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saibanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: alkaparmart
Good chap sai.Just read third part.Ashu won the election but found lonely without Nidhi?it is too cute.And last convo was fab.I just enjoyed it.Ane waiting for their first date.

Thank you so much Alka ji , I am glad that you are liking this ASHNI ...Will give next chapter by tomorrow else by Saturday 😃

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gargpoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Nice chap sai.i liked it.waiting 4 their first date.sorry mujhe review dena nahi aata😔

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saibanu

@saibanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: gargpoo
Nice chap sai.i liked it.waiting 4 their first date.sorry mujhe review dena nahi aata😔

No , you don't have to apologize, you liked the chapter ...that is more than enough 😃

Thank you so much for commenting ,means a lot to me 😊

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Ena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

sai...i am spell bound whenever I read your chapter...in this chapter I fall in love with Ashu once again...how poorly he was missing nidhi...his expecting eyes--if he says yes to go out with her! Just loved it.

nidhi's father is so friendly . .and her only friends! Love their interaction.

But does nidhi's brother is responsible for her sister 's death???

Waiting for their outing...and I know U R going to give me a jhatka!!

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saibanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Ena292
sai...i am spell bound whenever I read your chapter...in this chapter I fall in love with Ashu once again...how poorly he was missing nidhi...his expecting eyes--if he says yes to go out with her! Just loved it.

Thank you Enu 🤗

nidhi's father is so friendly . .and her only friends! Love their interaction.

yes , till now baba is her only friend but now Ashu also added up in that list 😉

But does nidhi's brother is responsible for her sister 's death???
Waiting for their outing...and I know U R going to give me a jhatka!!

🤣🤣...you know me so well Enu 😆

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kritikaT

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

fabulous chapter.you are amazing writer.

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saibanu

@saibanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: kritikaT
fabulous chapter.you are amazing writer.

Thank you so much 😃

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Ena

@Ena292

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

where is the chapter,sai????

Waiting buddy...😉

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Sorry Sai... I couldn't even complete reading one chapter even... Getting very busy these days... My mother keeps giving me some or the other instructions to some work, That, I'm myself writing my chaps with great difficulty...

But, will do it as I can... plz bear with me...

And btw, when can we read, Hazaar Khwaahishein aisi?