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Posted: 2 days ago
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Chap 20 "Where It All Comes Full Circle"


It had rained that morning.


Not a storm — just a soft, cleansing drizzle that left the earth smelling like forgiveness.

Shivansh parked the car outside the old, partially abandoned structure — Randhawa Wellness Center, still etched in faded steel at the gate. His father’s dream project. The one left incomplete after funding fell apart… and after Shivansh turned away from it in bitterness and pain.


Prarthana stepped out beside him, her dupatta fluttering slightly in the breeze.


Neither spoke for a while. The building stood in dignified stillness, like a ghost of all that was once hoped for — and all that had never been said between father and son.


Shivansh finally broke the silence.


“He brought me here once,” he said quietly. “Said, ‘One day this place will hold more lives than money ever could.’ I laughed at him. I told him dreams like this don’t build empires.”


Prarthana looked at him, her eyes soft. “Did he say anything back?”


He smiled faintly. “He just smiled. The way fathers do when they already know the answer but are willing to wait for you to learn it yourself.”


They walked inside.


The hall was dusty, but the bones of the building still stood strong. Shivansh ran his fingers across the worn concrete wall, brushing off years of silence.


“I hated him for years,” he murmured. “Not because he failed me. But because he kept believing I’d come back. Even when I stopped believing in myself.”

Prarthana didn’t interrupt. She just walked beside him, her presence steady as breath.

They reached the back wall — the one where old architectural plans were once pinned.


Shivansh pulled something from his coat pocket. A photograph — curled at the edges.


It was his father, smiling proudly in front of the foundation stone, a much younger Shivansh reluctantly standing beside him.


“I found it in a box last month,” he said, voice breaking just a little. “I thought I’d lost everything of him. But somehow… this survived.”


He stepped forward and taped it gently to the wall — not as an offering of grief, but as a promise.


Then he turned to Prarthana.


“I want to build this again,” he said. “Not as a tycoon. Not to erase guilt. But because I finally understand why he dreamed it. And… I want to finish it. For him. For me. For the people it was meant to serve.”


She reached for his hand.


“And I’ll be there,” she said simply. “Not behind you. Beside you. Always.”


He looked at her, and the ghosts in his eyes — the little boy who waited for a mother who never returned, the young man who shut his heart to a dying father — they finally quieted.


Not erased.


But released.


As they stood there in the echoing stillness of unfinished dreams, a quiet wind passed through the open windows, scattering a few old leaves across the floor.


And after a long time, Shivansh Randhawa did not feel alone..

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After months of hard work and resilience

The Randhawa Wellness Centre opened on a morning woven with sunlight and jasmine.


The building stood tall now — not imposing, but warm, with wide open windows, soft cream walls, and hand-painted murals from local artists lining the pediatric wing. There were still things unfinished. A room waiting for books. A corner where fresh paint lingered. But it no longer looked like a project. It looked like a promise fulfilled.


Guests had begun to gather. Former patients from the NGO, local officials, villagers who had watched the building remain silent for years — and now saw it breathe again.


At the entrance, a marble plaque gleamed softly.


“Randhawa Wellness Centre – A dream remembered, a legacy reborn.”


Shivansh stood at the gate, dressed simply in a cream kurta with a navy jacket. There was no press coverage, no media storm. Just people. And meaning.


He looked around quietly, breathing in the moment — the sounds of laughter from children who ran through the corridors, the scent of fresh marigolds draped along the banisters, the distant hum of an old melody someone was playing on a flute.


Then he saw her.


Prarthana.


Walking down the front steps with a clipboard in hand, guiding a volunteer. She wore a soft yellow saree with flowers in her braid, and a glow on her face that had nothing to do with the sun.


Their eyes met — and for a moment, the crowd fell away.


She walked up to him and handed him a small key. “You forgot this,” she said softly.


He took it and smiled. “You remembered everything I forgot.”


She didn’t reply, just looked at the building beside them.


“It’s beautiful,” she whispered. “And it feels alive.”


“It is,” he said. “Because of you.”


Their hands brushed — and this time, he held hers. In front of everyone. No shame, no fear.


A gentle bell rang, announcing the start of the ceremony.


Shivansh took the mic, but only spoke briefly.


“This isn’t a monument,” he said. “It’s a living place. For healing. For second chances. For people who have lost their way and are still brave enough to begin again.”


He glanced at Prarthana — who nodded gently, her eyes shimmering.


“For my father, who believed in this long before I did. For every soul that walks through these doors needing hope — welcome. You belong.”


Applause broke out — but it was the quiet kind. Respectful. Honest.


Later, as the day turned golden and guests trickled out, Shivansh and Prarthana stood at the garden bench behind the building. The bench his father had once dreamed of placing there.


She leaned against him lightly. “You did it.”


