Curse : Abhigya SS Part 7 (Pg 6)Completed - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4


Late at night Pragya calls Abhi and shares her plight to him who consoles her of staying strong.

Abhi : you cannot be weak, if we are destined to meet then nobody will be able to separate us

Pragya : I am sorry (cries on phone)

Abhi : don't worry I will be fine, you take of yourself, bye

Pragya : Bye

Abhi goes to meet the priest who has the keys for the second floor room. He informs Abhi about the mansion have the spirit of a bengali dancer.

Priest : It is a grave mistake done by some ancestors to that dancer thats why she is finding chance to hurt the daughters of that ancestor

Abhi : You mean Pragya?

Priest : Yes, I know her father Pratap, one of his ancestor called Vikram fell in love with the bengali dancer and they insulted her when she was pregnant and was killed. Before she died she promised to not let any girl marry in the coming generation who will have daughters.

Abhi is shaken up hearing the whole story and starts fearing about Pragya's safety. He asks him the solution to save Pragya.

Priest : There is no solution of this problem Abhi, I recommend you to let that girl stay safe and even you can be harmed due to this thing

Abhi : , I respect you a lot please

Priest : I recommend you to not mess up your both life and do not do the mistake of opening that door because it will bring doom to you and Pragya

Abhi goes to Pragya's house house and brings a red wedding dress with him but her father rages at him.

Pragya : Dad please, today you have to tell me the reason

Pratap : You go inside Pragya

Pragya : But dad

"Did you not hear what I said" said Pratap angry due to which Pragya leaves

Pratap drags Abhi out and warns him to leave his daughter.

Abhi ; I know everything, but I guess you forgot that selling that mansion cannot change your fate

Pratap is shocked to hear the whole truth

Abhi : Your daughter is suffering due to your ancestor's deeds and you did not tell her anything

Pratap : Now that you know, I request you to stay away from Pragya if you want her to be safe

Abhi : you might not do anything but I will not let my love die like this

Pratap : If anything happens to you then what will I tell your father that I let you die, you are like my son thats why I cannot risk your life like this

Abhi : then why didn't you tell anything to Pragya

Pratap ; I sold that mansion after it started to haunt Pragya before you came back to India but I did not know that my daughter will have pay for our deeds, you can call me selfish but I am choosing my daughter's life over her happiness

Pragya overhears everything and agrees with her father's decision.

Abhi : What are you saying Pragya

Pratap leaves the couple alone for a while.

Pragya : Abhi, your life is too worthy for me right now (cups his face) if anything happens to you I will never forgive myself

Abhi : Nothing will happen to me as long as you are with me but going away from you will kill me

Pragya : Please promise me you will never meet me after today

Abhi : At least keep this ring with you as a token of my love (puts ring in her fist)

Pratap feels helpless seeing her daughter's plight and apologizes for his mistake.

Pragya : Dad, you don't have to worry, your daughter will never do anything against your wish

Pratap : I am sorry dear I could not give you the happiness I wanted you to give

Pragya : I will not meet Abhi after today I promise

Abhi makes Priest's daughter Ana who is his friend to steal the keys of the haunted room. He reaches the second floor of the room and opens the door of the haunted room. Some kind of powder falls on him when he opens it. There is complete silent without a single noise inside the room. Pragya starts to feel restless when she opens the window of her room.

Pratap : what happened dear?

Pragya : I don't know my heart is feeling restless something terrible is going to happen

Pratap : My child nothing will happen to you till I am alive, lets go have dinner now

Abhi witnesses the paintings of king and some of palace things. Pragya finds a bad omen when milk falls down from her hands. The cat starts to drink the milk and after sometime it dies much to the horror of Pragya and her father.

Pragya : Dad, did you see that?

Pratap : I feel somebody had tampered with that door thats why it is happening

Edited by ashpat3 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
nice update poor abhigya they both are badly curse .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Amazing update ash, loved it.
Hope Abhi is safe.
Continue soon plz.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Getting interesting ash :)...abhi taking so much risk ...
Thanks for the pm :)


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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
OMG abhi went inside. He will be in trouble.
Why abhigya are apart?
Anyways nice update. Continue soon. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Part 5
Pragya goes back to her room and is horrified with the whole scene. She sees her room messed up and the wall has all blood saying her countdown has began.

Pragya : Dad (shouts loud)

Pratap comes rushingly to her room and sees the threaten on the wall with blood.

Pragya : I am scared dad, what is happening?

Pratap : Don't worry dear I will call the priest tomorrow and find out, but for that I have to travel another town tonight and I will be back tomorrow

Pragya : thats okay, I will be fine

Abhi later drives car after he visited the haunted room in fear. He gets restless after what he experienced in the room.

Flashback

Abhi left the haunted room and closed it when he hears the noise of anklet. Somebody from inside tries to open the door and shouts loud speaking Bengali initially.

Abhi : Who is it?

Voice : Your death, (laughs evilly)

Abhi : what do you want

Voice : I will not leave that girl and you, on Durgastmi I will kill that girl and after that I will get liberation

After a while the spirit leaves when Abhi wears the holy locket priest gave him.

Flashback ends

Abhi stops the car in the middle of the road. Pragya is unable to sleep and gets up when somebody tights her neck with scarf.

Pragya : Coughs loudly

She realizes her amulet is lost somewhere due to which she gets illusion. Pragya goes outside her room and sees the door is opening slowly due to wind. She goes inside the room and sees the window is open. Few minutes later Pragya goes outside near the well and starts running on road seeing Ruby's bloodshed death body . Abhi goes to Pragya's house since it is near when he witnesses Pragya running and is about to hit by truck but is saved by Abhi in the nick of time.

Abhi : Its okay (pats her back)

Pragya cries sobberly in his arms but is consoled. While walking back to house Pragya's leg are tied by a rope near the well and is taken down in the well. Abhi panics seeing the scene and tries to hold Pragya but is hit by rod on his head by somebody. There is loud scream of Pragya who is dragged down inside the well. Nobody is able to witness the scene due to the late night. Next day Pragya is found lying unconsciously outside her house by her father.

Pratap : Pragya dear (pats her face)

Pragya does not open her eyes and is taken under observation but in vain.

Pratap : doctor what is wrong with her?

Doctor : she is in huge shock, only prayer can save her now because she is suffering from trauma


Precap : Major drama of Pragya being possessed

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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Oh gosh! What a major twist. Loved it.
Pragya is unconscious in hospital and abhi, he was hit with a stick right. where is abhi in the end of chapter?? I did not get that.
Update soon. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Tisha1313

Oh gosh! What a major twist. Loved it.

Pragya is unconscious in hospital and abhi, he was hit with a stick right. where is abhi in the end of chapter?? I did not get that.
Update soon. Thanks for pm.


Where is Abhi will be revealed next part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Horror movies all give u the thrill by only through the visual but here ur story is giving that effect.. really ur words r visualising the scene in front of the eyes.. fabulous dear..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Amazing update Ash.
Loved it.
Thanjs for pm.

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