Curse : Abhigya SS Part 7 (Pg 6)Completed - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
hope pragya and abhi are okay
pragya to be possessed that will be interesting
love it do continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Part 6

Pratap is worried when Pragya does not open her eyes and decides to call the priest. Abhi finds himself in his house and asks his servant who brought him there.

Servant : your friend Rohit brought you here

Rohit : Are you okay Abhi? (Asks with concern)

Abhi : Where is Pragya? I have to save her

Rohit : Ruby is dead

Abhi is shocked with hearing his statement and asks him how did he know

Rohit : Remember you called me that your car broke down so I came to see you but I found you unconscious outside that well and i saw Ruby's dead body inside the well

Abhi : Somebody took Pragya inside the well

Rohit : She is fine, I went to see her but she is under observation

The priest looks at Pragya and informs Pratap she is suffering due to the deeds of his ancestors.

Pratap : Can you please tell me the way to save my daughter?

Abhi comes there running but Pratap is furious at him for not following Pragya after knowing truth.

Priest : somebody opened that door and you are the one who did it right Abhi

Pratap : I told you not to do anything but you did not pay heed to me

Abhi : Trust me nobody was in that room

Priest : something cannot be seen but they exist and now there is only way to save this girl

Pratap : Please tell me (fold his hands)

Priest : You will have to throw all belonging of that spirit which is in that room and that too before tomorrow midnight because it is full moon night and the power of this spirit will be increased

Abhi : I will go there and immerse everything

Pratap : No I will do this task I cannot let you take this risk

Priest : he is right, only he can go in that haunted room and immerse it into the holy river before midnight tomorrow

Abhi : i will go there and save my love, uncle give me your blessings

Pratap hesitantly blesses him and prays for both of them. Later the priest put the amulet on her hand but gets shocked when it is thrown away by the spirit, Pragya opens the eyes but is possessed by the spirit. She has dark black eyes and screams loudly throwing things around. Abhi gets hurt with glass on his head and it starts bleeding. The spirit is stands touching the ceiling (thunder noise sound)

Spirit : only two days, then this spirit will leave her body forever (leaves throwing Pragya down on floor)

Abhi : Pragya, wake up (pats her face)

Priest : I suggest you to not waste time and throw those things as soon as possible

Abhi places Pragya on bed carefully and leaves for his house but witnesses a temple on his way.

Abhi : God, you know that Pragya never harmed anybody than why is she punished for no reason. Please mercy on me to save my Pragya and the future generation who will be victim like this.

Priest tells him that god is testing them and he has to be strong.

Abhi comes to see Pragya who is lying on her bed closing her eyes and holds her hand with tears in his eyes.

Abhi : This time I will not let anybody harm you and thats my promise (leaves)

Later the priest starts doing the prayer and chanting the mantras with Pratap. They bring unconscious Pragya and puts inside the circle. Abhi reaches the haunted palace in the evening and is not able to door initially but after lot of effort opens it. He hears strange noises while he is collecting the things inside the room. Suddenly the picture frame of the dancer falls down breaking it and the door closes due to the strong wind. Abhi's neck starts to hurt and is unable go outside. He starts chanting hanuman chalisa and trying to open the door. His shoulder starts bleeding after getting hurt with a piece of knife. The spirit awakens in Pragya's body is dragged inside the room in spite of priest stopping it.

Pratap : what happened?

Priest : I hope Abhi reaches the river soon to immerse everything

Abhi finally opens the door and starts to leave saving himself from the pillar falling behind him. He gets into his car and looks at time to reach before midnight.

Abhi : Its 9, I have to reach quickly

He starts to drive his car speedily but he finds the road closed due to the weather.

Abhi : Shit (hits the steering wheel and reverse the car)

The priest and Pratap knocks on the door but nobody responds. Pragya opens her eyes and finds a lady sitting in front of her.

Pragya : who are you? (says terrified voice)

Vasundara : Vasundara, whom your father's ancestors killed brutally, just like this I was craving to get justice but nobody payed heed to me

Pragya : what do you want from me? please leave me alone

Vasundara : I will once your lover will be in heaven

Pragya who is completely shocked gets worried for Abhi. Suddenly with the force of wind the door opens quickly. Abhi's car get stuck inside under tree when it falls on his car. He opens the door carefully and goes out of car. He starts running but his leg so gets slow to reach his destination.

Abhi : (wheezes) there is only an hour left

He sees river immediately and goes there quickly to immerse the belongings but mistakenly drops one anklet on road and leaves.


Next part will be last one for this story. Hope you guys enjoy it because climax will be bit sad.

Edited by ashpat3 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
We are planing that abhigya will be together for n next chapter.and everything will be free of evil spirit. Pragya will be with abhi and they will be safe. Hope so!!! 😃And the thing which abhi has dropped mistakrly will not affect any body .
Becoming Impatient for next one😛
Anyway nice updre. Continue soon.
I know the next will be last one but loving the story .wish to see more than one part for this story.
'climax will be sad':-why??😕
Now more eager to see what unfolds in next update.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Tisha1313

We are planing that abhigya will be together for n next chapter.and everything will be free of evil spirit. Pragya will be with abhi and they will be safe. Hope so!!! 😃And the thing which abhi has dropped mistakrly will not affect any body .

