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Hello everyone how r u all today I have been looking through the Kumkum forum but never really commented. I have recently joined India forums. It is a fabulous place to discuss shows. I have been reading Fan Fictions regularly and I love the way people write it takes a lot of guts to start something like this I have decided to start writing an FF on Sumit and Kumkum they are one of my favourite couples I hope everyone will support me throughout this FF I will update regularly If you guys are Interested in reading the story here is the character sketch if you don't like it just tell me Big smile In the story there are my favourite charaters combined together some of them are actually from the serial kumkum some of them arent

Prena Raichand Sumits Mum.
Anuraag Raichand Sumits dad
Priya Raichand (Sumits Sister)
Sumit Raichand
Daima Sumit and Priyas nanny
Dadaji Kumkum Grandad

Dadima Kumkum (Grandma)

Kumkum Mishra

Sneha Mishra (Sister)

Prem Mishra (Brother)
Rohan Singhaniya Sumit Best Friend
Raj Dixit (Sumits other Best Friend)
(Heer Maan Kumkums Best Friend)
Preeti Gupta (Kumkums other Best Friend)
Brief Description of Sumits Family

Anuraag: rich greedy business man has no time for his kids always hosting Business Party's, Thinks everything is part of a deal.

Prena: Obnoxious snobby woman who has no respect for others, loved going to parties, shopping hanging out with friends Neglects her kids completely.

Sumit: Currently at collage Studying Business Management spoilt brat doesn't care about anyone loves hanging out with his friends going clubbing, drinking, gone complete Astray.

Priya: Sumit little sister she is sweet and talkative little girl, her brother is like a friend for her as they have grown up together without anyone being there for them.

Daima: Sumit and Ganga nanny she has bought them up since they were little she loves them like her own kids, Blames herself she coudnt stop them going on the wrong direction.

Brief Description of Kumkum Family

Dadaji: Kumkum retired grandfather handed the family business over to his grandson loves his grandkids a lot had a tough time bringing them up after his son and daughter in law died several years back in a car accident.

Dadima: Kumkum grandmother an elderly sweet woman loves her grandkids a lot her ladli is Kumkum wants to see her marriage before she dies as she is suffering from cancer last stage.

Kumkum: Sweet bubbly girl loves her grandparents a lot can do anything for her family talks a lot which annoys everyone especially her brother prem.

Sneha: Kumkum little sister she is pampered by the family gets away with a lot of things.

Prem: Kumkum oldest brother runs the family household and business and provides for everyone.

Rohan and Raj: Sumits best friends they have grown up together from childhood really close to each other.

Heer and Preeti: Kumkums best friends they met in high school since then they have been really close share happiness and grief together.

These are the characters and the main description of them hope i get some response then i will post the first part soon Big smile

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Welcome to the Kumkum forum.
Really a nice way to start with. Loved the introduction.
@ Robbiekasturi (Sorry dont know ur real name) dont take me wrong. But there are lots of FF in this forum which is half done. Hope you'll give a regular update and it will be a treat for us.

Good luck. Would definetely like to see you moving here😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG Hun...Ok I have to tell you something first I joined the forum last December and the first thing I did was post a ff too...OMG you remind me of myself SO MUCH hehe😆😆😆...I mean maine bhi aise hi entry maari thi hehe...Acha bohut baatein hogayi...HENNA WELCOME TO KUMKUM FORUM...This is the BEST FORUM you will ever join...The people are SO NICE and AMAZING here...It is really a ❤️PYARA SA BANDHAN❤️...You will have A LOT OF FUN...Now about your ff...I LOVE IT SO MUCH...The intro is FABULOUS Hun...All I can say is I agree with Afreen and ab tu phaas gayi😆😆😆...We love SuKk ffs and now you will have to update regularly...Once again GREAT INTRO...Please update SOON...I am SURE your ff will be a GREAT ONE😃😃😃
Ufff apne apko introduce karna bhol hi gayi hehe...Anyways I am Sahar...I look forward to getting to know you better😃😃😃
Luv Alwayz Sahar🤗
Edited by KumkumisGR8 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi Henna
first of all
https://www.jellymuffin.com/images/welcome/images/1111111.gif

to the KUMKUM forum
the bestttttttttt forum of all
u will find such a cute, sweet, and lovely on this forum
u will have great fun here
well pehel introduction karte hai
btw i am afreen..........

