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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 3

Kumkum: Dekha Kumkum ka kamal Maine usko sorry kaine me majboor kardiya hai. I always get my own way but don't worry Heer he was really rude and for that Kumkum will teach him a lesson and make him pay.

Heer: Still silent she didn't know what to say tumhari waja se nahi hoa hai madam usne sirif sorry apne dost kha khene pe bola hai.

Kumkum: To kya hoa bath aik he hai tum dono kuch bolte bhi nahi.

Heer: Hamari hise ki baathe tu jo karlete hai ab chal class ke liya late phele se hi hoga hain.

After the bad start to their First day of collage Kumkum, Heer and Preeti are finished with some of their morning classes and are walking around the campus looking for a place where they can sit.

Kumkum: Heer, Preeti she almost screamed how were your classes mine were fantastic I really enjoyed them kash hum theno phirse aik class main hote school ke Tara bhot zada bhate karte phir dadima KO teacher shakiyat karte. Yaad hain jab ham class main masti karte te aur teacher ne hamare shakiyat khe the aur us din dadima nahi asakte ti aur Prem bahiya aye the uno ne ham theno ko bhot shout kiya tha she keeps on blabbering on with herself recalling old memory's arre Heer, Preeti tum dono be kuch bolo na.

Heer: Hum dono ko ye sab yaad hai tere waja se hume hamasha daant parte tee aur jab tu chup karegi tab he hum dono bolege kuch tum hamesha se zada bolte hain tu mr men and little miss ke Miss Chatterbox hain then she suddenly screams ouch.

Kumkum: Kya hua tere pair hai na usme moch us waqt ai te tu yaha preeti ke saath ruk mai na us Sumit ko jo bhi uska naam hai use main nahi choorogi sabak sikhati hoon tu dekhna. How dare he hurts my Best friend then doesn't say a proper sorry even.

Heer (Laughing) you as well Kumkum what was the need to mess around with a senior aur woh bhi collage ke first day me. I hope he doesn't create any sort of problems for us lot now.

Kumkum: (Shocked) Senior how do you know that idiot is a senior.

Heer: Today in class I heard koi yeah kara tha did you see those girls in the morning they took panga with Sumit Raichand they are so stupid don't they know he is really popular and jo who khai sab karte hai he rules the collage. Now we need to wait and see how he gets his revenge on them.

Kumkum: Tum kam kha dare he hai main ho na Kumkum Mishra aur main be dekte ho yeah Sumit kya karta hai shayad isko maloom nahi hai ke panga lene main main be sab se age ho.

Preeti: Acha Dadima chal lets look somewhere to sit.

While all this is going on between the friends at the cafeteria Sumit, Rohan, Raj and a bunch of their other friends were sitting and eating while the other friends kept on making fun of Sumit how a freshman made him say sorry on the first day as well.

Sumit :( Furious) yeah sab rohan ki galti hai main us larki se kabi be mafi nahi manta agar is ne apna waada nahi diya hota.

Rohan: (Chuckling) Sumit kise ki waja se aj Teri rep karab hoi hai tu kabi be kis se Sorry nahi kheta tuje wo word khaine be nahi ata aj us ladki ki waja se tune apne galte ki waja se sorry be khana para aj to boht acha din hai jo baar baar nahi ata all the friends were laughing at this statment.

Sumit: Laugh how much you guys like but I am going to take my revenge one day on that girl and her middle class friend then you guys will see me laughing my heart out an evil smile appeared on his face.