He wrapped his arm around her shoulder.


“No,” he said quietly. “We did.”


She smiled. “What now?”


He turned to her, brushing a hair from her cheek.


“Now we live,” he whispered. “Together. Not to outrun the past — but to build something that finally makes it worth surviving.”

"Shivansh...." she whispered holding his hand...

He looked up...

" I love you" she said...

Shivansh smiled with a lot of emotions..



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And beneath that quiet sky, the two of them stood — not as broken pieces stitched together, but as something new, whole, and unshakably real.


A legacy not of power.

But of love.

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Posted: 2 days ago
#22

Wow This Story Was Actually Better Then The Series It Self

Your Amazing Writer

I Loved The Start To The Finish

Even Bua Maa Got Told Off

smiley36

Good

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Posted: 2 days ago
#23

It was nice & sweet but the same “essence” in your early stories. I am not good with words, was expecting a different 1. ☹️

Their emotions where ♥️

SR was good to work on himself first, mental trauma has been ignored on the show.

Love that she didn’t go back home, working at the NGO. What did she do besides praying, getting taunts humiliating.

Hasn’t she got a job or do volunteer work…?

I didn’t watch the beginning of 4th season.

Wishing it was a dark revenge for example as Maya from Beyhadh 2. Where she is successful rich something different badass avatar 😎

After the EMA to comeback as a phoenix. 🐦‍🔥 self respect, smart, confidence outspoken

Where is the outrage for the 3 🐍 and Raunak, That was missing 😓

Thanks for your message don’t be offended please.

Apologies if I have offended you 🙏🏽

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Posted: 2 days ago
#24

Originally posted by: Milalal27

It was nice & sweet but the same “essence” in your early stories. I am not good with words, was expecting a different 1. ☹️

Their emotions where ♥️

SR was good to work on himself first, mental trauma has been ignored on the show.

Love that she didn’t go back home, working at the NGO. What did she do besides praying, getting taunts humiliating.

Hasn’t she got a job or do volunteer work…?

I didn’t watch the beginning of 4th season.

Wishing it was a dark revenge for example as Maya from Beyhadh 2. Where she is successful rich something different badass avatar 😎

After the EMA to comeback as a phoenix. 🐦‍🔥 self respect, smart, confidence outspoken

Where is the outrage for the 3 🐍 and Raunak, That was missing 😓

Thanks for your message don’t be offended please.

Apologies if I have offended you 🙏🏽

Hey beautiful....thank you so much ❤️

And nothing to offend sweetheart...Feedbacks are always welcome.....

And I can say that I have tried to keep the character as close to Prarthana here...Raunak ko toh I have not included..but the thing here for Prarthana, the only person who needed to work on himself was Shivansh...she never had any expectations from anybody else or Sonalika doesn't exist for Shivansh..it was Shivansh who hurt her...I wanted to focus on Prarthana 's trauma and her emotions as well...so that's the case ..

And okay I get what you were expecting...

And thank you for writing that...

I was actually working on two stories simultaneously in my draft ...may be the other one would resonate with you ...I would try to post it tomorrow

And trust me nooo "offend" thank you for giving me more idea...❤️

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Posted: 2 days ago
#25

On Wattpad there’s no revenge spicy P. just like Maya. Who’s Strong confident intelligent.

Because it is ending I know the itv won’t give me what I want.

Even now we have nonsense episodes I don’t watch them it gives me a headache 😅

I am going to miss Namik so your stories I hope y will continue writing by the way will cope with the loss of him😭

Make a separate post with a short summary of all your stories so that we can read them easily.

Wishing there where more FF /OS here ☹️

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Posted: 2 days ago
#26

Originally posted by: SilverBell

Wow This Story Was Actually Better Then The Series It Self

Your Amazing Writer

I Loved The Start To The Finish

Even Bua Maa Got Told Off

smiley36

Good

Thank you so so much 💕

SilverBell thumbnail
Posted: 2 days ago
#27

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

Thank you so so much 💕

Your Welcome

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Posted: a day ago
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I am yet to read this, but have full confidence that this will be as good as if not better than, your previous ones. smiley20

A suggestion,

I don't know if you already have a fan fiction section in the forum, if not you should either add this to your library of stories so it's easier to access here. Or you can publish this in Wattpad where wider audience can read your work.

Prashiv's works are like really in trend right now, so I would be happy if you decided to post them there so more people know how good of a writer you are. smiley31

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3 months ago

The police came and did not ask..whether prathana agrees with the wed

This annoyed me so much how comes she did not say anything no consent or asking what she wants what the hell

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Posted by: Jsjenw

6 months ago

Please tell me the summary of previous gen

I think shooting for new gen has started Since I am not much aware about the previous one can any one of you explain it briefly?

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