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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW👏👏👏...yaara your part 1 was GREAT and SAD...Mujhse Sumit ki takleef dekhi nahin jaati naa😭😭😭...I have a feeling I am not going to like Prena and Anuraag😡😡😡...Anyways I like Kumkum's character she sounds funny...Can't wait to find out more about her and Sumit😃😃😃...Oh I would like to read a party boy image of Sumit hehe😆😆😆...Acha Henna never say that your hindi is not good...Hun it is PERFECT👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...Acha PLEASE UPDATE SOON ab toh aur curiosity ho rahi hai that what will happen at the college...Oh btw I am happy you are reading my ff...I would love to read all your comments and I AM SURE they are not stupid😃😃😃...Aur also I AM SURE about another thing...we will become good friends yaara...itni similarities hain hum dunno mein already so we will get along just FINE hehe😆😆😆
Luv Alwayz Sahar😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good one ya. And your hindi is also good. So don't worry aboy=ut that part.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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will read soon and comment
abhi mujhe thora waqt do is
kk ki shocking news ko accept karne ke liye
and i have exams...so after exam i will sure read and comment

love afreen
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Posted: 16 years ago
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loved it completely.................very well written.............now will be waiting for more parts 2 be written & that too sooooooonnnnnnnn.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ Sahar18
WOW👏👏👏...yaara your part 1 was GREAT
Thank you so much thats a great compliement for me from a great FF writer like you
and SAD...Mujhse Sumit ki takleef dekhi nahin jaati naa😭😭😭...
hmm sorry i made you cry but dont worry I wont make him cry for long.
I have a feeling I am not going to like Prena and Anuraag😡😡😡...
he he yaara you probs wont because some ppl can never change.
Anyways I like Kumkum's character she sounds funny...Can't wait to find out more about her and Sumit😃😃😃...
thanks for liking her character yup she is really lively read on more to find out about them.
Oh I would like to read a party boy image of Sumit hehe😆😆😆...
lolz i thought of making his character different for a change yaara.
Acha Henna never say that your hindi is not good...Hun it is PERFECT👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼.
Thank you so much sahar i thought maybe you ppl woudnt understand it.
..Acha PLEASE UPDATE SOON ab toh aur curiosity ho rahi hai that what will happen at the college...
he he read on to find out and btw i have updated two parts today sorry for the late update was a bit busy with school work
Oh btw I am happy you are reading my ff...I would love to read all your comments and I AM SURE they are not stupid😃😃😃...
hmm i am in the middle of reading ur FF u can only decide if the comments are stupid or not after tommorow when i leave my comments lol.
Aur also I AM SURE about another thing...we will become good friends yaara...itni similarities hain hum dunno mein already so we will get along just FINE hehe😆😆😆
Yup we will yaara and i love making new friends glad i made you as a friend
Luv Alwayz Sahar 😳
Thanks for your sweet comments sahar they always bring a smile to my face and cheer me up when i am down.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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@coorg.japan
Good one ya. And your hindi is also good. So don't worry aboy=ut that part.
Thank you so much for liking my part I was just a bit worried incase you ppl didnt understand my Hindi glad you understood it just updated the next two parts
btw what is your name i forget to ask you.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ juhuti
will read soon and comment
Ok Yaar take your time
abhi mujhe thora waqt do is
kk ki shocking news ko accept karne ke liye
hmm it was shocking news indeed take your own time hunz i understand.
and i have exams...so after exam i will sure read and comment
pay attention to your exams they are more important then my ff, take your time hunz i will wait for you.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@Pearl29
loved it completely.................very well written.............now will be waiting for more parts 2 be written & that too sooooooonnnnnnnn.............
Thank you so much for your compliments hunz i have just updated now.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@Shafoo
wowowow amazingg part
Thank you so much Hunz I am glad you liked it.😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guy's thank you for all your comments, support and encouragement they mean a lot to me. Sorry for updating late I was a bit busy with my school work. So I have updated two parts to make it up to you guys enjoy and don't forget to leave your comments to tell me how the parts were as usual I will be waiting for them.