This was Part 3 hope you guys liked it dont forget to leave your comments will be waiting for them
Love Henna 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Haila...OMG yeh kya hogaya yaara...Sumit aur Kumkum ki pehli mulaqaat itni dhamakeydar thi WOW😲😲😲...Mujhe paatha tha tu humain zaroor koi aisa hi surprise de gyi...Arre you know I LOVE SUMIT lekin abhi woh thoda snob hai but in a weird way he sounds really sexy hehe😆😆😆...Anyways I JUST LOVE KUMKUM😃😃😃...Now she is the girl who knows how to get what she wants...She is SO CARING too...Awww...Mujhe acha toh nahin laaga how Sumit called her middle class and was mean to her lekin main usey kuch keh bhi toh nahin saakthi naa main toh dunno ki side par hoon...GOOD main iss scene main nahin thi warna main toh phaas jati kyon ki I wouldn't know whose side to take hehe😆😆😆...Acha yaara I REALLY hope Sumit doesn't take revenge from CUTE KUMKUM...Mujhe toh waise yeh padhte hue heart attack agaya kay he is thinking about it...Socho agar usne kiya toh mera kya haal hoga hehe...I like your story because it's zaara haatke...Ab toh agle part ka intezaar rahe ga...OMG kya karne wala hai Sumit...Kumkum bhaag wahan se hehe😆😆😆...BTW THANKS SO MUCH for posting two parts...I am deewani of your ff already hehe😃😃😃...Arre yaara I AM SO HAPPY that my comments make you happy...Mujhe aur kya chahiye hehe...Aur after reading three parts of your ff I have to say tu BOHUT ACHI WRITER hai better than me...Hun main toh abhi seekh rahi hoon you started as a pro...OMG Henna you are a fast reader tune already almost mera ff padhe bhi liya WOW...Mujhe toh saal lageyein if I was in your place hehe😆😆😆...Ok I can't wait to read your comments kal main usi ka intezaar karoon gyi hehe...Acha PLEASE UPDATE SOON...lekin only if you are free and not busy with your studies...because hum students se zayaada kaun janta hai that study comes BEFORE anything...So take your time and I will be waiting for the next part...And sorry if my comment kuch zayaada lamba hogaya but I had A LOT TO SAY hehe
Luv Alwayz Sahar😳
Edited by Sahar18 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awwwwwwwwww Henna
thanks for being soo understandable
OMG!!!!!! two parts...i will read it soon
i have exams in this week
and next week i have a week off
so in mean time i will read ur ff..and will leave a lambaaaaaaaaa sa comment hehe
take care dear
love afreen🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago
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OK DEAR FINALLY I READ UR FF

for the part 1
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! totally loved it
its toooo good...i loved the dadima and kk talk
its really reminded of myself...meri bhi di mujhe college ke liye uthati rehti hai
aur main bas paanch min mein uth rahi hoon..keh kar so jati hoon😆
well its really nice.......
ok i am really hating that Prerna😡😡 and Anuraag😡😡
they r sooooooooo mean and rude
how can they disrespect Daima
jo hamare su ka itna khayaal rakhti hai
but i liked when su ne daima ka sath dia
he is sooooooo cute...and
PrAnu ko apne office and kitty party se to fursat hi nahiin hai
overall MAAZINGGGGGGG part
cant' wait to read the next part
and sorry for the late-late reply
love afreen🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg...omg..omg..amazing parts dear
mazah a gaya padh kar....totally loved it
loved the sukk little fight in the part two..
and i loved the way kk stand for her friend
and finally su says sorry for the sake of his friend
wow it was really nice and cute....
i hate su's parents who spoiled su
and now hope su will not do anything to take his revenge
or kia pata is revenge mein dono ko ishq ho jaye
wow can't wait to read the next part
do cont sooon
i am loving ur ff a lotttttttttttttttt

love afreen🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Henna. Both the parts were really nice!!! Good and keep going.

Inbetween henna - If you can state the date or the part number in the title it will be easy for us to know when u update a new part.

Looking forward for the next part

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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ Sahar18
Haila...OMG yeh kya hogaya yaara...Sumit aur Kumkum ki pehli mulaqaat itni dhamakeydar thi WOW😲😲😲...
he he i was succesfull in showing what i wanted to then thanks sahar for liking it.
Mujhe paatha tha tu humain zaroor koi aisa hi surprise de gyi...
omg really first i was thinking of sumit falling on top of kumkum then i thought na that always happens but i am glad you liked it.
Arre you know I LOVE SUMIT lekin abhi woh thoda snob hai but in a weird way he sounds really sexy hehe😆😆😆...
abhe wo snobby hai magar kumkum badal de ge hehe. wait and watch.
Anyways I JUST LOVE KUMKUM😃😃😃...Now she is the girl who knows how to get what she wants...She is SO CARING too...
yup i wanted to show her as a strong person who knows how to obtain what they want but at the same time a caring person aswell.
Awww...Mujhe acha toh nahin laaga how Sumit called her middle class and was mean to her lekin main usey kuch keh bhi toh nahin saakthi naa main toh dunno ki side par hoon...
hehe if you were at the scene you woudnt be able to sort it out then as you woudnt be able to take sides lol.
GOOD main iss scene main nahin thi warna main toh phaas jati kyon ki I wouldn't know whose side to take hehe😆😆😆...
exactly yaara then you will have to thik of a quick soloution lol.
Acha yaara I REALLY hope Sumit doesn't take revenge from CUTE KUMKUM...
hmm i hope that aswell cant reveal much keep reading to find out.
Mujhe toh waise yeh padhte hue heart attack agaya kay he is thinking about it...Socho agar usne kiya toh mera kya haal hoga hehe...
hehe i didnt mean to give you a heart attack i have to be carefull as i dont want anything to happen to my friend lol.
I like your story because it's zaara haatke...
aww thank you so much hunz i am glad you like it means i am succesfull in writing this FF
Ab toh agle part ka intezaar rahe ga...OMG kya karne wala hai Sumit...Kumkum bhaag wahan se hehe😆😆😆...
I am updating next part today when you read you will find out
BTW THANKS SO MUCH for posting two parts...I am deewani of your ff already hehe😃😃😃...
dont say thanks its my pleasure and i am glad you like my ff it means a lot to me.
Arre yaara I AM SO HAPPY that my comments make you happy...Mujhe aur kya chahiye hehe...
yup they do you always write sweet things.
Aur after reading three parts of your ff I have to say tu BOHUT ACHI WRITER hai better than me...Hun main toh abhi seekh rahi hoon you started as a pro...
omg that is such a huge compliment for me thank you so much hunz and you are a fab writer as well i love your writing
OMG Henna you are a fast reader tune already almost mera ff padhe bhi liya WOW...Mujhe toh saal lageyein if I was in your place hehe😆😆😆..
yep i am a fast reader because your FF was so great yaara that i was totally hooked to it and i read it on my IPod touch in the night.
Ok I can't wait to read your comments kal main usi ka intezaar karoon gyi hehe...
sorry for not commenting i had my final GCSE science exam and i wasnt on if few days.
Acha PLEASE UPDATE SOON...lekin only if you are free and not busy with your studies...because hum students se zayaada kaun janta hai that study comes BEFORE anything...So take your time and I will be waiting for the next part...
sorry for not updating I had my final science GCSE exam and was revising for that so now they are finished i am free and will update regularly. actually i am going to post next part today i nearly finsihed writing it.
And sorry if my comment kuch zayaada lamba hogaya but I had A LOT TO SAY hehe
dont say sorry i love reading your comments and hearing from you hunz. hw have you been lately.
Luv Alwayz Sahar😳
Luv you hunz Henna xx

