FF Hote Hote Pyar Hogaya Imp Note Page 9 - Page 5

Originally posted by juhuti

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
amazingggggggg part dear..totally loved it
it was really nice....really enjoyed reading it
thank you so much afreen that is an really huge compliment for me I am glad you enjoyed reading it Hunz.
i like their challenges....its too good

😆😆 I am glad you liked them thanks.
but i am hating the way su is spoiled
and have soooooooooooo many GFs...

😆😆kumkum will make him good.
i can't see su with someone else except kumkum
and i can't even imagine su with someone else...
so plzzzzzzzzzzz dear jaldi se sukk ka love start kar do
dont worry just wait 2_3 more parts then one of them will start falling for the other one.
and i liked kk ne su ki all four wheels ko puncher kar dia
it was a mean thing to do...but i enjoyed that part

😆😆it wasnt very nice but at the end of the day she needed to teach him lesson in some sort of way.
and omg at that su sounded very angry

yup no one ever dared to play this sort of trick with him ever.
wonder what su will do take revenge from kumkum

just going to update the next part and you will find out
and i like the name he gave kk sidekick..hmm its a nice name

I am glad you liked the name it took me ages to come up with it lol.
i have a feeling ke su hi hoga computer lab...and woh waha
kk se revenge lene ke iradah se gaya hai
ohhhhhhhhhhhh pata nahiin kia hoga
hmm maybe you are write 😆😆
well now ab jaldi se new part likhna
can't wait to know what is the suspence
well i just finished writing the new part will post it up in few mins hope you like it. thanks for your sweet comments they mean a lot to me.
love afreen🤗

Originally posted by ArmaansGirl

Heyz swty,

Hey Hunz hw r u hope you r ok.

part 1:

Nyc way 2 begin da FF!👏 :D kumkum is realli a nnyc person we can totally tell dat n dat she is a person w/ sanskar,izzat n luv! <3 just lyk herself in KUMKUM! :D😃

yup i wanted to keep kumkums character the same sweet, caring, loving person who would do anything for her family thank you for liking my FF

dats gud 2 kno..lekin..sumit! :( yeh kya...partying all nyt? sleeping @ 4? cnt say anytihng bout sleeping @ 4 as i do dat evryday..as a matter of fact..its 3 in da morn ryt now! :P 😆lekin i dnt party..i wtch Kumkum! :D😆 lekin kitna bigda huva hai mera sumit..

lol i wanted to show him as a spoilt rich brat who partys all the time and sees nothing so when his character starts to change then you can see the difference. dont worry your sumit will change lol hehe i dont sleep till 3 myself but i be on you tube watching videos instead, that was something in common between us.

n wat ignorant parents he has! a kitty party in da morn? OMG! lolz..breakfeast party huh? weird lady!

yup she dosnt care about anybody always wants her kitty partys hehe breakfast party thats a funny way to put it actually.

"Prena: ap se kise ne poocha hain ap is gahr main kam karte hain
tho ap dakhal andazi ghar ke mamlo main nahi de to acha hoga she said really rudely."

WHOA! NOW DAT WAS RUDE RUDE RUDE! idiotic women! batmeez aurat..koi bade se aisi tarha se baat karta? family ho ya na ho..aur rishte khoon se nahin..pyar se bante hain!😃👏 lekin ye kya samjhegi? uskko to sirf paiso ki padi hain! 😡😡🤢

lol yup she dosnt know how to respect others either they are older or younger then her her ego is to big for that yup you should explain to her and your right rishte pyar se he hota hain. Like here on the kumkum forum everyone made a pyara sa rishta with each other.

"Daima stood there with tears rolling down her eyes this was a normal day at
the Raichand household Started with arguments in the morning ended with arguments
in the night she coudnt change this situation but what went wrong she thought Prena
never bothered with the kids she tried to give them good values and manners bought
them up like her own children even they weren't her flesh
and blood still they went astray something must be wrong with her parvish."

dat was vry emotional yaar..! sniff😭 poor daima..i feel realli bad 4 her..! yeh sumit bhi na! kitna kharaab hain yahan! bohat alag mehsoos horaha hain mujhe sumit ko aise roop mein dekh kar! ek jaanwar ka roop yaar sach mein! lolz

aww i amde you cry yaar sorry i just wanted to show her inner feeings. lolz you must be feeling different as you havnt seen sumit like this before but dont worry this janwar will turn into a human soon lolz.

ayrr kiss ne kaha ke tumhari hindi achi nahin hain? its absollutyly fyn yaara...dnt wrri bout it..! :D 😃 amazing and vry intersting part! :D😃👏

thank you my cuz are always saying to me my hindi is rubbish and not understandable so i was a bit worried glad you understood it. thanks for liking the part hunz and i am glad you liked it that means i was succesfull in doing a good job for that part.

part2 n 3

ek aur myndblwing part! :D u shock me again! lolz sumit aur uska attitude aur batmaeeze..mujhe to mann karrha hain ke usko ek thappad maroon! uuff kya hogaya hain iss ladke ko...kya hoga uska? sigh😆

aww thank you so much yaar your to swwet glad you liked the part. lolz hmm you wont be able to go and give him a thappad cause he is really cute.dont worry kumkum will somehow sort his attitude out.

