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Posted: 10 years ago
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@part 1
Fab start...Well let's see what happens...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@part 2


This was really amazing and beautiful...
Hope this time Tanu is caught red handed...that lady is so irritating...
Loved the couple's chemistry...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please do not kill me after reading this!! It is a really big twist but bare with me!! I promise a happy ending!!


Part 3:

The next morning once everyone had arrived at the dining table and had finished breakfast Daadi announced that she had found out that there was a beautiful cliff like place near a river and she had planned the day out there.

"Sounds good" said Abhi and everyone else agreed. Tanu smirked to herself and thought it would be the perfect time to put her plan into action. She smiled again while everyone began to get into the car for the trip.

When they arrived at the cliff Daadi got them all together in a group. The sun was shining and everyone seemed happy. Daadi was glad to see no one arguing.

"You have an hour to have a look around and take photographs and then we will meet here for lunch" Daadi announced.

Mithali's kids ran forward wanting to climb over some rocks. They knew their mother and father were no fun and asking Aliya would be a mistake as she always snapped at them so they went to Pragya. They knew she was kind and she especially loved kids. They went over to her and grabbed her hands and ran forward with her. She played about with them showing them all sorts of different games. Abhi stared at her and smiled. She was amazing with kids and that was what he had always wanted to see in his wife. Someone that would take care of his family and make them happy. Not once had he seen Tanu playing with anyone or making them smile. All she ever wanted to do was talk about her modelling and beauty. She didn't know how to live for others whereas Pragya did. He smiled at her and carried on watching her but Tanu was getting irked seeing this.

"Abhi come on" she called. "Let's go that way" she pointed in the opposite direction to Pragya and everyone else. Abhi didn't hear her and carried on looking at Pragya running around.

"Abhi." Tanu called again louder but still he didn't even look in her direction.

"ABHI!!" She shouted and he jumped.

"What is it?" he snapped at her. "Will you please be quite? I need peace!"

Tanu stomped away in anger. She was going to have to put her plan into action before it got too late but she couldn't get a chance to meet Pragya on her own. She wasn't going to be able to do what she wanted with everyone around but Mithali's kids helped her unknowingly. They beckoned everyone to play hide and seek but Daadi told the kids to not go near the cliff as it was dangerous.

It was Abhi's turn to count while everyone ran away to hide. Tanu saw Pragya going somewhere else to everyone else and followed. She bent behind a rock near the edge of the cliff and Tanu followed her. Pragya felt weird with Tanu near her.

"What happened to her?" Pragya thought. "She hates me doesn't she then why...?" her thoughts were interrupted as she felt a hand push her over. She grabbed a rock before falling and looked up to see Tanu. She put her hand forward to help and Pragya was glad she was there. She reached her hand up but Tanu moved it back. She laughed at Pragya. Pragya was shocked.

"Tanu? Please help!" Pragya called but Tanu laughed again.

"What do you think I am? Mad?" she said. "Because of you my Abhi won't talk to me. You have changed him so much that he doesn't give me a second look. Who do you think you are to take my Abhi away from me?"

"Tanu your mistaken" Pragya said a sense of urgency growing within her. Her hand was slipping. She called for help but everyone was too far away for them to hear. She didn't know what to do. "Tanu, I never tried to take Abhi away from you. Please help me. You won't get anything by killing me."

"Yes I will!" She said "I will get my Abhi back!"

Abhi had found everyone except Pragya and Tanu. He saw a rock and began to walk towards it but a scream made him run. He arrived a second too late and saw Pragyas hand slipping and before he could reach out it was too late. Pragya had fallen.

"I tried to help her. I swear I did but her hand slipped from and she fell!" Tanu cried as everyone's face turned pale in horror.

"PRAGYA!!" Abhi screamed and stepped forwards wanting to save her but Akaash held him back.

"Bhai!" he said trying to calm him down. "Stop you will fall!" he shouted. No one knew what to do. They were too shocked to move. Akaash phoned the police and ambulance. When they arrived they asked everyone to move back. They carried out the search for the rest of the day while the family just stood there shocked. One second Pragya had been there and the next she was gone. The scene kept on flashing before him and he felt like punching himself. What if he had come earlier, then his chashmish would be standing next to him that moment.

The police squad came back and said they had found nothing but a dupatta in the river below the cliff.

"I'm sorry but the chances of her survival are very low. Seeing this dupatta she must have drowned. I am sorry we cannot do anything." Said the officer.

In some other village and old man was walking along the river with a pot of water when he saw a figure lying on the mud by the river. He walked over and was surprised to see a girl. Her clothes were torn and she had a few scratches on her body. He called for help and took her to his house. He gave her heat by the fire and covered her in many blankets. He put cream on her scratches and plastered them. He went outside to get food when a scream made him run back in. She had opened her eyes and was sitting up.

"What happened beta?" he asked. He looked at her eyes which looked full of pain and anger at the same time.

"Daadi... Abhi... where am I?" she asked

He explained to her where he had found her. Slowly all the memories coming flooding back to her. She remembered hiding behind the rock and feeling a hand push her. It had been Tanu and she shivered as she remembered catching a glimpse of Abhi running before falling. She tried to stand but she couldn't as her body hurt.

"You need rest for another few weeks before you can get up" explained the old man. "But tell me what happened and how you ended up there?"

Pragya explained to him everything leaving him shocked.

"What are you going to do then?" He asked curious.

"I will not leave her." Said Pragya "I will punish her and make sure everyone finds out her truth." Pragya promised herself to show Tanu by making her own up to her bad deeds herself but for that she would need Abhi's help.



Hope you liked it!! Sorry if you didn't!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Frankly I want to kill you 😡... this is not true just kidding 😆 at the beginning I was afraid that pragya loses his memory but I was very glad that she remembers it all...amazing update and very interesting ...I love it ...I can't wait to read the next part pls... update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Really liked d update, waiting for the next one.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Exciting Pragya will get even with Tanu but even better she's going to take Abhi's help.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Awesome! Interesting & very well written!
LOVED IT!

Please update soon! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Nice update and its good she didn't lose her memory so she will make Tanu pay for what she did go Pragya, I hope Abhi doesn't give up on looking for Pragya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
thank goodness she didn't lose her memory.
Update soon! Can't wait to read Abhi's reaction
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Both parts were awesome. Tanu pushed pragya of the cliff, she is so evil. Pragya going get back at tanu with help of abhi, hope abhi help's her. Thank you. Please continue soon.

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