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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Henna. Both the parts were really nice!!! Good and keep going.
Hey hunz what is your name btw if you dont mind me asking thank you i am glad you liked them.

Inbetween henna - If you can state the date or the part number in the title it will be easy for us to know when u update a new part.
ok i will do that i never released i didnt put that in thanks for reminding me hunz.
Looking forward for the next part
thanks i am updating next part today.
Love Henna xx

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey everyone how r u all today well sorry for updating late but I had exams 😃 thank god there over now. Thanks for liking the last parts and leaving your comments here is the next part hope i didnt disapoint you all here is the next part will be waiting for your comments.

Recap: Kumkum is excited that she made Sumit say sorry to her best friend Heer but she vows to teach him a lesson. Meanwhile Sumit is angry with his best friend raj and rohan for making him apologise to Miss attitude and crew and he is planning to take revenge on them it ends on his face with an evil smile.

Part 4

The following morning before classes began at East High Collage:

Heer: Chalo Kumkum, Preeti. Acha hua aj hum time per reach kia muje laga hum phir se late hogate aur wo karoos teacher phir se danta tu or tera makeup Kumkum kitna time lagata hain.

Kumkum: Yeah tu thik nahi kare hai Heer 😡 kal toh meri waja se nahi us idiot Sumit ke waja se. hmm uska nam lekar mujhe kitna gusa ata hai hes a Jerk 😡 Aj tu dekh main use maza chakhaa ke hi rahungi warna mera nam be Kumkum nahi.

Heer: Choda na Kumkum tub hi subah subah kitna gusa karte hai jo be hua hai use bool ja or aj ka din has ke shuru kar.😊

Kumkum: (thinking to herself) let me agree with Heer ya phir se yeah madam mujhe lecture sai ya galt ke beech mai dena shuru karde ge jaise Dadima karte hain.😆 I will think of a solid prrof plan later.

Kumkum: agar yeah mere pyarii se dost ki wish hain main nah taal sakti ab tu kush hai na.😛

Heer: Akal ki bhat phele dafa tune ki hai mah bahut kush ho.

Around that time Sumit, Raj and rohan reach the collage and this is how the conversation between them go while Sumit is parking the car.

Sumit: You better watch out Sidekick tumne Sumit Raichand se pangaa lekar acha nahi kiya main tume sabak saka ke raho ga.😡

Raj: Leave it Sumit man mere khatir tu kuch na karega (he makes a Puppy dog face)

Sumit: Are yaar ise maine dosti kyuin ki ab agar maine yeah nahi ka main sab kuch bool jao ga yeah phir se stupid jaisa sad face bane ga.

Sumit to Raj: Hmm I have forgotten about it but only for your sake yaara akar dosti ki to nibhani pare ge.😊

Raj: this is the spirit my friend.😊

Later on in the day Sumit was on his phone talking to his girlfriend making plans to go out in the evening after he is done with stupid collage (He has too many gf as he changes them every day he also lost track in counting)

Sumit: babes what time you want me to pick you up then.

Girl friend: Sumit you have to promise me that you will pick me up sharp at 4:30 na otherwise I won't come I don't want to get clocked by my parents.😃

Sumit: Acha tum ase he darte ho I shall be there prompt at 4:15.

Girlfriend: Acha lecture mat daine I will be waiting for you see you.

Sumit to Raj and Rohan: Yaara Raj, Rohan i am going to leave from collage sharp 3:45 so be ready otherwise I will be late in Picking Shonali up that never happens but be ready to leave by then or you guys can make your own way home.

Raj: Theek hai me and Rohan will meet you at the car park then Sumit.

The three guys weren't aware that someone else also had listened to their conversation it was none other than our bubbly Kumkum

Kumkum( talking to herself in her mind): Acha hua main ya thi aur inke bate sunli hai ab maza aye ga jab main is Sumit ke bache ko acha sabak sako ge ab pata chale ga Kumkum Mishra se paanga lana kya hota hain😡. She has a smirk on her face and leaves from there.