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awwwwwwwwww Henna
thanks for being soo understandable
no need to say thanks hunz
OMG!!!!!! two parts...i will read it soon
take your own time hunz
i have exams in this week
examz are important and good luck hunz even though it might be a bit late sorry for that.
and next week i have a week off
so in mean time i will read ur ff..and will leave a lambaaaaaaaaa sa comment hehe
take your own time i will be waiting for your lamba comment lolz
take care dear
love afreen🤗
you take care of yourself aswell hunz love Henna xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ juhuti

OK DEAR FINALLY I READ UR FF

for the part 1
😆thanks for taking your time out and reading my ff hunz.
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! totally loved it
its toooo good...
Thank you so much for your sweet comments hunz
i loved the dadima and kk talk
its really reminded of myself...meri bhi di mujhe college ke liye uthati rehti hai
aur main bas paanch min mein uth rahi hoon..keh kar so jati hoon😆
😆 omg really i based that scene on myself. i cant wake up aswell expecially in the mornings and my mum threw a bucket of water on me once as she got really angry and annoyed
lol. i can imagine your di getting really annoyed give her this tip it will work lolz i guarantee you.
well its really nice.......
thank you so much afreen hunz
ok i am really hating that Prerna😡😡 and Anuraag😡😡
they r sooooooooo mean and rude
how can they disrespect Daima
jo hamare su ka itna khayaal rakhti hai
they still treat her like a servant and they are to snobby and mean to care about others feelings.
but i liked when su ne daima ka sath dia
he is sooooooo cute...
yup he is and plus she is the one who took care of him prena and anurag are to busy in there lives.
and
PrAnu ko apne office and kitty party se to fursat hi nahiin hai
yup anurag wants to make profit all the time and thinks everyone is part of his business deal and prena just wants to fit in with her crew and distant herself from her children.
overall MAAZINGGGGGGG part
cant' wait to read the next part
thank you so much i am glad you liked it
and sorry for the late-late reply
no need to be sorry hunz its ok
love afreen🤗
aww love u hunz henna xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg...omg..omg..amazing parts dear
mazah a gaya padh kar....totally loved it
thank you so much hunz thats a great compliment for me glad you enjoyed it
loved the sukk little fight in the part two..
hehe i am glad you liked it i was succesfull in creating that scene then.
and i loved the way kk stand for her friend
i wanted to show her really strong opposite nature between the friends.
and finally su says sorry for the sake of his friend
wow it was really nice and cute....
yup he had to afterall dosti ki to nibhani hai na
i hate su's parents who spoiled su
lol they didnt teach him difference between right and wrong.
and now hope su will not do anything to take his revenge
lol i cant reveal much read on to find out more
or kia pata is revenge mein dono ko ishq ho jaye
hmm maybe you are right
wow can't wait to read the next part
do cont sooon
i am going to update today as i was busy with my GCSE science exam but they are finsihed now. so i can update regularly
i am loving ur ff a lotttttttttttttttt
thank you so much afreen hunz i am glad you like it.
love afreen🤗

btw hunz i love your username

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