Curse : Abhigya SS Part 7 (Pg 6)Completed

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys this is my first time writing a small horror stories. Please leave your feedback so I can continue or not
Pragya : Raised up in a conservative family, daughter of a Thakur. Very sophisticated and dutiful daughter.

Abhi : Free living guy who is brought up in lap of luxury. Does not believe in superstition and very modern NRI from America but lovable at heart. Falls for Pragya heads over heel.

Thakur Pratap : Father of Pragya, very well know Thakur of Vadhapur. The richest person in Bhopal.

Theme : The plot revolves around a haunted palace which was owned by Thakur Pratap's ancestors years ago but was sold by Pratap due to personal reasons. Deep mysteries are hidden which are haunting to Pratap's daughter Pragya years later. The story unfolds how his daughter manages to save herself from the mistakes done by his fathers' ancestors.

Part 1
The story opens with a group of college students visiting a big palace in small town of Vadhapur. People consider to be a haunted palace and all students are warned to not go on the second floor at any cost. One of the student in the group named Ruby ignores the warning thinking it is rumor and old superstition. The whole group reaches the destination and are stunned to see the beautiful palace. In the group another girl who is Ruby's best friend Pragya also joins the tour to the palace.
Pragya looks at the exterior of palace very strangely and stares for some minutes. Her friend brings her to senses at the nick of time.

Ruby : where are you lost? come on

Veer (tour guide) : Guys we will stay here for some hours but nobody will go near the second floor room, got it

Everybody starts looking inside the palace while Ruby sneakingly goes to the second floor in spite of Pragya warning her.

Ruby : This is all fake, don't worry I will come back soon, I will not get another opportunity to take pictures for my portfolio

Pragya : Please go carefully

Ruby walks to the second floor and is totally isolated without any noise. She looks around the hallway and gets lost in the beauty of the floor. She starts to get scared when she sees a big painting of a bengali dancer. Ruby gets lost in the painting when a small ball falls from stair and chill start to run in her spine.

The group starts to leave while Kaya gets worried when Ruby does not return after long time.

Veer: Is everybody here? Pragya, where is Ruby?

Pragya : Sir actually (Stammers)

Veer : Speak up Pragya, where is Ruby?

Pragya : She went to the second floor and did not return back (says with terrified voice)

Veer scolds Pragya for supporting Ruby and avoiding his warning. He tells the members to start looking for Ruby.

Veer : I will take strict against Ruby after we go back, you all are my responsibility, if anything happens you I will have to answer your families and authority.

Everybody starts looking for Ruby and finally finds her unconscious at the entrance of second floor.

Pragya : Ruby, are you okay (pats her face)

Rohit : Sir, I think she is in shock, lets take her to hospital

The group rushes Ruby to hospital but gets worried when doctor informs them about Ruby is under observation due to shock.

Pragya : what (shocked)

Doctor : Only prayers can save her, we are keeping her under observation

Rohit : Pragya, you don't worry she will be fine

Pragya ; this is all my fault I should have not let go alone

Rohit : Its okay

Late at night it is silent in the hospital when the bottle of oxygen turns into blood. One of the nurse passing from the room sees a desk drawer moving and one of the vase falls on ground by itself. She immediately calls the security waking the staff too. Everybody gets horrified seeing Ruby in the air touching the celling. Her hair are loosed with dark black eyes and smiling smirky. She throws a table on one of the staff. The spirit throws Ruby down on bed when Pragya comes in with the God's statue. The doctor tells Veer to take Ruby to avoid risking his hospital.

Part 2 : Pg 2
Part 3 : Pg 3
Part 4 : Pg 4
Part 5 : Pg 4
Part 6 : Pg 5
Part 7 : Pg 6
Edited by ashpat3 - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh poor ruby. What did ruby see.? I did not get that.😕
What will pragya do now? And how will abhi meet them?
Do continue please, it will make an amazing concept. 👍🏼

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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh por ruby
how will abhigya meet?
it sounds really interesting
do continue i want to know how the story will progress
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good start 👍🏼...

Horror is one of my favourite genre, in terms of watching anyway 😆...