Around 3:30 all of Sumits classes are finished he says goodbye to his mates and leaves to go to the parking area when he reaches there he is left stunned 😲😲 all four of his car tyres were punchered

Raj and rohan reach their few minutes after and they see a angry scowl on Sumits face and decide to ask him what happened.

Raj: Sumit yaara what happened I thought you wanted to leave early today why are you standing out here like an idiot.

Sumit: Apne bakwas ban kar Raj 😡 or car ko dekh

Raj and Rohan turn to look at the car and realizewhat has happened hmm yeah kasa hua sumit subah to sab theek tha or 1 nahi pura 4 tyres puchered hain.😕😕

Sumit: There's only one reason for this Raj and Rohan it is those sidekicks who have done this.

Raj and rohan: Sidekick tera kya matlab hai seeda seeda pata.😕

Sumit: Mere matlab hai yaara who ladki jisne us din😡

Raj: Samaj gaya jisne tuje sorry bolne phar majboor kiya (both raj and rohan were chuckling) 🤣🤣 Wow I love that girl she is mind-blowing man.😃

Sumit really annoyed now 😡 Raj tera damage theek hai na tu use mind blowing ka ra hai seriously tuje doctor need hain.🤢

Raj: 😆😆 ok I am sorry yaara leave this for a moment and call the mechanic or your Shonali will be hurt or tumse bath nahi karege

Sumit: tum thik kare ho main bad main us sidekick ko theek karo ga.

Sumit then rings the mechanic up to fix the problem he reaches outside there collage sharp at 4:00

Sumit to the mechanic: please Mr jaldi karna maine 30:minutes maina reach karna hai keedar I will pay you triple.

Mechanic: Jee main pure khohish karo ga.😊

Because all four of the tyres are punchered it is talking the mechanic longer than usual and Sumit is really pissed off now 😡 he is about to take his anger out on the mechanic but his phone rings in that process. It's Shonali.

Shonali: Sumit you liar 😡 you said you will reach outside at 4:15 and its 4:50 now where are you.

Sumit: Chill out Babes I will be there in 10 minutes.

Shonali: I am sorry babes but I won't be able to go out with you now it's going to be too late I need to reach home my parents will be waiting.

Sumit: Mere baat suno Shonali I said I will be there means I will.

Shonali: sorry Sumit mere majboori samjo I really cant she hangs up the phone after saying this.

Raj and Rohan: Kya hua Sumit tere wo Shonali wait kare hai na.😊

Sumit: Waiting, my foot. She's leaving says she needs to be home her parents are waiting for her Omg us Side kick ki wajhe se aj mere date ne mujhe mana kiya 😡😡 who be muje Sumit Raichand ko I hate the word no 😡😡 and in my whole life no girl has ever said that to me I am the only one who has that right Jeez oh I hate that Sidekick she has messed all my plans up ab usko sabak saka khai raho ga. (. He was so angry that his blood was boiling up at this point)😡😡

On the other hand Kumkum is listening to their conversation and having fun thinking that her plan worked and she took her revenge in a Jolly mood 😆😆 she goes home and is looking forward for the following day as she wants to see Sumits reaction.

The following morning Kumkum and Heer were walking down the corridor (Preeti was of as she wasn't feeling too well) when Kumkum sees Sumit and he has seen her as well on seeing her face his blood boils up and anger comes back.

Sumit to Kumkum: Sidekick jo tumne yesterday kiya acha nahi kiya ku ke Sumit Raichand se pangaa lekar tume pashtawa zaroor hoga so wait and watch

Kumkum: (in sarcastic tone) really I will wait and see she pulled her tongue out in the process.

Sumit and his mates walk off from there

Meanwhile a confused Heer is standing there isne Kumkum se asa kyuin kha zaroor iske masti hoge turns towards Kumkum did you have anything to do with this madam or sach bolna muje.

Kumkum :(Laughing) tells Heer what happened yesterday in mute. Hmm did you like my work then?

