Devakshi FF - When Life Has Other Plans For You(clsd)~New Thread Crtd - Page 154

Awesome chapter! Please update soon

Originally posted by: M.soni

<font color="#ff3366"><font size="4">show ho ya fan fiction .PISTA sirf dev hi hai😆😆😆...bachara humara PISTA bacha...😆😆sweet khila khila kar bachi ki adhi jaan nickal di sona ne😆can u have same treatement for sona also when dev get to know its sona who is working in his office and main reason was jealousy😆...something like that😆😆😆</font></font>

<font size="4" color="#00ccff">thanks for telling k why dev"s employees dont know about sona..werna main end tak ye hi sochti rahe jati sona is dev ki mona darling..how come tina ki mina ko hai ye nahi pata😆</font>

<font size="4" color="#003333">or kiya likhun pata nahi bus itna k kafi acha likhti ho ladki..😆</font>

Lol
Soni moni i love pista flavor waise 😉
Pista dev bhi u know acha hi hoga 😳


Sweet khila khila ke aadha kar diya bichare ko
Well same to nahi par treatment jaroor milegi sona ko 😉
Woh bhi the dev dixit style

Chalo I'm glad ki tumhara confusion door hua ki why does tina mina not know about sona mona

Aur kuch na likh ladki
rullayegi kya pagli 😭

This time the comments have not come as much as i had expected
So will be delaying my update
Next update will be after completion of 219 pages

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

This time the comments have not come as much as i had expected
So will be delaying my update
Next update will be after completion of 219 pages

Originally posted by: Sharica

Acha ji...

I'm new here.

I wanted to comment ,but had lots f hesitation to do that.

I read ur each chapter many times ,I like this FF so much .

I come to this forum to read stories, and had decided to comment now ,and did for 2 fabulous FFs Eventually.

U r an amazing writer.

u have written wonderful stories.

I liked dev's characterisation.sona s good in all stories.But Dev is not good in some stories . Mostly Casanova or mumma's boy.

But he is good in ur story.

he didn't cross his limit when he was in love with Nats.

He misbehaved with sonakshi but changed when he came to know d truth.

May I know

Why Dev didn't say about Ishwari to his father and Sona?

About what she did in b/w Dev, Sona, and Nats letter.

Whom Dev called b4 starting from his house to sona's.?

Dev's parents accepted about his stay in sona's house?

I know Hindi partially, it would be better to understand completely if ur ff in English,

Update soon, please

lol! hehe! interesting! update soon!

maza aagaya superb👏

Originally posted by: TAMOGHNAD11

Awesome chapter! Please update soon

Thanku dear
I will

Originally posted by: Sharica

Acha ji...😉

Maine na aaj ye FF ka Chap 1 read kia fir se...Bunny and Cheeku ki friendship re-live karne ke liye...It was so adorable😳

Kahan se kahan paohoch gaye ye dono...Brilliant story telling...

I am again impressed Gayu...

And ab they are going to be romantic,their cute talks, jealousy...enjoying different shades of their journey...👏

Oh jiii thanku jiii
Puraana padhte jaao
Naya comment likhte jao