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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yipeee I just finished reading your other story - so much I am Lukin fwd to this one
Luvin the start Jaldi pls update karo
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful start. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Back with another update!! Do comment once again!!


Part 2:

The next evening when everyone was getting ready and taking place in the cars to leave for the beach house which was going to be a long drive Abhi was surprised to see Tanu.

"What is she doing here?" Abhi thought. He decided to ask Aliya.

"Aren't you glad bhai? I managed to convince Daadi to let her come with us." She said happily. "At least you won't have to be stuck with that bhenji again."

Abhi managed to stop him from shouting at her in anger. Why did she and Tanu always have to use that word to describe her each time? She had a name god damn it but when did he ever use it? But then he was her husband. "Since when did I think of her as my wife?" thought Abhi, again he got confused. "What is happening to me?"

Daadi came out with her friends and told everyone to take their places in the cars. Tanu was about to get in with Abhi but before he could say anything Daadi came to his rescue.

"Tanu." She called. "You go in the other car with Aliya, Akaash, Mithali, Raj and their kids. Pragya will come here with Abhi." She beckoned Pragya over and Tanu came out of the car. Tanu pushed Pragya accidently' on purpose in anger but just before she could fall Abhi caught her hand and pulled her towards him. They looked in each other's eyes for a long time before Dasi interrupted.

"Ahem ahem" Dasi coughed getting in with them in the back seat. "Your romance can wait until we get there. I'm sorry but you can't do all this here." She laughed at Abhi and Pragyas face which had gone bright red.

"Abhi you're a rock-star damn it!" Abhi thought "Why the hell are you blushing!" He cursed himself but laughed at Pragyas face.

"You actually have enough blood in your body to blush." He teased her. "Kishmish jaisi sukhi Chashmish." He poked her in the stomach but Daadi told him to stop teasing her from the front. She told them to put their seatbelts on as if they were babies. Pragya tried to get hers but it was stuck. Abhi leaned over towards her just as Pragya turned her head and her lips touched his cheek.

"I'm sorry." She said wiping his cheek in case he started to shout at her but he didn't. He turned to look out of the window and smiled.

"Why the hell am I smiling?" he thought "Shouldn't I be angry?" He carried on staring out of the window and he began to daydream again. He saw a woman shopping but it seemed as if it was Pragya. "How can that be her." He thought. He blinked his eyes and it turned out to be some other woman. He looked somewhere else but this time he saw someone else helping an old woman cross the road. "Chashmish?" he thought, again blinking his eyes to realise it was someone else. "Everywhere I look why do I see her?" he asked himself. What was happening to him?

His thoughts were interrupted when he felt Pragyas head on his shoulder. It had been some time since the journey started and she had begun to feel tired. She had tried to stay awake but tiredness had taken over her. Abhi watched her sleeping peacefully. The wind from the open window had blown her hair over her face. He carefully tucked it behind her ears and took her glasses off. He stared at her and before he realised he was asleep with his head on hers where he no doubt dreamed about her again.

A few hours later they both woke up to a voice; it was Daadi. She was telling them to get up as they had arrived at the beach house. Realising they were both leaning on each other they quickly got up. Pragyas dupatta had fallen on the seat and Abhi picked it up and put it around her. Tanu watched this from the far distance and scowled. Abhi saw her but decided to ignore her. He really couldn't be bothered to listen to her moans again.

As soon as everyone was inside Daadi told them that they could go and rest as it had been a long journey and showed them their rooms. Tanu had to go in the spare room as she wasn't part of the family and hadn't been there before while Pragya would obviously share the room with Abhi. Tanu stormed to her room in anger while everyone went to their rooms to unpack. Daadi told them to make sure they were ready by ten o clock the next day as she had planned a day out somewhere.

"You will find out tomorrow where we are going! I promise it will be fun. Goodnight everyone!!" she called before leaving for her room with Dasi.


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Inside Abhi and Pragyas room, Pragya had gone to the washroom to get changed while Abhi was sitting on the bed again lost in his thoughts. Tanu kept on calling him but he ignored her. Fed up and annoyed with her he turned the phone off and held his head. His mind was aching after thinking about what he really wanted. He felt bad that he was doing this to Tanu but the feeling she was showing towards him didn't seem like love, it seemed like obsession. Pragya came out and saw him holding his head. She asked him if she could massage his head as it would relax him. Abhi said yes not wanting to argue and laid his head in her lap. Pragya began to massage his head and he felt a feeling of relieve spread throughout his body. It was as if he had needed her hands touching him for ages now, like her hands were magic and he slowly fell asleep. He was smiling while sleeping and Pragya looked at him. She smiled and carefully moved his head onto the pillow and put the cover over him. She lay down next to him and eventually she fell asleep as well.


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Tanu was in her room on the bed and kept twisting and turning. "What has happened to my Abhi? He won't talk to me properly and won't pick his phone up either. This bhenji has changed him. He isn't the same Abhi he was a few months ago. Plus Aliyas plan keep on failing. I always relied on her plans but it seems as if she has run out of new ones." She thought and remembered the last plan which had failed miserably.

Aliya had planned to ruin Pragyas image in front of Daadis eyes and she had fainted after saying Pragya had an affair with Suresh. Seeing Daadis state Tanu had thought the plan worked but when she had gained conscious again she had asked why Aliya had accused her of such a thing because she knew about the fact that Pragyas marriage had been fixed with him and had been broken after Suresh refused. Abhi had been behaving differently towards her ever since. Pragya had become even greater in his eyes because she cared for his Daadi. No matter what Aliya and Tanu had tried everything had always failed and after these few months it had become harder to keep Abhi away from Pragya. "If I want to get rid of her then I am going to have to plan to get rid of her forever because Aliya is becoming hopeless and I can't lose my Abhi at any cost." Tanu smiled at her new cunning plan which would get rid of Pragya for once and for all...


Hope you all liked it!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
res :D

unres :)

LOVED IT SIMI!!

Uff this is so great!! Your writing is so sharp. I love the subtle AbhiGya romance happening, and even better that it's mostly from Abhi's side. You gave us an eyelock and a very Abhi taunt (sukhi chashmish has enough blood to blush 😲) and Abhi seeing her everywhere AND that super cute sleeping in the car bit - sooo much AbhiGya awesomeness! Love it so much. And Daadi is on point too. And you're doing a great job with Tanu, she's totally villainish but still understandable, I like it. Nice the way you included the Suresh drama too and made it a turning point for Abhi. All in all, great chapter! This story is shaping up so well, thank you for writing it and posting it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful!!!! Loved it!!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is something really good and interesting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing update and wonderful...I love it...I can't wait to read more pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Thank you 😊!!!! I'm loving this Abhi ... !!!! Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great update can't wait to read what happens next I like how Abhi let Pragya massage his head it's nice he is changing his feelings towards Pragya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Nice new story
Pm me please

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