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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
wah wah kia baat hai story zabardast hai ab kumkum sumeet Goa mai mile ge its my pridiction .excellent .waiting for next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: preethi

yupp i read all the parts together grt going

Aww thanks for reading and I am glad you liked them!!!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: marrukhkhan

wah wah kia baat hai story zabardast hai ab kumkum sumeet Goa mai mile ge its my pridiction .excellent .waiting for next part

I am so happy you think my ff is zabardast😃 Well for your prediction just wait and see!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 5: Party at the Mishra House😃

Mr. and Mrs. Mishra greet the guest and Kumkum is getting ready upstairs⭐️

Kumkum (talking to herself): Paatha nahin ushe surprise acha laage ga kay nahin...main bhi kaisy baatein karti hoon off course he will like it😃

Mom: Beta ready ho gayi?

Dad: Main dekhta hoon...Dr. Kumkum😊 tum late ho rahi ho neeche guests bhi agaye hain

Kumkum: Dad I will be there in a second...Kya howa dad?😕

Dad: Meri bethi kitni badi ho gayi hai aur main bus thoda sa emotional ho gaya😭

Kumkum goes up to him and hugs him🤗

Kumkum: I love you❤️

Dad: Tu toh meri jaan hai😊

Mom: Acha toh main ab apki jaan nahin rahi

Dad: Arre...mera metlab yeh😕

Mom: Rehney dijiye bus ab chalein neeche sab inteezar kar rehey hain

Rahul: Namaste Uncle and Auntie😊

Kumkum: Mom, Dad yeh Rahul hai mera college attend karta hai aur mera dost (says awkwardly😡) hai

Mom: Acha nice to meet you enjoy the party😊

Mom and Dad leave to attend to the other guests which includes Mr. Wadwa😉 (Sumit's Dad); Mr. Mishra is his business friend and he invited him to the party after the meeting. They are both working on a huge project together (Mr. Mishra is the biggest industralist in Dehli and Mr. Wadwa in Mumbai).

Mr. W: Arre us sey toh milaye jisk kay honor👏 mein yeh party hai

Mr. M: Kumkum beta come here

Kumkum: Ji Dad kya baat hai?😊

Mr. M: Meet Mr. Wadwa

Kumkum: Namaste aaj tak app kay bare bohut sona aur padha hai nice to finally meet you😃

Mr. W: Haan aapke father bhi aap ki bohut batain aur tareefein karte hain and after meeting you I understand why agar meri aisi bethi hoti toh main bhi uski hi batain karta👍🏼

Kumkum (blushing😳): No uncle mere dad mujhse zayada ache hain

Mr. M: Ah thanks beta 😊

Mr. W: Main tumhara aur time nahin loon ga but I hope to see you again😊

Kumkum: Sure uncle...I would love to meet you and your family

During this conversation, Rahul has been sitting in the corner since he doesn't know any of the guests because most of them are either Kumkum's girlfriends or Mr. Mishra's business friends😔

Kumkum: Rahul aao mere saath

Rahul: Kahan???

Kumkum: Just come naa

She takes him upstairs in the balcony

Kumkum: You know haar raat main yahan akar taaroon kay neeche wish karti hoon kay mujhe mera pyar hamesha kay liye mil jaye😃

Rahul (Not impressed😒): That's kind of childish don't you think I mean taaroon kay neeche wish karna...

Kumkum (Sad😭): Please don't hurt my feelings main yeh roz karti hoon

Rahul: ok whatever tu mujhe uper kyon layi

Kumkum (Cheerfully😃): Well tumhare liye surprise hai idhar aao

She takes him inside her room and shows him two tickets for Goa Field Trip😆

Rahul: OMG really Kumkum hum chal rahe hain😃

Kumkum: Haan tumhara bohut maan tha naa so we are going

Rahul picks her up and starts spinning

Rahul: Kumkum I love you so MUCH😃

After the party is over Kumkum goes upstairs and calls Rahul

Kumkum: So ready ho agle Friday ko hum is waqt Goa mein hoon gay

Rahul: Main toh bohut excited hoon😉

Kumkum: Acha toh tum khush ho na

Rahul: Jis insaan kay saath tum jaise ladki ho wo insaan kabhi sad ho hi nahin saaktha❤️

Sumit and Preeti are still at the Lake house and it is 10 pm

Sumit: Acha kafi der ho gayi hai aao tumhe main ghar chod doon

Preeti: Kya hum yahaan hi nahin reh saaktey aaj raat key liye😊

Sumit: Tumhe paata hai naa main shaadi se pehle...

Preeti: Sumit tum bhi naa main toh sirf ghar mein rehna chati hoon mera wo metlab nahi tha😕

Sumit: I know lekin agar hum ikele rehen gay toh...

Preeti: Ok samajhe gayi chalein😊

Sumit: I am sorry but I just want our relationship to be special 😍

Preeti: I understand...so maine packing bhi karni hai toh mujhe ghar le hi chalo😊

Sumit: oh haan ab toh main bhi Goa ke liye excited😃 ho hi raha hoon

Sumit, Preeti, Kumkum and Rahul all are planning and packing for their trip to Goa😃 but little do they know that the people they will meet there will play a SIGNIFICANT role in their lives and will change them forever unless they don't get to go❓...Stay tuned and find out!!!