"He says: hmm madam do you know who you are talking to I don't give damn shit whoever you are. My name is Raichand Sumit Raichand."
^^^^ whoa wat aaattitude! :P lolz batameez! :( kya samajhta hain apne aap ko? lolz..still lluv him though!

lolz actually part of dilouge inspired me from james bond do you remember when james bond goes my name is bond james bond. yup he is full of attitiude samajhta hain apne aap ko sumit raichand just kidding still you cant hate him.

lolz when kumkum shows him how 2 say srri,..its realli funni! kumkum sure alwyz fives sumti a run 4 his attitude! :p n sumit! haii..yeh ladka hain ya kya? kitna batmeez hain! tauba! hai rabba! :( mera bachu ko kitna bigaad diya hain
un anuraag aur prena ne! ufff....n sumit! mera sumit?tlking bout middle class lyk dat? OMG! :( uh-uh..dis aint gud..ab to kuch karna padega kumkum ko...sabak sikhaon kumkum iss bachu ko! :D😆

actually i found it funny myslef writing that part when he had to say sorry. yup prena and anuraag didnt bother teaching him manners or anything he just got money whenever he wanted and he wnet on the wrong path. 😆😆 he has no respect for nayone so he called her middle class just wait and see how kumkum will take her revenge.

"Rohan: Nahi Sumit I am not talking anyone's side but I am just telling you what I saw with my
own eyes and it was your fault yaar and mafi magne se koi chota ya bare nahi hoga ta aur
Jo maf kardata hai uska dil sab se bhara hota hai. You can do this at least for me yaar. (He makes a cute face which no one could resisit) "
^^^^^^^ awww im realli lyking rohan..now he sounds sum1 who kumkum will agree w/..n him w/ kumkum! :D i lyk him! gud 2 kno dat sumit has a gud n positive friend @least!😃 :( lets hope dere is no girl involved though!😡

yup rohan is postitive who always trys to show sumit the correct path. Obviously kumkum will agree with him as he isnt snobby or full of attitude. dont worry no girl can come between the two friends😃😃

🤢 yikes n yaar...even thoguh sumit is being airheaded n a snob ryt now😆😕..he sounds damn sexc😳😆..after all woh mera sumit hain! :P lolz sexcc to hoga hi! n oooof...revenge? yeh sumit bhi na...im just alreadi besabr 4 swt moments yaar! :( hehehe :p so jaldi se romntic part likhna😳..bohat intezaar mat karana..as im vry impatient! lolz :P 😆

😆😆 yaar you said so true even i agree with you sumit is so sexy and hot. 😆😆 i wont make you wait to long for romantic parts prob after 3_4 more parts. I am not to sure yet though😃

part 4

OOOf! yeh sumit! kitna bigad gaya hain..jo sumit ek ladki ke upad aankh tak nahin uthata...usko to maloom hi nahin ke uski
kitni grilfriends hain? ooh gawd! now dats sumtihng i reall h8! n im detesting it! n when he said babes...i shuddered w/ disgust! :( yeh mera sumit bilkul nahin hain! i h8 h8h h8 da raichands 4 mking my sumit lyk dis! mujhe to rona agaya! :( 😭

aww sorry for making you cry. even i felt bad writing that as i cant see sumit with anybody else but with a lot of effort i managed to do it and yup its the raichands upbringing that made him lyk this.

"Raj: Samaj gaya jisne tuje sorry bolne phar majboor kiya
(both raj and rohan were chuckling) Wow I love that girl she is mind-blowing man."
^^^^^^^ lolz..funni friends😆..i lyk em! :D lolz..woh dono hi kumkum ka saath dege aage jakar sumit ko sudhar ne ke liye..its soo sad..sumit is soo dif.f..he parties n even DRINKS! :( yuck! lekin..kumkum! lolz...kya baat hain..tire punctuer huh? lolz

😆😆i am glad you liked raj and rohan they play an important role in my FF and as you said they are supporting kumkum as they know there friend is wrong but has a big ego to admit it. soon sumit will learn whos right and wrong. glad you liked that part i thought that will be a funny way of kumkum taking revenge from sumit.
n sumit..raj ko doctor ki zaroorat nahin hain..lekin haan...tumko kumkum ki zaroor zaroorat hain! 😳😆

