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saibanu

@saibanu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: ariyadasa
Sorry for the late reply sai 😳
really romantic type but at the end feel like watching a hindi film 😆
love the explanation you gave to describe the long drive👏
this is one of the dreams we had but never full fill in real ktlk

But seems really interesting awaiting to see the next chap
feel it will be really emotional 😳

No need to apologize , Thank you for your comment dear 😃

I know this OS is very filmy ...😆

I am crazy about travelling so you will see the same in my stories , i love to write more about places , I am glad you liked it 😃

it is going to be very emotional but with a filmy touch 😉😆

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saibanu

@saibanu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: gargpoo
Nice chap. Sai.Banaras is so beatiful.My brother is educated from IIT-BHU.He used 2 tell about ghat & arti.sari yaadein taaza ho gai.
first date mast thi.i really want 2 know abt her sister's past.Nidhi's brother is such a jerk😡waiting 4 the next chap.

Wow that is one of the top most university great ! , I never visited banaras but it is there in my wish list 😉, heard lot about it so inserted the same in my story 😃

You will come to know everything in next part ...I will give as soon as i finish writing

Thank you dear 😃

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mudraswathi

@mudraswathi

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

What a Nice treatment to the story.. Yes you are right... its bit filmy... but, your treatment to the story is awesome...

Dont tell me you are a novice at writing!! Liked the expressions, the narration, the tone and grip... you have never eased with anything even a single bit!!

Would like to read more on some deeper researched topic of your interest...

Please pm me whenever you write . BTW, I am 'mudraswathi c ' on facebook.

Edited by mudraswathi - 12 years ago

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Ena

@Ena292

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

when will be the next part,sai? Jaldi kar yaar! Ashu ko kya hua hoga!!;;😭??

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saibanu

@saibanu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: mudraswathi
What a Nice treatment to the story.. Yes you are right... its bit filmy... but, your treatment to the story is awesome...

see i told you 😆 😆

Dont tell me you are a novice at writing!! Liked the expressions, the narration, the tone and grip... you have never eased with anything even a single bit!!

Thanks a bunch , means a lot to me 😃...I wrote many short stories and poems , i started when was in 9th std mostly ..those stories , i never published anywhere ...but all my frnds and my papa love to read my stories ...my papa is my first reader 😉

So this is my first forum where I updated my stories ...I am really glad you liked this chapter , it means a lot to me 😃

Would like to read more on some deeper researched topic of your interest...

I haven't written anything as such as my interest vary from time to time ...but my most researched area is psychology ..i have read more on that topic 😊

Please pm me whenever you write . BTW, I am 'mudraswathi c ' on facebook.

Sure , I will Pm you whenever i write anything new 😊 but I am not in FB but planning to join soon ..if i join i will send you frnd request 😊