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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 4: Some SWEET and bitter Moments🤗😭

Now that it is evident that both couples won't be going to the Goa Field Trip because it is Saturday😭 and the deadline was Friday, they decide to move on and have some fun

Sumit calls Preeti and asks her to be ready at 4pm because he is taking her out

Preeti: Ok but this is kind of short notice mera metlab hai keh already toh 2 baj gaye hain😒

Sumit: Aap koh kitna waqt lagta hai ready hone mein I mean itna waqt apne face per lagati ho toh I am kind of scared to find out keh tum actual mein kaise dikthi ho😆

Preeti: ok BUS bohut ho gaya acha main tumhe kahaan milon

Sumit: Miss at our usual spot at the coffee shop

Preeti: Kab tak mujhe apni family se choopow gay patha hai for once I would like to ring your doorbell and say Hi main Sumit Wadwa ki girlfriend hoon woh kahan hai?😡

Sumit: It's too early

Preeti: 10 years is too early toh aap kab batain gay Sumit Wadwa jab humare baal grey ho jaye gay

Sumit: Well may be eik din pehle😆

Preeti: Dekhe lena eik din tumhari yah meri shaadi kissi aur se ho jaye gi aur humari prem kahani beech mein hi reh jaye gi 😉😕

Sumit: Shut up aisa nahin hoga ok ab tum time waste kar rahi ho jaldi se tayaar ho ja main tujhe 2 ghante mein milta hoon

Preeti: Bye

Sumit: See ya

In Dehli

Kumkum: Rahul kahan ho tum???😕 Come on Jaan main late ho rahi hoon samanay ao

Rahul: Madam peeche moor kay dekhiye

Kumkum: Oh acha yahan choope hoye they tum ok maine tumhe kuch batana hai

Rahul: Kya

Kumkum: eik GOOD news hai 😃aur eik suprise hai😉

Rahul: Well Goa to hum jaa nahi saakthey😭 kyon ki deadline toh kal thi tho phir kya ho saaktha hai...tu hi baatha day

Kumkum: Well since mera exam bohut acha raha mere parents ne decide kiya hai keh woh party de gay aur maine decide kiya hai keh main tumhe unse party mein hi milwa doon gi

Rahul gets a little worried😭

Rahul: Can't we wait a little more? Kya abhi batana zaroori hai khon sa humain koi jaldi hai I mean we both are not ready for marriage so parents ko involve karna bad idea hai kyon ki they will just make everything complicated😡

Kumkum: (Disappointed😒) Rahul what do you mean? mere parents aise nahin hain main bus unko batana chati hoon keh maine apna humsafer dondhe liya hai aur I am sure woh yeh baat sun ker khush hoon gay

Rahul: Trust me Kumkum abhi waqt nahin aya keh hum unko kuch bhi batain

Kumkum: (A little anxious) Why is it keh jab bhi humain koi mukha milta hai apne parents ko bataney ka either main tayaar nahin hoti yaa phir tum aur yeh baat hamesha delayed ho jati hai😭

Rahul: Toh isme kuch acha hi ho ga mujhe laagta hai uper waala hi humain bataney se rookh raha hai aur uski toh suni hi chaiye😉

Kumkum: Haan kabhi kabhi mujhe bhi yeh laagta hai lekin kyon I mean we love each other and therefore we should be destined to be together🤔

Rahul: Everything will be fine hum next year definitely bata dayein gay waise main party pe to aa saktha hoon na

Kumkum: Haan you are on the list

Rahul: Ok then kab hai party

Kumkum: Aaj shaam ko is liye hi toh keh rahi thi keh mujhe der ho rahi hai...main chalti hoon

Rahul: Acha suno (holding her hand from the back) I love you❤️

Kumkum: Paatha hai aur saab ko batana chathi hoon ok bye😊

Rahul: Naraaz toh nahin hona😭

Kumkum: Tumse kabhi naraaz nahin ho saakhti main😃

Rahul: By the way woh surprise kya tha

Kumkum: Woh toh ghar aao gay toh bataon gee😉

Sumit is waiting for Preeti at the coffee shop and she walks in wearing a cute red dress

Sumit: Wow aaj lag rahi ho mere sapnoo ki rani❤️ (handing her a rose)

