😭

Ra: to good news yeh hai key…maine aapne pyare si kk keh liya ladka pasand kar liya hai.

Kk: (looking shocked to actually hear it from rahul himself) 😲

Su: (trying his best to control his emotions) 😡 😭 😕 😡

Ak: wow papa!...to kya ab didi ki shaadi hogee? 😃

Ra: (smiles)😊 haan hogee…lehkin sirf ek insaan ki razamundi chahiye…😉

Every1 looks at kk but rahul looks at su. Su-kk look at each other 😔

Su: (getting extremely angry at himself for being so helpless 😡 😡 😡)

Pr: hum kitne doom dam se kk ki shaadi kareinge 😃

Kul: haan haan kyun nahi 😊

Ve: wah rahul…kitne ache news sunahi hai…sub ka moo meetha karna chahiye 😆

They carry on talking about their grand plans…kumkum is almost in tears 😭 (looking desperately at su)…sumit sees this and finally explodes with anger 😵 😵 😵

Su: YEH SHAADI NAHIN HOGEY 😡…BILKUL NAHI 😡… KABHI NAHI 😡…KYUNKI MEIN KUMKUM SE PYAR KARTA HOON 😡 😡…KUMKUM SIRF MERE HAI 😡…SUN LIYA AAP SUB NEY!!! 😡 (finally getting a grip on himself he pushes his chair and leaves)

Kk: (staring at everyone to see their response) 😲

They all start laughing and congratulating each other…

Kk: (is just shocked) Bhabi?...Bhaiya? 😕

Pr: shaadi mubarak ho kk!...hum bus sumit ka kehne ka intazaar kar rehe tey 😆

Kk: (overjoyed) such bhaiya? 😳

Ra: Haan…kya hum nahi jaante humare behna ki pasand kya hai? 😉

Kk: oh bhaiya …I luv you! (she runs and hugs him) 😃

Ve: ab jakar aapne dulhe ko bhi mana leh! 😆 😆 😆

They all laugh...

ok guyz dats it for now!!! njoy and plz do comment!!! thanks! 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
firstly thanks a lot for liking my write up.....................
okk baba i m not angry with anyone.....happy...........

gr8 write ups hina and amrit.......... 👏 ...............lovely superb okkkkkkkkkkkkkkk my turn nowwww
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Posted: 18 years ago
su has gone in the garden and is furious.......and then he realizes that he has left kk alone with everyone....

su: oh god mujhe kk ko is tarah se akele chod kar nahi aana chahiye tha ........pata nahi sab log usse kya kya poochenge aur main........ekdum idiot hoon main.....

he then turns to go back and sees kk running towards her...
she comes and hugs him tightly..su thinks that everyone has rejected their relation and so she is very sad.

su:kk tum chinta mat karo main tumhara saath kabhi nahi chodunga .......kabhi nahi chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye.......i luv u.......

kk realizes that he has not heard anything........

she says: tum sach mein mera saath doge naa.....
su:haan....
kk(shyly) : to phir kab laa rahe ho baarat mere ghar.......
su:kk par sab log........
kk:sab maan gaye hain in fact unhe pehle se hi sab kuch pata tha woh to tumhare munh se yeh sab kuch sunna chahte the.......
su:kya???????

from back rahul comes and says : haan su main to tuhe pehle se hi pasand karta tha bas tumhare munh se yeh sachchai sunne ki der thi...........

su does not know what to say.......he is very happy.....

ra:to bolo doge meri behen ka saath........
su looks at kk and says.......:haan hamesha.......

***** flashback ends..........
su thinking and has tears in his eyes.......:mujhe maaf kar dena kk main apna waada pura nahi kar saka.......main majboor hoon plz mujhe maaf kar do balki tum apni zindagi naye sire se shuru kar lo..........

cont guys now.......... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
wowwwwwwwwww!!! Great write ups!! Really loved it!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
its niceeeeeeee but langauge is baddddddddd,..........they hav typed a lot of mistakes in wordsssssssss..............
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Posted: 18 years ago
*****flashback ends*****
sumit to himself - kaash main apna waada nibha pata..kaash meri zindagi mujhe waapas mil jaati..kaash kk meri ho pati
he cuddles up in the bed n with tears in his eyes..fell asleep

kk on the other hand has been slept dreaming about sumit

the next day..kk with all her friends goes back to his house

every1 is tensed but tries to cheer kk
pr - are kk tum aa gayi..kaisi rahi tumhari journey..maza aaya
kk with a low voice - jee
and she goes straight to her room
pr - akhir kya dushmani thi bhagwan ki hamare saath jo aaj yeh sab dekhna pad raha hai..kk se kya galti ho gayi jo sumit ne...
rahul shouts - mat lo us insaan ka naam...usi ki wajah se aaj kk ki yeh haalat hai..uski is harkat k liye main use kabhi maaf nahin karoonga..kabhi nahin..aur is ghar mein koi bhi uska jiqar tak nahin karega...
he goes violently to his office

kk standing on the stairs hear everything
priya looks at kk..she goes to her room crying
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she locks the door and cried alot...
kk - kyun..kyun tumne aisa kiya sumit...kyun...agar tumhari koi majboori thi to tum mujhe bata sakte the na 😭 😭

sumit n the other hand..visits doctor vikram 😉 for his routine check up
su - kya koi improvement hai doctor
dr - nahin..bilkul nahin
su broke out into tears....
su - kitna waqt hai mere paas...
dr - 2 months
su controls himself
dr - agar tum operation kar wa lo to ho sakta hai tum bach jayo...tumhari jaan bach sakti hai...
su - nahin..main apni zindagi ka baki samaa apne pariwaar k saath bitaana chahta hoon
and he wents from there

he sits in his car and thinks
su - abhi mujhe bahut kuch karna hai...mummy papa ko sambhalna hai...rishi (his younger brother) ko responsible banana hai..aur kk...kk ki khushiyon ko waapas karna hai...main to uska saath zindagi bhar nahin nibha sakta lekin koi aur hai jo tumhe hamesha khush rakhega...VISHAL....he plans kk marriage with vishal

this song plays in the background 4 sumit

'tere bin main yun kaise jiya
kaise jiya tere bin

lekar yaad teri raaten meri kati - 2
mujhse baaten teri karti hai chaandani
tanha hai tujh bin raaten meri
din mere din ke jaise nahi
tanha badan tanha hai ruh nam meri aankhen rahe
aaja mere ab rubaru
jeena nahi bin tere..

tere bin main yun kaise jiya
kaise jiya tere bin

kk in her room still n motionless
the remaining part of the song plays 4 kk

'kabse aankhen meri raah mein tere bichhi - 2
bhule se hi kahi tu mil jaaye kabhi
bhule na mujhse baaten teri
bheegi hai har pal aankhen meri 😭
kyun saans loon kyun main jiyu
jeena bura sa lage
kyun ho gaya tu bewafaaa mujhko bata de wajah
tere bin main yun kaise jiya
kaise jiya tere bin ...
tere bin main yun kaise jiya
kaise jiya tere bin ...'

read the lyrics of the song again..they r just awesum 😊

both helplessly crying n crying....
sumit is determined that he will create circumstances in which kk n rahul will like vishal...

now u write sumthing..i need to think right now about the cuming track 😆 😆

Edited by amrit23 - 18 years ago

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