Becoming Impatient for next one😛
Anyway nice updre. Continue soon.
I know the next will be last one but loving the story .wish to see more than one part for this story.
'climax will be sad':-why??😕
Now more eager to see what unfolds in next update.😊


I will try update soon, sad in terms of something else than love story, I will add two more parts if I can
Edited by ashpat3 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Amazing update, loved it.
Hope nothing happens to them.
Continue soon plz.
Thanks for pm.
Edited by hailly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Nice update ash :)
Why sad end?!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Wat it mean of sad ending, it means of pragya will b dead or pragya's dad.. No no we want abhigya together, u give a justice to vasundara by anyway but not separate our abhigya..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 7

Abhi immerses all the belongings of Vasundara in the river leaving behind one of her ornament on road. He immediately reaches home when he sees blood on floor and looking like somebody was being dragged. The next scene horrifies him when he sees the body of Pratap and the priest's with blood on their body.

Abhi : Uncle (tries to wake Pratap)

Pratap (coughs) : Abhi, don't waste time, please save my daughter, promise me you will not let anything happen to her please

Abhi : I promise I will not let anything happen to her but you cannot leave us like this, she would die without you

Pratap : NO!! you will not let her miss me (closes her eyes slowly)

Suddenly Abhi hears a voice of laughing like a child voice and the noise of anklet. He gets up to find Pragya and sees the spirit standing upstairs at the wall.

Vasundara : That Pratap left (laughs loudly)

Abhi : You took your revenge on him now what do you want from Pragya, leave her alone I beg of you

Vasundara : I am so sorry but I cannot leave her till you are alive (throws knife at him)

Abhi : Ouch (screams and falls down on ground)

Pragya begs Abhi to save her as she does not want to leave him.

Abhi : Pragya

Pragya : Please Abhi, she killed my dad I do not want to lose you (cries soberly)

The spirit tries to cut Pragya's vain but Abhi who is severely injured closes his eyes few minutes and remembers priest's words on only way to save Pragya is god. He starts chanting hanuman chalisa. He grabs on spirit who is inside Pragya even though it the spirit is trying to take her away.

