Abhigya SS - Vulnerable - PART 7 UPDATED May1st Pg16

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@rbb1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Really nice update can't wait to read the next part

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Diahh

@Diahh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Rani Rani Rani! Loved it! Awesome as always! Vulnerable Abhi! Pragya in control! Can't wait for the next update coz I am dying to know how this would progress.

Thank you for the PM Rani! 😃 Lots of love!

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palbhar

@palbhar

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Wow! What a stupendous update!!! Love Pragya 's punishment...can't wait to see what She's going to do next!

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Oindrila B.

@OindrilaVirgoan

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

You should hit me..do telepathy..or go for the 'push-theory'..or even do voodoo-hoodoo..but you should sooo hit me!!! I realized I never commented on your fics..and am such an idiot!!!

This is beautiful writing...and loving the pace its progressing at..especially this last chap..!!

Keep up the good work, Rani...fantastic stuff - this :D

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advena

@advena

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Hello there!

Okay so this was definitely surprising! I was literally being slowly drawn in preparing myself for those soul crushing one liners when all on a sudden I was blushing like crazy, and looking over my shoulder to make sure no one else was reading from behind me. The sudden U turn was - WOW - unexpected - but WOW.

I want to know what prompted it though, why is Pragya suddenly so reckless - and why with him? What one earth is she thinking - not that I'm complaining - I mean Abhi tied down is not something anyone would complain about - but still ...what is she doing?Why is she doing it?

On to the writing though, amazing crafted, especially the sudden twist and the following scenario. Sensual scenes are generally pretty hard to write because you need to strike the balance between enough and not quite enough perfectly while maintaining characters, this was very well done. I love how your writing tone now includes sudden flashes of character thoughts - makes it feel so very real!

Waiting to see more soon!

- A

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indi

@indi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Thank you putturani!!! Loving this bold Pragya 😛!!!!

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

oh man rani i got an email about this thread and got so excited seeing update 15/1 and forgot that that was yesterday where you are because it's today where i am 😆

i won't rush you for the next part...i want you to write it to your satisfaction. because then it will be mind blowing for us and you'll be happy with it too ;)

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: advena
Hello there!

Okay so this was definitely surprising! I was literally being slowly drawn in preparing myself for those soul crushing one liners when all on a sudden I was blushing like crazy, and looking over my shoulder to make sure no one else was reading from behind me. The sudden U turn was - WOW - unexpected - but WOW.

I want to know what prompted it though, why is Pragya suddenly so reckless - and why with him? What one earth is she thinking - not that I'm complaining - I mean Abhi tied down is not something anyone would complain about - but still ...what is she doing?Why is she doing it?

On to the writing though, amazing crafted, especially the sudden twist and the following scenario. Sensual scenes are generally pretty hard to write because you need to strike the balance between enough and not quite enough perfectly while maintaining characters, this was very well done. I love how your writing tone now includes sudden flashes of character thoughts - makes it feel so very real!

Waiting to see more soon!

- A

I think you're like my writing conscience Advena - immediately picking up on things that in hindsight, I should have explained it better. Every time you point out something about the character's motivations I go and fix it in the next chapter - I guess next time I should just run things by you beforehand 😛What I mean to say is, thank you so much for helping me see past my own blindspot when it comes to my own characters' motivations. This story's been bopping around in my head since November and I'm so familiar with my own characters I sometimes forget that they don't reside in other people's heads all the time like they do in mine!😆 So thank you!😃

I'm really glad the "smut" worked for you. I think suggestion is much hotter than explicitness and I'm so glad you think that balance was achieved.

And let me confess something - the reason I started putting the characters' thoughts in is because, just like LM Montgomery's characters, I love italics and needed to find some way of putting them in!😆

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: -mina-
oh man rani i got an email about this thread and got so excited seeing update 15/1 and forgot that that was yesterday where you are because it's today where i am 😆

i won't rush you for the next part...i want you to write it to your satisfaction. because then it will be mind blowing for us and you'll be happy with it too ;)

Aiyoo Minaji so sorry! These darned time differences!And take this incident as a little payback for almost stopping my heart with your new Hookup taster! 😆 Now THAT is called anticipation. And let me tell you one thing...actually our discussions about consent after The Ultimatum kind of inspired me to write this fic as well...because my mind went from consent to power dynamics to tying up... to you know 😆😆 So thank you!