And by the way where is Abhi?!...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow! It's very interesting!!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi dear thanks for pm me🤗. This is your first horror story. congrats. 🥳
Loved it. ❤️Will wait for the next. Plz continue soon. 😊
Edited by kirti1212 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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that is amazing SS of Abhigya
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Part 2

Ruby is shifted to her house where her family are tensed about the whole situation.

Veer ; We appointed a nurse but doctor said only prayers can save her now, I will take your leave now

Pragya travels back to her house near Vadhapur and gets scared after the incident with Ruby. Her father is out of town and is all alone in the big house. Late at night there is noise of bird on the roof of house. Pragya wakes up hearing a noise of an anklet and sees somebody's shadow running outside the room. She tries to call somebody but in vain. She hears somebody calling her name softly while she walks in hallway. Her hair are blowed by somebody from back but she could not see anybody.

Pragya : who is there (goes near balcony)

Noise of wind from outside. Pragya sees the doors shutting and opening due to the wind outside. She goes out of the palace when she spots an old woman sitting on the bench. She goes near the women but gets scared seeing the eyes of woman and runs from there. She breathes heavily after reaching the road and gets unconscious. A silver accord car comes forward and person inside the car comes out and take her to home. The guy is none other than Abhi who is Pragya's childhood friend.

Abhi : Doctor is she okay?

Doctor : She is just in shock, she will regain consciousness tomorrow morning don't worry

Abhi : thank you doctor, thank god I found her at this time

Doctor ; do you know her?

Abhi : she is my childhood friend and my dad's friend's daughter

The doctor leaves and Abhi lets Pragya take rest. Next day Pragya regains consciousness and finds herself in another house. Abhi comes in the room and teases her as usual.

Pragya : What am i doing here?

Abhi : Wow somebody lost their memory, at least try to remember me

" Even if I lose memory but I cannot forget you" says Pragya annoyingly

Abhi : you are still that same, you never learnt how to say thank you to your savior

Pragya : I say thanks to people who save genuinely

Abhi : You are always in mood of fighting, it is your hobby and by the way what were you doing in the middle of road

Pragya : Dad was not at home and there were strange noises coming but why am I telling this to you, modern NRI

Abhi ; you are right, are you trying to say that ghost came to meet you yesterday but honestly he would run away from you (teases)

Pragya throws pillows on him and runs after him.

Abhi : hey fatso

Pragya : how did you call me fatso ? I will kill you

Abhi : see thats why I told you ghost would not dare to harm you

Pragya : shut up!!!

Abhi : Okay stop fighting now, I need to talk something important with you

Pragya : what is it?

Abhi : after yesterday incidence, you can stay here because your dad told me to take care of you

Pragya : I don't need your help do you get it ?

Abhi : Fine, then you can stay in your haunted house

Pragya : why do you need to joke for everything, it is serious

Abhi : Come on, you are modern girl and stop believing all this things, it superstition

Pragya : I don't care about your NRI thinking, I am leaving right now and thank you for saving my life

Abhi : okay fine, I will not trouble you but till your dad returns you will be safe here

Pragya : I am only staying here only on dad's insistence

Veer informs Pragya about Ruby's condition is stable and not able to regain consciousness.

Abhi : what happened?

Pragya narrates everything to Abhi confusing him more. He tells Pragya about Ruby being in shock only due to trauma.

Abhi : she might be sick thats why

Pragya ; I am telling you there is something more to it because she got unconscious after she went to that floor

Abhi : maybe we can open that room on second floor and find out the truth

Pragya : have you gone crazy ? opening that room is inviting death (leaves) you will not do anything wrong

Abhi : I cannot see you like this Pragya I will find out the truth as soon I can but before that I have to find out what is the secret behind that haunted palace

Edited by ashpat3 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update.
Ress/unresss. Oh my gosh this was an amazing update.
Pragya is gonna stay in the house with abhi. And pragya can help ruby in bringing her senses back. Am I right?? 😕
Open the mystery of the haunted house in next chapter. And start the story of abhigya. 😳
Update soon.
Edited by Tisha1313 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow it's amazing really Ur good yar.. it's starting so ok but I expectation that still much more horror is thr when they reach the haunted house of second floor.. then in bewteen make some special view abhigya also it's relax us from horror..

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