Shri guru charan saroj raj nij mane mukure sudhaari

Varnao raghuvar vimal jasu jo daayaku phal chaari

Budhi hin tanu janike sumirau pavan kumaram

Bal budhi vidya dehu mohe harahu kalesavikaar

Jai hanuman gyan gun saagar

Jai kapis tihun lok ujaagar

Ram doot atulit bal dhaama

Anjani-putra pavan sut naama

Mahavir vikram bajrangi

Kumati nivaar sumati ke sangi

Kanchan varan viraaj subesa

Kaanan kundal kunchit kesaa

Haath vajra aur dhuvaje viraaje

Kandhe moonj janehu saaje

Shankar suvan kesri nandan

Tej prataap maha jag vandan

Vidyavaan guni ati chaatur

Raam kaaj karibe ko aatur

Prabhu charitra sunibe ko rasiya

Raam lakhan sita man basiya

Sukshma roop dhari siyahi dikhaava

Vikat roop dhari lanka jalaava

Bhima roop dhari asur sanghaare

Ramachandra ke kaaj sanvaare

Laaye sanjivan lakhan jiyaaye

Shri raghuvir harashi ur laaye

Raghupati kinhi bahut badhaayi

Tum mam priye bharat-hi sam bhaai

Sahas badan tumharo yash gaave

As kahi shripati kanth lagaave

Sankadik brahmadi muneesa

Naarad saarad sahit aheesa

Yam kuber digpal jahan te

Kavi kovid kahi sake kahan te

Tum upkaar sugreevahin keenha

Ram milaay rajpad deenha

Tumharo mantra vibheeshan maana

Lankeshwar bhay sub jag jaana

Yug sahastra jo jan par bhaanu

Leelyo tahi madhur phal jaanu

Prabhu mudrika meli mukh maahee

Jaladhi langhi gaye achraj naahee

Durgaam kaaj jagat ke jete

Sugam anugraha tumhre tete

Ram dware tum rakhvaare

Hoat na agya binu paisare

Sub sukh lahai tumhari sarna

Tum rakshak kaahu ko darna

Aapan tej samhaaro aapai

Teenhon lok haank te kanpai

Bhoot pisaach nikat nahin aavai

Mahaavir jab naam sunavai

Naase rog harai sab peera

Japat nirantar hanumant beera

Sankat se hanuman chudavai

Mann karam vachan dyan jo lavai

Sab par raam tapasvee raaja

Tinke kaaj sakal tum saaja

Aur manorath jo koi lavai

Sohi amit jeevan phal pavai

Charon yug partap tumhaara

Hai persidh jagat ujiyaara

Saadhu sant ke tum rakhwaare

Asur nikandan ram dulhaare

Ashta sidhi nav nidhi ke dhaata

Us var deen janki maata

Raam rasaayan tumhare paasa

Sada raho raghupati ke daasa

Tumhare bhajan raam ko pavai

Janam janam ke dukh bisravai

Anth kaal raghuvir pur jayee

Jahaan janam hari-bakht kahayee

Aur devta chit na dharehi

Hanumanth se hi sarve sukh karehi

Sankat kate mite sab peera

Jo sumirai hanumat balbeera

Jai jai jai hanuman gosahin

Kripa karahu gurudev ki nyahin

Jo sat baar paath kare koyi

Chutehi bandhi maha sukh hoyi

Jo yah padhe hanuman chalisa

Hoye siddhi sakhi gaureesa

Tulsidaas sada hari chera

Keejai das hrdaye mein dera

Pavantnayi sankat harana mangal murti roopa

Ram lakhan sita sahita hrdaye basahu sur bhoopa



The spirit gets liberation forever leaving Pragya's body forever. Abhi watches the spirit vanishes forever. He hugs unconscious Pragya emotionally. Later Pragya comes in senses and finds Abhi holding her hands giving her smile.

Pragya : I troubled you a lot right?

Abhi : You are right, I never had this much trouble for wooing in any girl

Pragya hits him with pillow staring angrily

Abhi : But to get somebody special, one has to cross some hurdles (kisses her forehead)

Pragya remembers her father and starts crying but is consoled by Abhi.

Pragya : He left me alone

Abhi : If you cry like this than his spirit would haunt me that I am not keeping his daughter happy, I promised him that I will be with you forever right

Pragya nods positively and decides to start her life afresh

After few days

The room is decorated with candle and roses for the newly wedded couple and with heart shaped on bed.

Pragya is sitting on couch waiting for Abhi to come. He comes into the room and finds her waiting for him.

Abhi : So what do you want from me, everything of mine is yours now

Pragya : its time you remember your promise of singing the tune you only made for me

Abhi comes close to her and grabs his guitar. Pragya gets warmed seeing the love in his lyrics for her and looks down. Abhi witnesses her emotional face and pulls into passionate kiss.

Abhi : From today this tears are too worthy, don't waste it

Pragya : And your life it mine (kiss on his cheeks)

Both of them consummate their relationship after getting rid of the a bad curse they have been suffering from years.

Ho ho ho o o wo...
Wo oo wo..

Karta hoon tujh mein din guzar main
Karta hoon tujh mein shab basar
Karta hoon tujh mein hi sehar main
Jeeta hoon tujh ko dekh kar
Dil tere bin thehra sa hai
Tu dhadkano ka hai safar
Kaanton bhara har raasta
Phoolon ki hai tu rehguzar

Jaavedaan hai ishq tujh se jaavedaan hai
Jaan o dil ke darmiyaan hai, darmiyaan tu haan
Jaavedaan hai ishq tujh se jaavedaan hai
Tujh mein hi dil ud raha hai aasmaan tu haan

Ho ho ho o o wo...

Saath tera jab se hai mujhko mila
Waqt ki shaakhon pe hai har pal khila
Zindagi se ab nahi koi gila
Jitna hai tu utna hoon main
Naa kuch zyada naa hoon kam
Tujhse shuru hota hoon main
Hota hoon tujhpe hi khatam

Jaavedaan hai ishq tujh se jaavedaan hai
Jaan o dil ke darmiyaan hai, darmiyaan tu haan
Jaavedaan hai ishq tujh se jaavedaan hai
Tujh mein hi dil ud raha hai aasmaan tu haan

Maine tujhko is tarah se hai jiya
Aandhiyon me jaise jalta hai diya
Ishq se har faasle ko tay kiya
Jo the juda humse khafa lamhe wo saare kat gaye
Tum mil gaye banke subah jo the andhere hat gaye

Jaavedaan hai ishq tujh se jaavedaan hai
Jaan o dil ke darmiyaan hai, darmiyaan tu haan
Jaavedaan hai ishq tujh se jaavedaan hai
Tujh mein hi dil ud raha hai aasmaan tu haan


Sorry guys I had no more to write for this story but I promise to write another horror story soon 😊

Edited by ashpat3 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
its awesome love it very much nicee ending of curse ss of abhigya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Awww.this,was a very nice story.and a happy ending also.
This was not a sad ending actually,at least prahys got abhi in replacement of his late father.and they are also free of the spirit. They are also living happily. What else matters buddy!!😊 So in my POV it is a very splendid story you have made.
Do write more as your msg indicates that you will write. So ,waiting for them . but hold on..take your time and I wish that you will write the best story which everybody will love RIGHT,!!!😃

P.s.-I do not said that this was a bad move. This was Also a good story. However wanna see more of your stuff which everyone will remember.👍🏼

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