Abhi-Pragya one shot: Chashmish - Page 2

Originally posted by: Parm.

Loved it and definitely loved how you made Abhi seem not the pig he comes off as in the show. I sure hope this is how he's feeling in the show, it will make all that he's dished out just a tiny bit easier to swallow...

Looking forward to any other written works by you!👏👏

Originally posted by: -Martinski-

OMG !!!! This is so perfect!!!

1) ABHI EXPLAINING THE SECOND NIGHT THAT WAS SO WELL WRITTEN !

2) ABHI AND HIS SHENANIGANS

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I LOVED IT !

Originally posted by: riyya6

👍🏼 ... loved it... very nicely written...

Originally posted by: suhasini2727

Awww...so beautifully written tia👏...mesmerising. ...its so refreshing...

Does abhi know that it is pragya whom he saved at beach

Originally posted by: -Tia-

Thank you so much.

I don't know if in the show, Abhi remembers Pragya as that girl..

But in my fic, I made him.😆

Originally posted by: -mina-

RES / Unres

AWWW TIAAA!!!!

MINA OH MINA.. you comment is like mini-FF thank you sooo very much.

I think about half way through you just caught my heart...and started wringing it...and wringing it...and I swear tears were starting to my eyes by the end, because you just made me feel so much for poor confused tormented falling-for-Pragya Abhi. Aaahhh too wonderful!!

Awwwiieee!! I wish I could do it for the soap Abhi too.

Love how you take us through the development of AbhiGya's relationship from first meeting on. I totally believe that Abhi would have had the thoughts you have described, especially his over-active sense of responsibility about keeping Aaliya and Purab together 😡

Yes, see that's the thing right. PuLiya is so important to him.

LOL @ the wedding day being the most boring day of his life! So Abhi! 🤣

Didn't he look super bored throughout his wedding.. As if he was in a meeting that he hated.

Interesting thought that marriage is not for Abhi...I would agree, he is too immature at this point.

He is so not ready to marry!

Heeheee love that the dupatta scene is the turning point! Activates his teasing instinct, ignites his curiosity...yup, that perfectly sums up the AbhiGya dynamic for the first few weeks after the wedding 😆

It's one of my fav scenes in the soap.😳

All the little ways Pragya is a good wife...Abhi notices, but doesn't understand...

Yes!

I like how the police station stuff made him realized their similarity about doing anything for Ma/Daadi. Such an important factor in how their story works - and an important point of similarity between them!

That's indeed gonna be a big factor for each other to appreciate...

Eee and then how you describe his attraction! The magic of her eyes of course, definitely Abhi loses a little bit more of himself to her with every eyelock. And then creating bahana to hold her! Love it! Haahaha.

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I like your take on TaBhi - I can understand Abhi wanting to overdose on Tanu because he's uncomfortable with his growing feelings for Pragya. Yes Abhi, you might be able to get her out of your house, maybe even your life, but good luck with getting her off your mind because it ain't gonna happen, no matter what you get up to with Tanu 😉

I hope they develop it this way if they do wanna keep Tannu around for a while.

Very sweet ending. Love the detailed lyrical description of her smile, and the idea that it will inspire him to record beautiful music. That's how we want our AbhiGya to work. Here's hoping for sweet small scenes like that in the future of the show too.

I am sure we will.

Tia, this is a lovely fic, it was great to read your version of what goes on in Abhi's head. I think you really captured his confusion and inner conflict, as well as his inherent insouciance and light-heartedness. Thank you so much for posting. Write more KKB fic please!!! 😃

Thanks a ton for reading and especially these comments. I love to read...I will write when inspired and time permits.

Originally posted by: rbb1

Beautiful story it's nice to read what he is feeling, I like how he is starting I like her he knows he cannot live without her, can't wait to read more stories from you