😆😆yup thats true.

lolz n haiiii! :P sumit actualli said "plz" 2 da mechanic? hmmm...lolz 😆

yep he did because afterall it was for his own good as he had to reach to pick his gf on tym 😆😆

and im 100% sure dat its sumit in da comp lab...i can say dat w/ my eys closed..i mean w/ my mynd closed! :P 😆 its just lyk him 2 call her dere n dan scre her or sutmihng..hmmm..lets just hope b4 he does anytihng...dat dey both fall n hve an eyelock! sigh😳😆 okiez...

maybe you are right but i am not going to give it away read on to find out lolz

ab jaldi se nex part likho! lolz..ab to tum phas gayi mere humari saath..aur mein tumhe chod ne wali nahin hoon! LOLZ😆 :P

😆😆 yeah sach bola tumne i have written the next part will post it in few mins hope you like it and i havnt disapointed you thanks for your sweet comments and encouragments hunz it will help me write better.😃😃

XOXO

SADI<3

p.s - HAPPY HOLI! :D ..n yaar i hve a Q...is dere a certain tym of da year dat dey met? u kno? is ur FF tym also da sme as our normal day? lyk is it march in ur FF as well or no?? cuz if it is..dan i wnt 2 c a HOLI part! :P 😆

Happy holi to you aswell hunz even it is a bit late but still. Actually i never really thought about that but it isnt the same tym as our normal day but i probs right a holi part later on.😃😃

Hey guys thanks for your comments even though Kumkum has ended. I thought I will still carry on with my FF and finish it. If you guys don't want me to carry on with my FF just let me know I will stop.

Part5

Sumit: how did you like my plan guys it was a solid proof one wasn't it didn't I tell you I will take my revenge on Side Kick.

Kumkum: (Shivering) her teeth were clattering she wasn't Able to get a single word out of her mouth tum tumne yeh acha nahi kiya mm main tumhe nahi chodungi.😡😡

Sumit: (making fun of her) tum mujhe nahi chodogi 😆😆 phle jao bhar and dekho how everyone will react to this situation.

Kumkum was wearing white trousers with a red dress on top because the water fell on top of her all her clothes were drenched and now her face, hands and body were all red.

Then all of a sudden the hallways started filling up with dozen of people who were all getting ready to go to their next class as the bell rang and lunch time was over. Kumkum steeped out of the classroom and everyone kept on staring at her in the hallway mocking and taunting her.

Guy1: lolz was it Holi today kisi nah hame nahi pataya

Girl1: Haan yaar aur aj Halloween bhi nahi hain aur hum sare dress hote.

Girl2: Gosh look at the way she is dressed did she come for collage or is she going to a circus.

Kumkum listens to all the people taunting and mocking her she couldn't take it anymore and runs to the girl's bathroom. As she enters inside the bathroom her eyes are flowing with tears and she spots Heer she runs towards her and hugs her tightly.

Heer: in a worried tone what happened Kumkum why are you crying tell me Kumkum, Kumkum.

Kumkum: (in a defeated tone) Heer woh us Sumit nah mere saath bhoat bura kiya and she starts telling full story of what happened with her.

Heer: in a worried tone no Kumkum yeah red tumhare upar oh no before she could complete her sentence she notices Kumkum shivering really badly she takes her dupata of and wraps it around Kumkum and takes her away with her.

The next day Sumit and his gang started walking down the hallway all his friends were congratulating him that his plan worked yesterday all of a sudden Sumit overhears an conversation between Heer, Preeti and another girl.

Girl: Heer, Preeti aj tum dhono akeli kaise aye ho where is Kumkum.

Heer (In a really depressed tone) wo bath actually yeah hain tune shaid suna hoga kal khaya uske saath hoa tha.

Girl: Oh yeah my Mate was telling me what Sumit Raichand did with Kumkum yesterday poor girl I feel sorry for her she must felt really humiliated no wonder she didn't come in today.

Heer: haan tum bilkul theek kare ho magar Kumkum hospital main hain.

Girl: What but why is she in hospital wo theek hain na.

Heer: actually Kumkum ko red colour suit nahi karta hain usko us colour se Allergy hain and tu jante hain yesterday kya hua hain uske waje se Anaphylaxis reaction(This is an allergy which occurs in peoples body e.g. Nut allergy color allergy etc) occurred in her body and she had to be taken to the hospital immediately.

Girl: Omg what are you saying poor girl is she alright.

