Abhi-Pragya one shot: Chashmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Aaawww~

That was the most sweetest and cutest thing I have ever read! You are absolutely amazing at writing, Tia! ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: indi
Aww... Tia, Tia ... you are so good 👏... thank you, thank you!!!! You helped to ease the horror of Abhi going with Tannu 😃!!! Hope the CVs justify those scenes just as you did!!!

Thank you!!

Honestly, it's not a horror to me- because technically he is still Tannu's. But his mind is slowly getting off of her and moving to Pragya. But he is not supposed to fall for Pragya, so he has gotta assure himself of that by making himself believe that he is Tannu's.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Tia-

Thank you!!

Honestly, it's not a horror to me- because technically he is still Tannu's. But his mind is slowly getting off of her and moving to Pragya. But he is not supposed to fall for Pragya, so he has gotta assure himself of that by making himself believe that he is Tannu's.

(LOL!!) ... My practical side says he's still Tannu's 😡... but my heart pains when I see him all lovey dovey with her 😕😆!!!! I tell myself exactly that ... that he's only trying to prove to himself that he's not falling for Pragya ... but I still hate those scenes ... (that's why I suffer ... a hopeless happily ever after romantic ... that's me 😛 )

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Indl,

I understand! But it's impossible that he suddenly starts falling for Pragya and completely ignores Tannu. Tannu and him haven't faced hardships together that can prove the worth of their relationship but they have been steady for over a year in their own world. And Pragya is his enemy here. So, to give up a fairly okay relationship and risking to fall in love with the enemy, he will need his own time! Right?

I actually like it that he will invariably and desperately fall in love with Pragya although it's not technically right.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: vivkriti
Awesome. Beautifully written Tia

Thank you, Miths.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Tia-

This is exactly how Abhi comes across to me. I hope he remains so!
Here are my other works.

Thank you.

Abhi-Pragya One Shot: Abhishek
Abhi-Pragya Short story: The Truth (last part pg 5) Updt: 14/6
The Wedding Anniversary by tiaradeol
Take Two: The Wedding Anniversary
Take three: The Wedding Anniversary

Thanks for the links to the rest of your stories Tia! I'll make sure to read them all today :-)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Tia-
Indl,
I understand! But it's impossible that he suddenly starts falling for Pragya and completely ignores Tannu. Tannu and him haven't faced hardships together that can prove the worth of their relationship but they have been steady for over a year in their own world. And Pragya is his enemy here. So, to give up a fairly okay relationship and risking to fall in love with the enemy, he will need his own time! Right?

I actually like it that he will invariably and desperately fall in love with Pragya although it's not technically right.

@ Tia ... Seriously, I do agree with you regarding Abhi/Tannu's relationship ... he cannot just walk out of his relationship with her and fall head over heels in love with the enemy ... and I don't expect him to ... that'll make him so fickle too ... off with the old, and on with the new ...

Want him to fall desperately in love with Pragya too ... but slowly ... in that way we'll have a long time to enjoy their cut and thrusts exchanges !!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Parm.

Thanks for the links to the rest of your stories Tia! I'll make sure to read them all today :-)

Aww thanks. Do let me know what you thought of them.😃

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MissAsian

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Ur style of writing is so cute :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome one shot

Abhi thoughts for pragiya, his changed emotions and feeling, gradually falling in love with a girl who is making him question his conscience are beautifully written and are hilarious too.

The morning scene was so cute, especially the part he felt that his day will end much better after seeing pragiya face in the morning.

I enjoy a lot reading it.

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