Where vows begin again ❤️-A Prashiv SS - Page 2

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

So finally I have written something on our dear Prashiv....

I would be very grateful if you take out time to read it and give me very necessary feedback... criticisms are welcome with wide open arms ...

Thanks ❤️

Yayy yayy!! Congratulations on your first PraShiv piece & thank you so much for writing it

Would u mind if I read it in.. like a few days? Coz I already know even before reading that it's going to be wayy better than wht the show gives us , so I don't want to read it now, raise my expectations sky high and end up disappointed by what they deliver

I'll be right here once the current PraShiv scene fever dies down a bit just so I can enjoy it fully without fear of disappointment from makers

I am speechless 😶 so raw, so pure love, hurt. Feeling Many emotions from them. This is pure art 🤩

At the end of the SS I was wanting & needing more. Was sad it ended. 😢

Loving his pov is rare to read a vulnerable ML as SR.

Do write more here or on Wattpad please. ♥️🙏🏽

Hey!

This was beautifully written 😍😍

Thanks for the tag ☺️

Wow asmita it's so romantic 🥰🥰🥰

Thks for the tag dearest

Part1

Prarthana telling shivansh that she smiles when she is with him because with him she feels all emotions,but with raunak she feels nothing was excellent. Shivansh saying that prarthana deserves someone better than a person who can't even trust her smile was frustrating as he is hinting that he is suspicious.but Prarthana replying that she is someone who reveals that he is hurtful was truly touching.she revealed indirectly that he is what she deserves.When shivansh sees prarthana with raunak he feels hurt because he feels replaced.its so true.first his mother left him and chose her other son.this time he should know that he has not been replaced and he is the only one in her life.

Part2

Because Of the childhood experience Shivansh thinks that he doesnt deserved to be loved.Sadly he feels abandoned.Prarthana's pov about her love for shivansh was lovely.I liked how you wrote that she likes how Shivansh walks away before saying anything cruel.

Part3

Shivansh explaining his feelings for prarthana in detail was emotional. Prarthana too explained what Shivansh means to her now. The kiss was so emotional with pure love.

Originally posted by: Chowmein123

Wow beautiful

Thank you ❤️