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Posted: 16 years ago
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sahar yaara very nice part...loved it😛......ab jo tune kaha that u are working on their meeting so i wont say it again😆........and thank u coz that part was a long one😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mdtafan

sahar yaara very nice part...loved it😛......ab jo tune kaha that u are working on their meeting so i wont say it again😆........and thank u coz that part was a long one😳

Thank you for reading and your wonderful comment...yeh I know I am really trying hard to make their meeting natural and a good one...and if you thought this part was long wait for Part 4 Some SWEET and bitter Moments(it's HUGE) ttyl
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: RuhaanSimifan


Wow Sahar Loved the first part..
And me love it too that SuKk are far and dont even know abt their existence
Wow cant wait to read the part how they will meet
being a devoted and addicted fan of SuKk, thodisi ajeeb lakta hain
when reading that both of them are in love with someone else..
but this is the greatness about ur fanfic...
its all fresh and new and not similar like the kahaani on tv
Love it very much yaar..
ufff cant wait when SuKk fall in love
and to know what happens and how that will happen
and what will happen with Rahul and Preeti
ufff too excited yaara
Keep writing

and

i have to tell u something
ab toh tu phas gayi yaar
kyonke now u cannot stop with this fanfic
coz we kumkumians always like whatever has Su or Kk in it
so itni jaldi tumhe chutti nahi milega fanfic se😆
keep on writing dear...
cant wait for the next part..
Hope its a bit longer then this part
Dont mind yaara..i enjoy the story so much that just want to read and read..

anyways,,waitng for the next part
and o ya dont mind my loooonnnggg comments😳
meri aadat hain..bak bak thodi zyada karti hoon main
isiliye lamba comment hojaate hain..control nahi karpaati main..😆


First of all I LOVE long comments so don't worry...sorry about Su and Ku being in love with other people I just wanted to do something different but I promise at the end it will be Kumkum with Sumit and I will most definitely keep updating if you will keep reading and commenting
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

tht was coolllllllllllllllll partt plzzzzzzzz contuied soon

Thanks for reading and liking it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskan087

lovly 1st part sahar

u did a gr8 job

keep it up

waiting 4 next part

Thanks for liking my first part don't forget to read the next one
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: marrukhkhan

first of all welcome to kumkum family .and ur FF have different story in good sense .waitng for next part how sumet kumkum meet and how fall in love with eachother.

I am glad you think my story is good and you will have to wait a little for the Kumkum and Sumit first meeting...Stay tuned
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow very nice part yaara
Love the way how Su and Kk personal life is revealed..
their parents sounds cute...
wow can't wait to read the meeting part on which u r working
and 😆😆 thnk god u don't get bored with long comments..
kya karoon main bhi Kumkum ki tarha kam bolti hoon na 😃
As u told earlier that humko thoda intezaar karna parega before SuKk milan
mmm well no probs yaara...u keep writing and we will keep reading...
Lookin forward to the next part...😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Hun Hopefully you liked my ff
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: RuhaanSimifan

Wow very nice part yaara
Love the way how Su and Kk personal life is revealed..
their parents sounds cute...
wow can't wait to read the meeting part on which u r working
and 😆😆 thnk god u don't get bored with long comments..
kya karoon main bhi Kumkum ki tarha kam bolti hoon na 😃
As u told earlier that humko thoda intezaar karna parega before SuKk milan
mmm well no probs yaara...u keep writing and we will keep reading...
Lookin forward to the next part...😳

Thanks I am glad you liked this part...I will be revealing more about their lives in the next part and you will soon get to know how they will meet (I think it is part 4 or 5) I am looking forward to your comments about my next part which I will post tomorrow
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 3: Goa Field Trip❓

In the exam room, Dehli

Kumkum to herself: Ah OMG itni stupid question the names of the bones in the arm arey mujhe samajh nahi arhi keh leg mein konsi hain aur arm mein😕 ok I need to calm down Oh God help please main fail nahi ho sakti😭...