Heer: coudnt help but smile her friend was a genius well what can I say it is really hilarious wish I was there at the scene to see that Sumits face but Kumkum maine tuje mana kiya tha use paanga layne se.

Kumkum: Dont worry who Kumkum Mishra ka Kuch nahi bigad sakta you just take a Chill \Pill and enjoy sweety.

Heer: Tuje kaun mana kare har waqt apne masti karte reti hain kit ne bare hoge hai ab class kay liya cholo warne late hoga ge.

Kumkum: Chal warna who Kharoos teacher phir se danta ga.

Later on in the day Kumkum was sitting in the Lunch hall eating and waiting for Heer to come when one of her class mates approach her and gives her a message that Heer is waiting for her in the Computer labs Kumkum thanks the girl and thinks to herself yeh ladki hamesha kam he karte hain kabe be nahi chill kare ge she reaches the Computer suite and opens the door when suddenly.


Thats for today I will leave you in suspence 😆😆 will be wating for your comments
Love Henna xx
Edited by robbiekasturi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey hun I am sorry for update my comment SO LATE actually last week was REALLY hard for me personally and professionally hehe...I loved this part hun...AMAZING JOB you just keep getting better and better...WOW Sumit is really SPOILED hehe chalo let's hope Kumkum makes him better...I am SURE too kay computer lab mein woh hi hoga...Hun I am sorry my comment is short today because aaj tabiyaat kuch theek nahin but I promise mera next comment better hoga...PLEASE update SOON
Luv Alwayz Sahar😳
Edited by Sahar18 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Henna for the update. By the way, i'm Arya.

I'm sure Its Sumit in the computer room:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
amazingggggggg part dear..totally loved it
it was really nice....really enjoyed reading it

i like their challenges....its too good
but i am hating the way su is spoiled
and have soooooooooooo many GFs...
i can't see su with someone else except kumkum
and i can't even imagine su with someone else...
so plzzzzzzzzzzz dear jaldi se sukk ka love start kar do

and i liked kk ne su ki all four wheels ko puncher kar dia
it was a mean thing to do...but i enjoyed that part
and omg at that su sounded very angry
wonder what su will do take revenge from kumkum
and i like the name he gave kk sidekick..hmm its a nice name
i have a feeling ke su hi hoga computer lab...and woh waha
kk se revenge lene ke iradah se gaya hai
ohhhhhhhhhhhh pata nahiin kia hoga

well now ab jaldi se new part likhna
can't wait to know what is the suspence

love afreen
🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It's nice 2 c Su in a very different role..................I'm sure it's Su only .............ab kk kya karegi.................kk will only change Su 2 become a better person.........4 sure .................waiting 4 the next update...............continue soooooonnnnnnn........................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😃Hey Henna! :D