Preeti: Thank you😊

Sumit: Acha yeh pehn lo (giving her a blindfold) aur jaldi se car mein behto

Preeti: Sumit iski kya zaroorat hai I mean...😕

Sumit: Shhhhhhh no more questions and just wear it quietly

He drives for 50 minutes and arrives at a beautiful house by the lake...he takes off her blindfold

Preeti: WOW yeh ghar it's BEAUTIFUL😃

Sumit: Tumse kum😉...mere dad ne yeh humare parivaar key liya buy kiya hai you know for vacation and stuff

Preeti: Oh ABSOLUTELY gorgeous

Sumit: Andhar chaal key dehko

He shows her around and then goes upstairs to show her a special room...it's decorated with flowers and candles

Preeti: Sumit yeh kiska room hai

Sumit: Humara❤️ well after we get married

Preeti: it's amazing 👏

Sumit: Andhar ja kar dehko there is another suprise

Preeti: Kya I don't think main eik aur surprise bardashat kar payoo gi😃

There on the bed were laying two tickets for Goa Field Trip😃...completely flabbergasted by the sight...She turns around and hugs Sumit🤗

Sumit: Tumhara bohut dil tha naa jaane ka toh maine soocha why not main apne pyar kay liye itna toh kar hi saaktha hoon😃❤️

Preeti: Thank you so much trust me you won't regret it😊

Then she draws a heart on the window and writes S + P

❤️
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
I am the first one
yuppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

wow sahar
the story is going really great
totally loved it
but sukk with others..........no...no...noooooooooo
i know sukk are made for each other
then ab jaldi se un dono ko'mila doo

plz cont soon

love afreen
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: juhuti

I am the first one
yuppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

wow sahar
the story is going really great
totally loved it
but sukk with others..........no...no...noooooooooo
i know sukk are made for each other
then ab jaldi se un dono ko'mila doo

plz cont soon

love afreen

You are amazing you are the first to read and comment...thanks and as for the milan that is going to take 3 more parts and as for love that is going to take 10/20 parts 😆 I can't make them fall in love immediately it won't seem natural but I promise if you stay tuned some AWWWWWWWWW and cute moments between Kumkum and Sumit are coming up😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
Sahar...great part....omg i can't wait to read on now....
Su and Kk ka milan soon..... tooo cute!!! update soon!!

Edited by .x. Simran .x. - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: .x. Simran .x.

Sahar...great part....omg i can't wait to read on now....
Su and Kk ka milan soon..... tooo cute!!! update soon!!

I know the milan is coming up SOON just keep reading😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
wowwwwwwwwwwww sahar yaara sooooo sweet part!!!! just loved it😛.....................and must say rahul ne theek kaha ke upar wala hi unhe unki parents se yeh baat batane se rokh raha hai kyunki voh chahte hai ke sukk ki baat ho jaaye😉...........anyways cant wait for their milan ab!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mdtafan

wowwwwwwwwwwww sahar yaara sooooo sweet part!!!! just loved it😛.....................and must say rahul ne theek kaha ke upar wala hi unhe unki parents se yeh baat batane se rokh raha hai kyunki voh chahte hai ke sukk ki baat ho jaaye😉...........anyways cant wait for their milan ab!!!

Aw thanks...And your prediction is RIGHT "upar wala hi unhe unki parents se yeh baat batane se rokh raha hai kyunki voh chahte hai ke sukk ki baat ho jaaye" btw I just got done writting the part where they meet it's coming up VERY SOON...so hang in there😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sehar yaara first..im sorry.sorry sorry sorry..for being so late...
i was so busy time hi nahi mila read karne ko..
and haila u already posted another part...awesome yaara...
Ok here comes my comments and i see my other sister have already commented..

I have read both parts and its AMAZING yaara..
Love Kk when she is giving her exam..😆 Kk mishra ki yaad aagayi
and OMG i really love the Su and preeti nok jhok😆😆
But ya yaar like everyone else me also finding ajeeb reading SuKk with other people
Especially when i read Kk sayin jaan to rahul..omg that was soo ajeeb yaarand hugging him also..😲
Wo kya hain na..we are so used to SUKK that we cannot imagine them with someone else..
But yes like my others sisters im also verryyyyyy utawli to read the milan part..

