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Aardhan

@aardhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: deepa17
Been long since I posted any siggies..😳

Nice... really HM scene lagta hai! 😆

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Hi Deepa,

Iam good . Enjoying our elder son's company. How are you?

waiting for Sujata"s FF. I read all the FFs and OSs .But the pleasure I get reading her's is entirely different. May be it is love at first read.

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Aardhan

@aardhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: deepa17

😲 you want the opening chapter to be a honeymoon chapter?? 😆

Why not?😆.. flashback bhi ho sakta.. hain..

and when did I say use in the first chapter.. First chapter toh u are going to provide na?

Actually not a bad idea... story can start with a separation and an FB 😉

Hey, you remember I once told you a theme like that long long back! 😃

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rayafan17

@rayafan17

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao
Hi Deepa,
Iam good . Enjoying our elder son's company. How are you?

waiting for Sujata"s FF. I read all the FFs and OSs .But the pleasure I get reading her's is entirely different. May be it is love at first read.

Very true.. ..For me the interaction has gone beyond that..

Don't know how life existed before this..

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rayafan17

@rayafan17

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

@Aarti.. Yeah She devil hain.. kuch bhi ho sakta hain..

Ok friends I am off tomorrow is the big holiday here in the US and after that I have surgery so will try to peep in.. but not certain

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: s_danger
Aunty check your pm and mail.

done and replied beta. sorry for the delay. had gone veggie shopping

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: deepa17

😲 you want the opening chapter to be a honeymoon chapter?? 😆

Why not?😆.. flashback bhi ho sakta.. hain..

and when did I say use in the first chapter.. First chapter toh u are going to provide na?

ok...if a honeymoon indeed gets involved in this story, i will see what i can do 😉😆

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

😲 you want the opening chapter to be a honeymoon chapter?? 😆

Why not? If you want to write about their teenage children you can start from honey moon.

lets see Madamji...first i need to conclude the current story..don't want one spilling into another...😃

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: aardhan

😆
Guess that got your attention... maybe many lines would not have achieved that, huh? 😉

Well, post it first then I can start thinking! 😆

well it sure got a 😲 reaction out of me..😆

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao
Hi Deepa,
Iam good . Enjoying our elder son's company. How are you?

waiting for Sujata"s FF. I read all the FFs and OSs .But the pleasure I get reading her's is entirely different. May be it is love at first read.

Aww...☺️ thank you Jayasreeji...

kaani na stories haayiga prasantam ga undavuga 🤔