Abhi-Pragya one shot: Chashmish

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nitarata

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: MissAsian
Ur style of writing is so cute :)

Thanks.😳

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nitarata

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Awesome one shot
Abhi thoughts for pragiya, his changed emotions and feeling, gradually falling in love with a girl who is making him question his conscience are beautifully written and are hilarious too.
The morning scene was so cute, especially the part he felt that his day will end much better after seeing pragiya face in the morning.
I enjoy a lot reading it.
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Thanks for noticing the morning scene. In fact it's that scene that first came into my mind and I ended up writing so much before it.

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columbia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Love the last line - like a gift wrapped up beautifully!

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nitarata

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: vinnithelover
nice tia!!

Thanks Vinnie.. how are you? Long time no see.

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JazzyM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Oh Tia...My fluttering heart is full of hopes reading this fan fic... It's so in form of the leading pair that it brings out sensation that I long thought will never be seen with this couple... The crowning glory...Abhi feels happy and he is so sure he'll record super songs...You have written Abhi so in tandem with the character in the serial, jovial, immature, cheeky but you have given him something else...his sense of appreciation of Pragya. Thank you. 😉

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Manjit

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Hey Tia,

This is absolutely amazing and beautifully written. One can't help but smile throughout reading it.

Thanks a lot!

Babloo

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nitarata

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: JazzyM
Oh Tia...My fluttering heart is full of hopes reading this fan fic... It's so in form of the leading pair that it brings out sensation that I long thought will never be seen with this couple... The crowning glory...Abhi feels happy and he is so sure he'll record super songs...You have written Abhi so in tandem with the character in the serial, jovial, immature, cheeky but you have given him something else...his sense of appreciation of Pragya. Thank you. 😉

Arey Jazzy, wait and watch. Abhi will love Pragya is ways that no one ever loved her.. just a matter of time!!

Thank you that you find this Abhi similar to soap's except the appreciation part.. which is on its way and it will come Abhi way!

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nitarata

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: babloo_mka
Hey Tia,

This is absolutely amazing and beautifully written. One can't help but smile throughout reading it.

Thanks a lot!

Babloo

Aww thank you! Happy that you smiled.😊

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Maruthi Ganesh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Very nice and lovely story😊 ...If you are interested, Please make it an SS and also write another with Pragyas point of view😳...

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nitarata

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: MarGan
Very nice and lovely story😊 ...If you are interested, Please make it an SS and also write another with Pragyas point of view😳...

Bhai, have you read my fic Abhishek? That is Pragya's point of view. This fic was written after that.😃

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kumkum-bhagya/4124861/abhi-pragya-one-shot-abhishek

And I have updated this fic with a banner.😃

Edited by -Tia- - 10 years ago