😉
Edited by KumkumisGR8 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55

Haila im the first one to comment today on this part.. 😆😆
Ok very nice and interesting part.
WOW what a twist that Su dad and Kk dad know each..😃
overall the part is cute and sweet and very nice..specially the dialogues of Kk,...
yaara u are very good at keeping us stick to ur fanfic..
Omg its just like a real serial..aggar main ye part likhti to SuKk ki meeting to kab ka hojaata
But ur very talented at keeping the story still exciting and not even makin Sukk meet
and still the story is exciting and interesting without SuKk even meeting yet..
very good yaar like a true writer does keeping the audience glued to the story..
ur also good in doing that..

Love the Kk dialogues.when she is dressing up..its so like Kk mishra.....
Love the part of Kk on the terrace
ke wo taaron ko dekh ke wish maangti hain awww so cute
and this rahul ab mujhe ye rahul bilkhul pasand nahi hain.🤢.
how unromantic is he makin fun of Kk...😡
Udhar preeti is so unromantic and idhar Rahul..
lakta hain ye dono ko saath hona chahiye😆

Wow when SuKk will meet both are so romantic...
omg cant wait to read the romantic parts of SuKk..

ab to Sehar yaara jaldi se innko Goa trip pe jaane do
ye bhi excited hain jaane ke liyee
aur hum bhi excited hain innke wahaan hone ke liyee😆

yaar aur SuKk ko milne do...
humko unke milne ke intezaar hain
issi baat pe ek ghaana yaad aagayi

Sumit Kumkum ke milne ki humko Tamanna Hai
Unko pyaar hojaane ka irada hain
aur kya hojaana hai yaara
Jo kabhie Sumit Kumkum mile to
Hum zamaana dekhenge unka pyaar
O Mere Yaar....

😆😆😆
Dont mind my craziness yaara..
meri aadat hain har situation ko ghaana mein badalne ki

anyways waitng for the next part...

Edited by RuhaanSimifan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
sahar ab main kia kahoon
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part
totally loved it
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my prediction was right about Mr. W being business friend of Mr. M

wow all four of them going to Goa
not bad....................................................
ab jaldi se sukk ka meeting karaaw
and let them fall in love with each other

cont soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
by the way sahar

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!

for over 50 comments
ur ff is going really great
keep up with ur good and mindblowing work

and post next episode sooooon

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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
Mr Mishra and Mr Wadhwa....Friends....
omg Sahar I'm loving the direction the story is going.....
The trip to Goa will be one to remember...hehe...
I wonder if Kk and Su will like each other.... or will there not get on at all...
Omg update soon meri jaan..... !!! love you! mwah x

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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
OMG sahar!!!!! its too good!!!!!!😛...................ab tho goa trip pakka..aur sukk ka milan bhi!!!!😉...............gosh just cant wait for it!!!!!!!!
yaara ab jaldiiiiiiiii se next part post kar.....main tho poori raat so nahin paoungi😆

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Posted: 16 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: RuhaanSimifan


Haila im the first one to comment today on this part.. 😆😆
Ok very nice and interesting part.
WOW what a twist that Su dad and Kk dad know each..😃
overall the part is cute and sweet and very nice..specially the dialogues of Kk,...
yaara u are very good at keeping us stick to ur fanfic..
Omg its just like a real serial..aggar main ye part likhti to SuKk ki meeting to kab ka hojaata
But ur very talented at keeping the story still exciting and not even makin Sukk meet
and still the story is exciting and interesting without SuKk even meeting yet..
very good yaar like a true writer does keeping the audience glued to the story..
ur also good in doing that..

Love the Kk dialogues.when she is dressing up..its so like Kk mishra.....
Love the part of Kk on the terrace
ke wo taaron ko dekh ke wish maangti hain awww so cute
and this rahul ab mujhe ye rahul bilkhul pasand nahi hain.🤢.
how unromantic is he makin fun of Kk...😡
Udhar preeti is so unromantic and idhar Rahul..
lakta hain ye dono ko saath hona chahiye😆

Wow when SuKk will meet both are so romantic...
omg cant wait to read the romantic parts of SuKk..

ab to Sehar yaara jaldi se innko Goa trip pe jaane do
ye bhi excited hain jaane ke liyee
aur hum bhi excited hain innke wahaan hone ke liyee😆

yaar aur SuKk ko milne do...
humko unke milne ke intezaar hain
issi baat pe ek ghaana yaad aagayi

Sumit Kumkum ke milne ki humko Tamanna Hai
Unko pyaar hojaane ka irada hain
aur kya hojaana hai yaara
Jo kabhie Sumit Kumkum mile to
Hum zamaana dekhenge unka pyaar
O Mere Yaar....

😆😆😆
Dont mind my craziness yaara..
meri aadat hain har situation ko ghaana mein badalne ki

anyways waitng for the next part...

Thanks for being the first one to comment and read you are awesome...I would hardly call myself good but I am glad you are still interested in the ff Well I don't know about Preeti and Rahul but I am definitely getting SUKU together...I know I am too excited to write about the Goa but you know I think I am going to wait just a little bit more(I know you guys will hate me for that but I want to really make it seem like a natural thing so I have to build it up a little) And from now on I have a new favorite song:
Sumit Kumkum ke milne ki humko Tamanna Hai
Unko pyaar hojaane ka irada hain
aur kya hojaana hai yaara
Jo kabhie Sumit Kumkum mile to
Hum zamaana dekhenge unka pyaar
O Mere Yaar....
And hun I don't mind your craziness in fact that's what I love about you and your comments they are always fun to read and reply to😃

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