Abhigya SS - Vulnerable - PART 7 UPDATED May1st Pg16 - Page 6

Loved it.. Plz update soon...

Originally posted by: kubare

Yeah Rani you updated...

After you got me to read "Unlocked by Courtney Milan " again...😆😆😆

Wow..wow..wow...

Loved it..loved the emotions that you described so beautifully his and hers...

Aww...naturally he's not a saint and I see she does not want to be one too..Good...

Loved it and can't wait to see where you them and us...next...

Aww thanks Krish! Glad you liked the emotional componenet of it.

Originally posted by: deefan

loved it Rani!!! Enjoyed reading it so much..

I could picture Abhi saying Untie me..quick n straight to the point 😆

Thank you Dee! Yes, Abhigya are trying to get to the point now 😆

Originally posted by: simsim25

Loved it Rani! Fab work! Loved reading it, why did you leave it there? Do continue soon because this is utterly amazing!

Thanks Simsim! I left it there because I'm evil😉😈

Originally posted by: sam78

Excellent update. Please con't soon.

Thanks Sam!

Originally posted by: rbb1

great update beautifully written

Thanks Ray! 😃

Originally posted by: sudanindia2014

Suddenly he felt hot tears cascade down his face.You did this to her. He ached to hold her, to protect her, but he only had his lips. He rained kisses on her face, trying to catch each droplet, but they were falling too fast. A kiss on her eyelid. I'm sorry. One on her left cheek. I'm sorry. Another on her nose. I'm sorry.

Rani ..If you wrote nothing but these lines it will still made my day ..what a romantic moment.. so full of love tender regret and many many other oh so beautiful emotions ...I can write a whole page to count the emotions in this moment only ..so so amazing
the " untie me " is shivering inducer and a trigger for an unlimited imaginations..so brilliant to stop here as a writer but for me as a reader I can not tell you how I feel right now.. If I can I will jump right into your head and read the rest ..please please update soon 😊

Aww thank you Nuha! It means so much to me that you liked the emotional aspect of it. 😳 That particular passage is a favourite of mine too. And that "untie me" was put in to satisfy my evil impulses.😈 Thank you so, so much for reading and commenting! 😃

Originally posted by: frenzyy

Nice

Thanks Frenzzy!

Originally posted by: indi

Thank you, Rani!!!! That was lovely 👏!!!! Loved the way you related their inner thoughts and feelings!!!

Most of all, I loved this "not a saint" Abhi 😆!!!!

Thank you Indi! I see that "not a saint" Abhi has a lot of fans 😆

Originally posted by: bhanu_frn

Loved it.. Plz update soon...

Wow!! Rani amazing!! both are so vulnerable ATM! I loved how you wrote AbhiGya here! So impactful!!

Its too good...awesome...You should update soon...!!

Wow.. Seriously the story is amazing.. Bang on.. Loved Pragya and Abhi's characters.. The changes are amazing.. And I am do happy to see her moving on.. :)
The kiss was beautifully written... Seriously I felt so good reading it..
Looking forward to the next part.. :)

Loved d chapters.. Waiting for more

Hello there Gorgeous!

Right, now I am just going to dive into this one - I've said this before (I think) and I'll say it again, love scenes are quite possibly the most difficult thing a writer can write. One has to ensure that they are balancing tastefulness, with abandon and yet at the same time ensuring that there is method to the encounter. A reason.

Originally posted by: Diahh

Wow!! Rani amazing!! both are so vulnerable ATM! I loved how you wrote AbhiGya here! So impactful!!

Good job Rani!! Love love loved reading this!! Can't wait to see what happens when Pragya unites him! Update soon!!!

Lots of love to you!! ❤️

Thank you Diah!!😃😃

Originally posted by: nilmi

Its too good...awesome...You should update soon...!!

Thank you Nilmi! 😃

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

wow awesome, really hot

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: Nitya_Suresh

Wow.. Seriously the story is amazing.. Bang on.. Loved Pragya and Abhi's characters.. The changes are amazing.. And I am do happy to see her moving on.. :)
The kiss was beautifully written... Seriously I felt so good reading it..
Looking forward to the next part.. :)

Thank you Nitya! Have tried to strike a balance between Pragya moving on and her still loving him. So glad you liked it. 😃

Originally posted by: ArVi-licious

Loved d chapters.. Waiting for more

Thank you Arvi!

Originally posted by: srilu_123

Fantastic

Thank you!

Originally posted by: harisha24

wow ! excently written !!

Originally posted by: advena

Hello there Gorgeous!

Right, now I am just going to dive into this one - I've said this before (I think) and I'll say it again, love scenes are quite possibly the most difficult thing a writer can write. One has to ensure that they are balancing tastefulness, with abandon and yet at the same time ensuring that there is method to the encounter. A reason.

This was beautifully scripted. Like really. The way you, had Abhi, go from the jealous, guy, to the guy who realizes there is more to this encounter than just sex, was so believable and so plausible, that I could see it happening - I could see him being that sweet first lover who wouldn't want her first kiss to end in tears, I could see Pragya giving in just this one time.

I like how Abhi, despite being pretty low on the totem pole of righteousness, still feels used when he thinks he's a virginity-removal device. I like how Pragya assures him he's more than that. I was actually quite surprised that Abhi pushed her to say what she wanted - it was very, primal of him, I think I was even more surprised that Pragya did it. Gotta say, 30 year old Pragya has definitely changed!

As always, Much Love,

- A

Listen, Miss! Don't you ever stop writing this!