Ok dear ab to aap phans gaye
kyunki yaha sab sukk ke deewane hai
aur woh bhi aapki entry ek sukk ff ke sath huwe
tab to aap phans gaye dear..........

hey the ff is really interesting
i am already fan of ur ff
so from now on u will have to update regular
nice intro...and loved all of the character
now waiting for the next part
do cont soon

love afreen🤗
Edited by juhuti - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wellcome in kumkum fourm i love your ff plzzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@coorg.japan
Welcome to the Kumkum forum.
Really a nice way to start with. Loved the introduction.
@ Robbiekasturi (Sorry dont know ur real name) dont take me wrong. But there are lots of FF in this forum which is half done. Hope you'll give a regular update and it will be a treat for us.

Good luck. Would definetely like to see you moving here😊
First of all thanks for the wonderfull Welcome Sweety, thanks for liking the Character Sketch of my FF, I wont take you wrong I know what you mean but dont worry I will be updating my FF regularly and will finish it till the end its my promise to you if you keep on reading and supporting me throughout thank you 😃

Btw my Name is Henna xxx what is your name

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Posted: 16 years ago
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@KumkumisGR8
Thank you so much for the lovely Welcome Hunz 😃 you really made me feel part of the Kumkum Family thanks Hunz.
OMG Hun...Ok I have to tell you something first I joined the forum last December and the first thing I did was post a ff too...OMG you remind me of myself SO MUCH hehe😆😆😆...I mean maine bhi aise hi entry maari thi hehe...
😲Really we have so much simlaritys between us then btw I am reading your FF Pyar to Hona hi ta (Hope i spelt that right) I will post my comments on each of the parts you will have to bear with my stupid comments 😆
Acha bohut baatein hogayi...HENNA WELCOME TO KUMKUM FORUM...This is the BEST FORUM you will ever join...The people are SO NICE and AMAZING here...It is really a ❤️PYARA SA BANDHAN❤️...You will have A LOT OF FUN...
Thanks once agian Hunz you really made me feel welcome I can tell how sweet and faboulous you guys here are 😃
Now about your ff...I LOVE IT SO MUCH...The intro is FABULOUS Hun...
Thank you so much Hunz for the compliment that also coming from a great FF writer like yourslef.😃
All I can say is I agree with Afreen and ab tu phaas gayi😆😆😆...We love SuKk ffs and now you will have to update regularly...Once again GREAT INTRO...Please update SOON...I am SURE your ff will be a
GREAT ONE😃😃😃
😆 Main to phaas gayi I will update regularly thats my promise to you if you keep on supporting me through this FF thanks again for your sweet comments. I have updated Part 1 do read and tell me how it was.
Ufff apne apko introduce karna bhol hi gayi hehe...Anyways I am Sahar...I look forward to getting to know you better😃😃😃
Luv Alwayz Sahar🤗
Nice to meet you Hunz you alrady know my name is henna 😆 I hope i get to know you better and we become good friends 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ juhuti
hi Henna
first of all
https://www.jellymuffin.com/images/welcome/images/1111111.gif
to the KUMKUM forum
the bestttttttttt forum of all
u will find such a cute, sweet, and lovely on this forum
u will have great fun here
Hey Afreen thanks for the lovely welcome you made me feel really special Hunz 😃
well pehel introduction karte hai
btw i am afreen..........
Hey Afreen you have got such a cute name I really love it 😳
Ok dear ab to aap phans gaye
kyunki yaha sab sukk ke deewane hai
aur woh bhi aapki entry ek sukk ff ke sath huwe
tab to aap phans gaye dear..........
😆Sukk to itne cute jodi hai to hum unke deewane he hain (Sorry for my broken Hindi Hunz it is really poor)😆😆 well I will update my FF on a regular basis if you all support me throughout this I wont hopefully let you down with my FF 😃😃

hey the ff is really interesting
i am already fan of ur ff
Thank you so much Hunz thats a big compliment for me
so from now on u will have to update regular
Yup I will update regularly and I have updated Part 1 do read and tell me how it was free to criticize 😆
nice intro...and loved all of the character
Thank you so much Hunz glad you liked it
now waiting for the next part
do cont soon
I have just Updated Part 1 Hunz do read and comment
love afreen
🤗
Hope to know you more better Hunz Henna xxx🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@Shafoo
wellcome in kumkum fourm i love your ff plzzz contuied soon
Thanks Hunz for the lovely welcome thanks for liking my FF i have updated Part 1 do read and tell me how it was
Love Henna xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part1

Here is the first part of my FF I hope you guys like it my Hindi is really poor forgive me if you dont understand it plz tell me I will do the translation in english next time will be waiting for your comments to see what you think of the part 😃😃
Monday Morning Mishra Household

Dadima (she was in Kumkum room trying to wake her up) Kumkum beta utjao tum late hog joaagi chalo beta tum kitne bare hoge ho phir be bacho jasi utana parta hain aj tumhara collage main first day hai or tume rasta be nahi maloom hoga.