Loved the jagra of Su and preeti in the 3rd part
and OMG later the song that preeti sings for Su
Dil churale I swear yaar that is my favourite song,.
yesterday i was talking to Noorya about that song
That is my fav and how much i love that song and
now u mention it in ur fanfic wow totally awesome yaar
and also love the nok jhok of su and preeti
when su asks her how much time she need s to get ready..
that is so original and the make/up tihng is so funny 🤣

And OMG in the 4th part Su is soooooooo romantic
with the house and the suprise...to goa
I bet Kk also has that same suprise for Rahul that they will go to goa..😳
Wow then in goa she will meet Su
omg i cant wait to read abt Sukk falling in love and all

But u know reading ur fanfic i dont knw why for some reason
i imagine Renuka as preeti mujhe wohi dekhai deti hain imagination mein..😆

Kya preeti bhi renuka ki tarha hojaayegi when Su will fall for Kk
and ya Rahul aur Kk ki kahani unke parents tak nahi jaa paate
Kyonke Rab ne ye jodi nahi banayi yaar
to parents tak rab kaise ye baat jaane dega..😉

Wow is so exciting...yaara
what will rahul do will he also become a Kk aashiq like Pulkit...
Omg so many sawaals..cant wait to read the next part....
and next time ill try to post my comment on time
anyways keep writing sweetie..
ur FF is MINDBLOWING
👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: RuhaanSimifan


Sehar yaara first..im sorry.sorry sorry sorry..for being so late...
i was so busy time hi nahi mila read karne ko..
and haila u already posted another part...awesome yaara...
Ok here comes my comments and i see my other sister have already commented..

I have read both parts and its AMAZING yaara..
Love Kk when she is giving her exam..😆 Kk mishra ki yaad aagayi
and OMG i really love the Su and preeti nok jhok😆😆
But ya yaar like everyone else me also finding ajeeb reading SuKk with other people
Especially when i read Kk sayin jaan to rahul..omg that was soo ajeeb yaarand hugging him also..😲
Wo kya hain na..we are so used to SUKK that we cannot imagine them with someone else..
But yes like my others sisters im also verryyyyyy utawli to read the milan part..

Loved the jagra of Su and preeti in the 3rd part
and OMG later the song that preeti sings for Su
Dil churale I swear yaar that is my favourite song,.
yesterday i was talking to Noorya about that song
That is my fav and how much i love that song and
now u mention it in ur fanfic wow totally awesome yaar
and also love the nok jhok of su and preeti
when su asks her how much time she need s to get ready..
that is so original and the make/up tihng is so funny 🤣

And OMG in the 4th part Su is soooooooo romantic
with the house and the suprise...to goa
I bet Kk also has that same suprise for Rahul that they will go to goa..😳
Wow then in goa she will meet Su
omg i cant wait to read abt Sukk falling in love and all

But u know reading ur fanfic i dont knw why for some reason
i imagine Renuka as preeti mujhe wohi dekhai deti hain imagination mein..😆

Kya preeti bhi renuka ki tarha hojaayegi when Su will fall for Kk
and ya Rahul aur Kk ki kahani unke parents tak nahi jaa paate
Kyonke Rab ne ye jodi nahi banayi yaar
to parents tak rab kaise ye baat jaane dega..😉

Wow is so exciting...yaara
what will rahul do will he also become a Kk aashiq like Pulkit...
Omg so many sawaals..cant wait to read the next part....
and next time ill try to post my comment on time
anyways keep writing sweetie..
ur FF is MINDBLOWING
👏

IT'S COMPLETELY FINE HUN😃...I just missed your AMAZING comments😊. As long as you read my ff at some point I will be HAPPY😃. I am glad you liked the parts and yeh I am a huge fan of Kumkum in the new janam and therefore made Kumkum in my ff similar to her...For me as a writer it is WEIRD too to write about Sumit and Kumkum being in love with other people. In order to make their relationship seem a little better I add little fights between the two and I am happy that you liked them. Well about the song...I think we have great telepathy😆 As for you imagining Preeti as Renuka and Rahul as Pulkit, well you will just have to wait and see because if I give anything away then what's the fun in that. I love your comment "Rahul aur Kk ki kahani unke parents tak nahi jaa paate Kyonke Rab ne ye jodi nahi banayi yaar to parents tak rab kaise ye baat jaane dega..." It's so TRUE. BTW I will keep writing but you also keep making those AMAZING videos of yours!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
yupp i read all the parts together grt going

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