Proctor: Ms. Kumkum Mishra are you ok? You look alittle flushed

Kumkum: No I am good; I just got nervous but I am good now thanks for asking😊

Meanwhile in Mumbai

Sumit gets a call from his father

Dad: Beta Sumit main tujhe batana bhool gaya tha lekin kal tujhe office ja kar humare project kay paper le kar jaana hai kyon ki main Delhi😉 ja raha hoon

Sumit: But why dad?

Dad: Woh mere eik business friend unse meri meeting hai

Sumit: Ok Dad I will do that bye

Sumit hangs up and rushes to catch up with Preeti

Preeti: Sumit tum late ho aaj 😔

Sumit: Sorry hun I just woke up late

Preeti: Agar raat bar mujhse baatein naa karo to time per utho gay🤔

Sumit: I will not wake up on time instead die without talking to you😊

Preeti: Main ne kaha tha naa keh itna emotional na hoa karo I know that you love me but...

Sumit (Angry): Acha acha phir se na koi lecture shuro kar dena😡

Preeti: Ok fine oh yaad aya yeh dehko(handing him the form for Goa field trip) hum yahan chalein😃

Sumit: Are yeh zaroori hai kya I mean why can't we have a romantic getaway to the beach or something you know I don't like gatherings that much😔

Preeti (giving him an evil stare)😡: Tu romantic hai isliye hi mujhe tumse pyar hoa lekin ab thoda sa annoying hone laaga hai

Sumit (Extremely mad): Theek hai to dond le kisi unromantic guy ko aur uske saath hi chaali ja🤢

Sumit walks away and Preeti realizes that she said alittle too much and has hurt his feelings

Back in Dehli, Rahul is waiting for Kumkum to step out of the examination room...He feels that somebody wrapped her arms around him "I LOVE YOU"❤️

Rahul: Kya hoa?

Kumkum: OMG at first main confuse😕 hogi thi lekin phir sab teekh hogaya

Rahul: Kyon kaise??

Kumkum: Tumhare bare me jo soochane lagi thi main😃

Rahul: Ok so exam acha ho gaya aur ab bus aram karna hai tuj ko aur woh bhi Goa😃 mein

Kumkum: Main ne kha na thoda soochane kay liye waqt do waise bhi Goa jaane ki kya zaroorat hai hum...

Rahul: Kyonki main tumhare saath waqt guzarana chata hoon aur waise bhi deadline is this Friday

Kumkum: Muger wo toh hum yahan reh ker bhi kar saakte hain na tumhare liye mere saath rehna zaroori hain Goa toh nahin

Rahul: Lekin

Kumkum: Lekin kuch nahin main waise bhi big crowd mein nahin jaana chati you know what I promise hum zayaada waqt eik doosre kay saath guzaare gay aur bohut maasti karein gay muger Dehli mein reh kar

Rahul (Sad and disappointed): Theek hai tum kehti ho toh we won't go😭

In Mumbai, there is trouble in paradise...Preeti goes up to Sumit singing in a horrible voice

Preeti: Muskurale O Chaand Se Chehre Wale
Din Raat Main Tujhse Pyaar Karoon
Par Kaise Bhala Ikraar Karoon
Tu Na Samjhe Meri Bekarariyaan
Dil Churale O Chaand Se Chehre Wale😆

Sumit: Mil gaya tujhe Mr. Unromantic😡

Preeti: Nahin lekin maine apne aap ko badle diya hai main romantic ho giye hoon

Sumit: 😆Tu aur romantic mujhe paata hai kay miracles happen lekin yeh kabhi nahin ho saakta

Preeti (Hitting on the arm): Sumit, tease maat karo acha baba I AM SORRY tujhe to paata hain na keh main kuch zayaada hi bhol jati hoon😭

Sumit: It's ok sorry main bhi kuch zayaada hi hyper ho gaya tha😊

Preeti: Guess what maine soocha hai keh tum teekh they we can have fun here so Goa is CANCELLED😃

Sumit: Really (Hugs her) Thanks❤️

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