Welcome to The Kumkum forum! :D u will luv it here as much as i do...bcuz not onli is it realli fun , but the pplz hre r vry freindly adn evry1 gets along! :D
Hope u Have a rocking tym on dis forum! :D
Now...as da welcoming part is done..let me itro my slef! :D im Sadiya! u can just call me sadz or sadi...dats wat evry1 calls me! :P😛
👏👏Your FF is Simply Amazing!👏👏
I have so far onli read ur Intro..which was amazing..yet a lil shocking..hai rabba! my sumit is bad? tauba tauba! besharam badmaash ladka! lolz i hope kumkum chnges him when dey meet! :D im realli luking fwd 2 reading ur prts..im gonna read as soon as i finsh posting dis! lolz...N its gr8 2 c dadima n dadaji hre! :D n cool..robbie n kasturi also hre...karan is realli cute! :D n kumkum dsnt hve any aprents? awww..so dats y mayb shes realli luvign cuz she grew up surrounded by luv unlyk sumit..who ahs parents yet dey neglect him! :( poor baby!
so da raichand parents r not gud..just lyk in da show..i also h8 business dad in da show(BTW...buisness dad is omi..just call him dat)..but even omi seems sumwat of a gud person if u compare him 2 dis anuraag! hmmm..realli interesting n a realli diff avatar of sumit..1st tym seeing it so dis is gonan b even better! :D n oh yes..how can i 4get...
ThnxQ sooo much 4 opening dis FF..as sahar said..a grnd way 2 mke ur entry..but also..cuz dere r not mny FF's in dis forum...and i LUVVV FF's! so thnx soo much..sicne da show is ending n im not in gud mood..ur FF as well as others..its sure 2 mke my mood better! :D luv u 4 dat! <3 😳😃
XOXO
SADI<3
Edited by ArmaansGirl - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Heyz swty,
part 1:
Nyc way 2 begin da FF!👏 :D kumkum is realli a nnyc person we can totally tell dat n dat she is a person w/ sanskar,izzat n luv! <3 just lyk herself in KUMKUM! :D😃
dats gud 2 kno..lekin..sumit! :( yeh kya...partying all nyt? sleeping @ 4? cnt say anytihng bout sleeping @ 4 as i do dat evryday..as a matter of fact..its 3 in da morn ryt now! :P 😆lekin i dnt party..i wtch Kumkum! :D😆 lekin kitna bigda huva hai mera sumit..n wat ignorant parents he has! a kitty party in da morn? OMG! lolz..breakfeast party huh? weird lady!
"Prena: ap se kise ne poocha hain ap is gahr main kam karte hain
tho ap dakhal andazi ghar ke mamlo main nahi de to acha hoga she said really rudely."
WHOA! NOW DAT WAS RUDE RUDE RUDE! idiotic women! batmeez aurat..koi bade se aisi tarha se baat karta? family ho ya na ho..aur rishte khoon se nahin..pyar se bante hain!😃👏 lekin ye kya samjhegi? uskko to sirf paiso ki padi hain! 😡😡🤢


"Daima stood there with tears rolling down her eyes this was a normal day at
the Raichand household Started with arguments in the morning ended with arguments
in the night she coudnt change this situation but what went wrong she thought Prena
never bothered with the kids she tried to give them good values and manners bought
them up like her own children even they weren't her flesh
and blood still they went astray something must be wrong with her parvish."

dat was vry emotional yaar..! sniff😭 poor daima..i feel realli bad 4 her..! yeh sumit bhi na! kitna kharaab hain yahan! bohat alag mehsoos horaha hain mujhe sumit ko aise roop mein dekh kar! ek jaanwar ka roop yaar sach mein! lolz
ayrr kiss ne kaha ke tumhari hindi achi nahin hain? its absollutyly fyn yaara...dnt wrri bout it..! :D 😃 amazing and vry intersting part! :D😃👏

part2 n 3

ek aur myndblwing part! :D u shock me again! lolz sumit aur uska attitude aur batmaeeze..mujhe to mann karrha hain ke usko ek thappad maroon! uuff kya hogaya hain iss ladke ko...kya hoga uska? sigh😆
"He says: hmm madam do you know who you are talking to I don't give damn shit whoever you are. My name is Raichand Sumit Raichand."
^^^^ whoa wat aaattitude! :P lolz batameez! :( kya samajhta hain apne aap ko? lolz..still lluv him though!

lolz when kumkum shows him how 2 say srri,..its realli funni! kumkum sure alwyz fives sumti a run 4 his attitude! :p n sumit! haii..yeh ladka hain ya kya? kitna batmeez hain! tauba! hai rabba! :( mera bachu ko kitna bigaad diya hain
un anuraag aur prena ne! ufff....n sumit! mera sumit?tlking bout middle class lyk dat? OMG! :( uh-uh..dis aint gud..ab to kuch karna padega kumkum ko...sabak sikhaon kumkum iss bachu ko! :D😆

"Rohan: Nahi Sumit I am not talking anyone's side but I am just telling you what I saw with my
own eyes and it was your fault yaar and mafi magne se koi chota ya bare nahi hoga ta aur
Jo maf kardata hai uska dil sab se bhara hota hai. You can do this at least for me yaar. (He makes a cute face which no one could resisit) "

