Abhigya SS - Avenging Fate COMPLETED PAGE 11 19/11

Abhigya SS - Avenging Fate

Hi guys! I am back with another story. I am extremely glad you liked the last story called Lost and Found'. I would also like to thank my great new friend MINA for helping me with a very important part of the story, a great twist that may shock you at first but don't freak out guys!!! I promise for a happy ending because I hate sad endings that make you cry. I just can't cope with that sort though I do love reading them. I started to write this after getting fed up with Abhi and the way he always tries to show he hates Pragya. In this story he has too developed feelings but it will take something big for him to get out of his confusion which is understandable!! As usual I will look forward to reading your comments. Please leave the comment below and then I can update the story!!! Thanks once again to Mina!!!

Part 1 - Page 1

Part 2 - Page 2

Part 3 - Page 4

Part 4 - Page 6

Part 5 - Page 7

Part 6 - Page 8

Part 7 - Page 10

Part 8 - Page 11 (final chapter)

Part 1:

Daadi had called everyone at the dinner table to inform them about something she had been on planning for a while. She had noticed everyone always bickering about small stuff around the house. No one ever spoke to each other properly and she was getting sick and tired of it. Her wish had always been to see her family living happily and creating peace in the house but all she ever got to hear were the arguments about the littlest things. Whether it was Mithali moaning that she always did the work, Taiji wanting new things every minute or Abhi always moaning at Pragya for stuff she never did. They all thought Daadi didn't know anything when no one knew better than her...

"Right, I have planned a week trip for our family to go to our beach-house in Bhopal" Daadi announced at the table before everyone began to cheer. "I think we all need a rest from all of the work we have done and I think you all agree? We will be leaving tomorrow afternoon so you have all of tomorrow to start packing." Daadi finished her statement and left.

Everyone else too left to get ready for the trip the next day. Tanu stormed off in anger along with Aliya. "Great, you will all enjoy in Bhopal and I will wait here like an idiot!" Tanu moaned.

"Don't worry Tanu. I will ask Daadi if you can go." Aliya assured her and walked off to Daadis room to talk to her.

"Daadi this is not done" Aliya moaned entering her room.

"What happened beta?" Daadi asked getting up worried.

"Everyone has someone for the trip: Mithali Bhabhi has Raj, Pragya has Abhi, Tayaji and Taiji, you have Dasi but I don't have anyone." Aliya carried on moaning.

"Fine, who do you want to take?" Daadi asked.

"Can Tanu come with us because she is like a sister to me?" pleaded Aliya. "Pleeeaaasssee"

"Fine, tell Tanu to be ready by tomorrow evening." She said finally.

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Abhi was in his room and getting his stuff out ready to pack for the next evening when Pragya came in and started to get her stuff out. Lately he had been feeling very weird around her. He knew he hated her but he had started to find it hard to torture her nowadays. His mind always told him to hate her but his heart was floating on some other cloud. He had never felt this feeling before. Every time she came close to him he would always begin to fantasize about her. Her big full lip and her cheeks. He just wanted to cup them and kiss her... Abhi came out of his daydream. "I need to get a grip on myself" he thought. "Why am I thinking about kissing chashmish when it would have been the last thing I would have wanted to do about a few months ago. What has this chashmish done to me?" he thought.

Tanu had been annoying him lately. Normally it would be the other way round. He would always run away from Pragya to get to Tanu but now it had changed. Every time he saw Tanu he wanted to stay away from her. She kept on asking him when he was going to push that bhenji out of his life - oh how he hated it every time she used that word to describe Pragya. He was glad that he would be able to take a break from everything for once but things changed the next evening.

I know it was short but hopefully you guys liked it!!

Yay story from you I like concept I wonder what will happen in the trip can't wait to read your next update wonder his Abhi will feel when find out tanu is going with them

Nicely done...😃 I liked it. Especially the concept. Would love to see this family holiday actually in the show...😳

And this family really needs one...whatever you mentioned about them always moaning and groaning 😆 is pretty true! Well incorporated.

Nice start...loved the concept!!

Yay yay yay!! Fantastic start Simi!! Really like how you started with Daadi, very good way to set it up and you gave us a vivid summary of what life at the Mehra house is like. Aaliya's manipulation was so perfectly in character! Liked getting into Abhi's confused thoughts too, glad his heart is starting to soften. Great job with the beginning Simi, I know the rest will be awesome too and I'm sooo looking forward to it! And of course you're welcome :)

<3 to you and thanks for posting this!!

Wonderful story!!! Plz update soon

nice and Fantastic start I love the new concept a trip with a new decorated and unique story to come I like it ...I can't wait to read more...pls update soon

Thanks guys for all comments promise to update soon!! Glad you are all liking it!! Many more twisted yet to come!!

amazing update love it totally

Wow!!!what a wonderful start to the story.. Just a basic intro but soo much depth and intensity.. Loving the confused Abhi...typical trait...and that he is so glad that Tanu will not be going with them...If only he knew!Can't wait to read more!