Part 2
Later on at East High collage
Kumkum: Jaldi chalo Heer, Preeti aj phela din hain and we are going to be late for our classes.
Heer: Kumkum tum hamesha se Ms. Punctuality hi rahogi

Preeti: pata hai you remind me of the rabbit in Alice in wonderland he always used to be in a hurry. Both of them chuckled at this joke.

Kumkum: Tum dono be na ab chalo lets hurry.

As they were rushing through the parking area to reach their campus they almost collided with a Black Mercedes Benz.

Kumkum: Aaah!! She screamed really loudly Dekh ke nahi apne car chala sakte kya? (Looking at Heers leg) Omg! Heer...is your leg alright let me see if it is fine (Heer has sprained her leg)

Heer: Ouch! She screamed in pain and agony Kumkum both dard ho raha hai.

Kumkum: Lagta hai tere pair main moch aye hai, tu mere saath chal (takes her to the side where there is a bench) tu yaha bhait. Preeti you stay with her. I am going to go and sort that idiot driver out She goes back to the Mercedes Benz whose driver has parked the car already and is just getting out of it.

Kumkum: Hey Mr I said, can't you see where you're going Andhe ho kya (are you blind) Mere friend ko kuch hogaya hota toh woh mar be ja sakti ti usko agar both zada fracture hoga ta phir kya mai karte Idiot.

The driver took his Givenchy Sunglasses off and looked at Kumkum with a constant smirk upon the face, and a whiffling activity of the body.

He says: hmm madam do you know who you are talking to I don't give damn shit whoever you are. My name is Raichand Sumit Raichand.

Kumkum: Haan haan I don't care who ever you are Mr. But there is nothing here that gives you the right to play with other people's emotions and do whatever you feel like (She grabs him by the arm and drags him towards where Heer was sitting on the bench) Now say sorry to my friend Heer usko tumhari waje se both dard utana para hai ab mera muh kya dekh rahe ho Mr. I said say sorry!!!!!!

Sumit: (Chuckling) Sorry and me madam hmm Shayad tum janti nahi ho main Sumit Raichand ho and I don't say sorry to anyone I have never learnt this type of word in my life and madam can you please leave my arm now (He pushes Kumkum hand away and starts to leave)

Kumkum: Hey Mr. Aik minute thero (She grabs him by the shoulder to stop him going) tumko sorry nahi karna ata hai koi bat naih main tume saka de ti ho. Apna muh ase karo and kaho sorry she said with a smirk.

Sumit (furious and Irritated by now) madam who do you think you are doing all this and speaking in this tone to me. No one ever spoke like this to me before and you expect me to say sorry to your friend I don't say sorry to middle class people and look at the way your friend is dressed jeez!!! Their argument carried on.

Meanwhile Heer got up limping and pulls Kumkum towards her and says chalo Kumkum chor Na yaar batameez ka muh nahi lago and anyways we are going to be late for class or tume bhot jaldi nahi ti time mein reach karne pe.

Kumkum: Kya Heer what are you talking about ha main he time par reach karna chati ho. Magar teri galti nahi thi aur jiski galti thi aj main usko tujse sorry dalake raho gi

While all this is happening two other guys are standing at the back and watching all this they were sitting in the car with sumit as well as they all travelled together its none other than rohan and raj they come forward and place their hand on sumits shoulder and

Rohan: Sumit yaar I will take the side of the truth and it was your fault say sorry to her and come on let's move on we are getting late we better get moving.

Sumit: With a shocked expression on his face.😲😲 Rohan, Raj you both are my best buddy's and you are supporting madam and her friend over here he said in a disgusted voice.

Rohan: Nahi Sumit I am not talking anyone's side but I am just telling you what I saw with my own eyes and it was your fault yaar and mafi magne se koi chota ya bare nahi hoga ta aur Jo maf kardata hai uska dil sab se bhara hota hai. You can do this at least for me yaar. (He makes a cute face which no one could resisit)

Sumit (Furious now) 😡😡 Fine I will do it only for your sake yaar but you have traited our friendship today he goes towards Heer and says I am sorry galti sirif meri ti muje maaf karde Before Heer could say anything he turns around and leaves from there talking rohan and raj with him.


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