^^^^^^^ awww im realli lyking rohan..now he sounds sum1 who kumkum will agree w/..n him w/ kumkum! :D i lyk him! gud 2 kno dat sumit has a gud n positive friend @least!😃 :( lets hope dere is no girl involved though!😡🤢 yikes n yaar...even thoguh sumit is being airheaded n a snob ryt now😆😕..he sounds damn sexc😳😆..after all woh mera sumit hain! :P lolz sexcc to hoga hi! n oooof...revenge? yeh sumit bhi na...im just alreadi besabr 4 swt moments yaar! :( hehehe :p so jaldi se romntic part likhna😳..bohat intezaar mat karana..as im vry impatient! lolz :P 😆

part 4

OOOf! yeh sumit! kitna bigad gaya hain..jo sumit ek ladki ke upad aankh tak nahin uthata...usko to maloom hi nahin ke uski
kitni grilfriends hain? ooh gawd! now dats sumtihng i reall h8! n im detesting it! n when he said babes...i shuddered w/ disgust! :( yeh mera sumit bilkul nahin hain! i h8 h8h h8 da raichands 4 mking my sumit lyk dis! mujhe to rona agaya! :( 😭

"Raj: Samaj gaya jisne tuje sorry bolne phar majboor kiya
(both raj and rohan were chuckling) Wow I love that girl she is mind-blowing man."
^^^^^^^ lolz..funni friends😆..i lyk em! :D lolz..woh dono hi kumkum ka saath dege aage jakar sumit ko sudhar ne ke liye..its soo sad..sumit is soo dif.f..he parties n even DRINKS! :( yuck! lekin..kumkum! lolz...kya baat hain..tire punctuer huh? lolz
n sumit..raj ko doctor ki zaroorat nahin hain..lekin haan...tumko kumkum ki zaroor zaroorat hain! 😳😆lolz n haiiii! :P sumit actualli said "plz" 2 da mechanic? hmmm...lolz 😆 and im 100% sure dat its sumit in da comp lab...i can say dat w/ my eys closed..i mean w/ my mynd closed! :P 😆 its just lyk him 2 call her dere n dan scre her or sutmihng..hmmm..lets just hope b4 he does anytihng...dat dey both fall n hve an eyelock! sigh😳😆 okiez...ab jaldi se nex part likho! lolz..ab to tum phas gayi mere humari saath..aur mein tumhe chod ne wali nahin hoon! LOLZ😆 :P

XOXO
SADI<3
p.s - HAPPY HOLI! :D ..n yaar i hve a Q...is dere a certain tym of da year dat dey met? u kno? is ur FF tym also da sme as our normal day? lyk is it marchi n ur FF as well or no?? cuz if it is..dan i wnt 2 c a HOLI part! :P 😆
Edited by ArmaansGirl - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by Sahar18
Hey hun I am sorry for update my comment SO LATE actually last week was REALLY hard for me personally and professionally hehe...I loved this part hun...AMAZING JOB you just keep getting better and better...WOW Sumit is really SPOILED hehe chalo let's hope Kumkum makes him better...I am SURE too kay computer lab mein woh hi hoga...Hun I am sorry my comment is short today because aaj tabiyaat kuch theek nahin but I promise mera next comment better hoga...PLEASE update SOON
Luv Alwayz Sahar😳


Hey Sahar dont worry take your own time aww how r you feeling now hunz hope you get better soon, Thank you so much for your sweet comments they mean a lot to me dont worry if its short you still commented even though you were ill that means a lot to me hmm all i will say is read the next part to find out if your write I will be updating today. 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by coorg.japan
Thanks Henna for the update. By the way, i'm Arya.
No need to say thank you Arya, btw you got a sweet name.
I'm sure Its Sumit in the computer room:)
hmm maybe your write keep reading to find out i will be updating next part today 😃

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