Heer: Thank god she is better now agar hum usko waqt main hospital nahi lake jate then you never know what happened

Girl: I am really sorry Heer to hear about your friend and I hope Kumkum gets well really soon wish her from me.

Heer: Thanks I will pass your message on chalo bad mein milte hain. I better get going now.

As soon as Heer turns around she comes face to face with Sumit he looks at her questioningly with question in his eyes before he could say anything she gives him a disgusting look and walks away from the hallway.

Sumit is left speechless nothing came out of his mouth for the first time in his life he regretted for his own actions and he didn't know why.

Sumit (Thinking to himself) maybe I shouldn't have done this. I might have gone too far this time but I didn't mean to do this. No way Sumit why are you thinking all these things? What she did with you wasn't forgivable either but still what if something really did happen to her.

While he is lost in his own thoughts regretting his actions, Rohan comes over there looking at the dazed look on Sumits face he decides to ask.

Rohan: Hey yaara how r u whats up wiv ya yeh kya yaar tere muh main aj 12:00 kyuin baje we hain.

Sumit: nothing yaara I am abousoultly fine

Rohan: hmm wo to tere chare se pata lag rah hain come on Sumit you know as well as I do you can never hide anything from me so come on spill the beans.

Sumit: (in a hesitant tone) wo actually Rohan main tuje bata ta hoon (Sumit tells him everything that happened the following day.

Rohan: Sumit Omg yeh tune kya kiya bilkul acha nahi kiya. You humiliate the poor girl and she ended up in the hospital I didn't really expect this from you at all yaar.

Sumit: Rohan how was I suppose to know that she was going to be allergic to the colour I was just getting my own back on her.

Rohan: What did she do nothing major come on face the truth Sumit you have pure girlfriends so what if one of them cancelled your date that you had to do all this to that girl.

Sumit: (lost of words) I just

Before he could complete his sentence the hallway started to get crowded with students rushing to their next class. Rohan tells sumit they will talk about this matter later leaving a confused Sumit feeling confounded.

Later, during lunch that day, Sumit sits quietly in the cafeteria, wondering about everything that happened. Rohan soon comes there, and takes a seat. There is a strange silence between the two friends, as Rohan knows that Sumit regrets what he did, but he is too proud to admit that. The silence is broken by a group of girls passing by, who are gossiping about Kumkum.

Girl1: Kal dekha tumne lunch time main. Tuje main kya batao that girl was so cheap and downmarket. Mera matlab she was walking in the hallway looking like an idiot and not even ashamed of it. She looked so ewww.

Girl2: Aree aisa nahi kethe kise kay bare main anyways I heard she had an allergic reaction to the colour.

Girl3: Haan yeah theek kare hain wo hospital main hain what was the name ha Royal Infirmary her friends are sitting outside all alone I feel sorry for them Bechari wonder who they have messed with.

All the girls walk away and Sumit gives Rohan an apologetic look and says to him

Sumit: Rohan woh tu

Rohan: Dekh Sumit. Maine tujhse subah kaha na. I'm very disappointed in you. Suna tune, woh ladki kaise us Kumkum ka mazaak udaa rahi thi? I bet she isn't the only one. And there are many more people in the collage you're my best friend Sumit, and I really care about you, but what you did this time, I just never expected that. Woh bechari sirf teri wajah se hospital main hain na.

Sumit: Mere baath suno Rohan I swear I didn't mean to he wasn't just able to find the write sort of words that would express his feelings at that particular point. But rohan got the idea.

Rohan: Dont worry yaar I am not angry at all with you but just disappointed you have really let me down aur dai ma ka socha tu unko apni ma sai be zada saman deta hain agar unko pata chalega ki unke beta ne kya kiya hain tu soch unke dil main kya beethe ge.

These Particular words bring back the silent between the two friends they sit down for a while. Sumit is thinking and regretting about his actions. Soon the break is over and they head to their classes separate ways without saying much to each other.

Soon the bell rings and it was the end of the day Sumit heads towards his car and he finds a note attached to the window of his car and the following contains inside it.

"Sumit yaar don't wait for me I have something important to do and I will head towards my own house today as I will be late don't worry I am not mad or angry at you just a little disappointed in you see you 2morrow yaar

Rohan.

Reading the note left sumit in deep thoughts he was thinking to himself sorry rohan I really mean it I can disappoint anybody else and I don't damn care but not you as you are everything to me I just really hope we work something out between us soon and that Sidekick gets well soon oops mera mat lab Kumkum

Here is the 6^th part there wasn't much Kumkum but I wanted Sumit to realize his mistakes and I hope I haven't disappointed you guys and if anybody has any ideas or suggestions they want me to include just tell me. Feel free to criticize and don't forget to leave your comments to tell me how the part was.