Curse : Abhigya SS Part 7 (Pg 6)Completed - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's a nice thriller story ash :).. Name it soon
Thanx for the pm :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love horror writing and this is getting interesting!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow
it was amazing.
ii m really xcited
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tisha1313

Nice update.

Ress/unresss. Oh my gosh this was an amazing update.
Pragya is gonna stay in the house with abhi. And pragya can help ruby in bringing her senses back. Am I right?? 😕
Open the mystery of the haunted house in next chapter. And start the story of abhigya. 😳
Update soon.


You are right Ruby will come to senses later, some suspense is good before opening mystery 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi dear thanks for pm me. I really Loved it.❤️
This story is going very interesting now. 😛
Plz continue soon. Waiting for the next part.
Sorry for late reply. And also thanks for the title.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3

Abhi goes to the haunted palace without informing Pragya. He sees the exterior of mansion and goes inside the mansion. By walking he reaches the second floor and sees the big paintings of all kings on wall. He sees the big door locked with all tantras. He also notices drops of blood near the door and find Ruby's bracelet.

Abhi : I am sure Ruby might have reached here and got unconscious, what would be inside this room

He meets a priest outside and asks about the key to the locked door on second floor.

Abhi : I want to go inside that door, can I get the keys for it?

Priest : the person who has the keys is out of town

Abhi : when will he come back?

Priest : I don't know, maybe two or three weeks

Abhi wonders another way of opening the door. Pragya calls Abhi and asks his whereabouts.

Pragya : I told you not to go at that place why don't you understand

Abhi : That is the only way we can find out the truth, by the way how is Ruby ? did she regain consciousness

Pragya : yeah I got call from her sister, I was going there

Abhi : I will come with you

Both of them reaches Ruby's house and finds from her mother about Ruby's worst condition. Her mother informs about Ruby not opening the door from long time. Everybody hears the noise of breaking glasses from room.

Pragya : Ruby open the door (knocks)

Abhi breaks the door but everybody gets shocked seeing Ruby sitting in the corner with scared face. She hides her face behind the couch. Pragya consoles her friend.

Ruby : Pragya, I am very scared, something wrong is happening

Pragya : I will not let anything happen to you, I promise you but first you tell me what did you see that day

Ruby : That door (flashback of closed door with all tantras), big painting (big painting of king)

Later while going outside Pragya also goes back to her memory when she had dreams of those kind of things. She is about to lose her balance but is consoled by Abhi.

Abhi : Are you okay?

Pragya : That painting, door Ruby is telling, I used to get dreams of it from childhood

Abhi ; whatever it is, this link is related with Pragya

Pragya : what are you thinking?

Abhi ; nothing, lets go home

Both goes back to their home and have their dinner. Suddenly the lights go off which scares Pragya.

Pragya : I am scared of dark

Abhi : Don't worry, it might fuse problem I will fix it

Pragya holds the candle when Abhi tries to the fix the light. Both of them gets very intimate to each other but Pragya sees a shadow behind Abhi and is frightened.

Abhi : what happened?

Pragya : there is somebody over there (shows him the place)

Abhi looks behind but finds nobody and asks her to calm down.

Pragya : Trust me, I saw somebody over there

Abhi : You need some rest, go to sleep

Pragya tries to sleep but sees somebody outside the window. She goes to see but cannot see anybody. She starts sweating hearing weird noises outside the palace. Abhi comes from behind.

Abhi : what are you doing here?

Pragya : i could hear the noise of anklet, trust me

Abhi : Come I will be with you in your room

Pragya in her dreams gets some flashbacks of a the locked door in the palace and the some paintings. She wakes up in fear.

Abhi : Calm down (cups her face)

Pragya : That door,

Later Pragya sleep resting her head on Abhi's lap caressing her hair. Next day Abhi shares his feeling with Rohit for Pragya.

Abhi : you know I have always loved Pragya from childhood but I could never told her

Rohit : But why didn't you tell her?

Abhi : Thats why i came back to India but see the joke of destiny

Rohit : don't worry everything will be fine

The priest Acharya returns who has the key for the locked door in the haunted palace. Abhi and Pragya goes to meet Acharya and gets shock after knowing everything

Pragya : what happened?

Acharya : that palace is known as haunted due to a grave mistake done by some ancestors

Abhi : what do you mean?

Acharya : I suggest you both to not open that door, your friend did the mistake of going on that floor and awake that spirit

Abhi : Spirit?

Acharya ; Yes, that room you are talking about has that spirit of bengali dancer which your friend saw poster of, I cannot tell you more about it because I don't know anything

Pragya : Please tell us whatever you know

Acharya : It will be better for you to stay away from this matter, I will give you amulet, it will protect you from that illusions you see everywhere, at any cost don't remove it

The priest ties the amulet on Pragya's wrist and does some kind of mantras in it.

Abhi decides to confess his love for Pragya to divert her mind from the incidence. He organizes the candle light dinner at his home in the evening.

Pragya : what is all this?

Abhi sits on his knees and proposes her for marriage.

Pragya : do you know what you are saying?

Abhi : i only know that I always saw one girl's face when I close my eyes and that is you, I will not force you

Pragya is overwhelmed to hear his confession as she always waited for Abhi's proposal and agrees to it. Abhi puts on the ring to her finger happily. Both of them share romantic moments together when are caught by Pragya's dad Thakur Pratap who reaches back to town.

Pragya : Dad (goes to hug him)

Abhi : Uncle when did you come back ?

Pratap : just today, what was going on here ?

Pragya : Dad (stammers) you are getting all wrong

Abhi : yes uncle

" I did not ask anything to you" says Pratap angrily to Abhi

Pragya : dad, what is wrong?

Pratap : Abhi, I told you take care of my daughter not to make her settle here, and you this is what i taught you

Pragya : but what is wrong with Abhi? he is friends' son

Pratap : Remove that ring right now and come with me

Pragya is taken forcefully by her father while Abhi picks up the ring fallen on floor. She asks her father about the reason but he refuses to tell her.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Her father ugh!! Poor abhi and pragya. 😭
What is reason that her father will give for break up of the couple??? Open the mystery of the house. And mystery that when abhigya will meet again.
Thanks for pm. It's an amazing horrified update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi dear plz continue soon. It's going more and more interesting. 😛Loved it. ❤️
Thanks for pm me. Waiting for the next part.
Eagerly Wants to know the reason why pragya's dad behaving like this. And abhigya's love story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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poor abhigya what is the reason of pragya dad to behaver very bad to her daughter love for abhi .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Awesome update ash, loved it.
Continue soon plz.
Thanks for pm.

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