Kumkum: yawning kitne baje hain?Dadima subah subah atare ho mera sar duk ra hain sone do muje tore dair aur.

Dadima: Jhooti 7:00 Baje hain uto or I will throw water on your face.

Kumkum: Kya Dadima 7:00 Bajge hain ap ne muje phele kyun nahi jagaye hai I will definitely be late now. She started gapping away.

Dadima: Ab apne bakwas ban kar jalde se ready hoga ya or late hoga ge

Kumkum: Acha Dadima main to sirif mazak kare thee acha main 10 minute mai ready ho kar ate hon.

Dadima: Acha baba jaldi kar.

After 20 minutes at the dining table in the Mishra Household.

Kumkum: Dadima I am ready now main collage kai liya nikil tee ho phele se he late ho.

Dadima: Acha yeah leah apna lunch or breakfast nahi karna aj

Kumkum: Nahi main phele se bhot late hoge ho or phir Heer or Preeti mere intezaar kare honge.

While saying all this Kumkum grabbed her lunch and rushed out of the house while Dadima still screaming after her.

Meanwhile in the Riachand household sumit, Rohan and Raj were snoring away they were partying all night and came in at 4:00 in the morning (Mostly after these all night party's Rohan and Raj stay with Sumit they don't bother going home)

(Daima in sumits room trying to wake him up) Sumit beta utjao tum late hogao ge collage ke liya or aj phele din hain holidays ke bad.

Sumit: Daima sone dona who cares if I am late or not after all I am Sumit raichand and can do whatever I like.

Daima: Ha muje patha hai magar tum apne Daima ke bath be nahi mane ga.

Sumit: You know Daima na I can do anything for you acha main utjata ho magar mere rep apke waja se karab hoga ge kyuin ke main jalde phon gao ga he said this while yawning and stretching his arms.

Daima: Main kush ho tumne mere bath mani hai ab jalde se ready hogo or apne dosto ko be uthado main breakfast ready karte ho.

While sumit and his friends got ready downstairs Daima was setting the breakfast table when Anuraag and Prena walked in.

Daima sumit ko utaya hai apne who phir aj collage bunk karege hamesha ke tara.

Daima: Anuraag Baba who ready hora hain.

Sumit and his friends came down to the dining table.

Sumit: Good morning pa ma

Anuraag: Good morning aj utge hai sabzade hamashe ke tara late collage jate ho or upper se classes nahi attend karte ho agar tumhare aik aur principle se shikyat ai muje main tumhe shoru ga naih tum mere izat mite main mila kar rahoge na.

Before Sumit could say anything Daima interrupted.

Daima: Anuraag Baba who bacha hain abhe sudar jai ga.

Prena: ap se kise ne poocha hain ap is gahr main kam karte hain tho ap dakhal andazi ghar ke mamlo main nahi de to acha hoga she said really rudely.

Sumit: magar ma Daima to hamare ghar kai member jasi hain na or unke pas hamare liya waqt hai ap ke jaise nahi

Anuraag: Tum bhot batameez hoge ho ag kal while telling sumit of he looked at his watch he was getting late for office.

Anuraag: Prena main chalta ho muje dair hore hai sham ko milenge while saying this he left the dining table.

Prena: main be chalte ho muje Kitty part attend karne hai she also walked away from there

Acha Daima main collage kai liya late hora ho hum chalte hain

Daima: magar Sumit beta breakfast kar ke jao

Sumit: Bhook mit gayae hain main chala

Daima stood there with tears rolling down her eyes this was a normal day at the Raichand household Started with arguments in the morning ended with arguments in the night she coudnt change this situation but what went wrong she thought Prena never bothered with the kids she tried to give them good values and manners bought them up like her own children even they weren't her flesh and blood still they went astray something must be wrong with her parvish.

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