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Kuku_92

@Kuku_92

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#1511

Hey gayatri di..😊

As usual very nice chapter..Liked how sona punished Dev for forgetting her result day 😆

Their night convo in room was great. I liked what Dev said to her that "may be it was already written in our destiny n we should work on to improve it." He is so much in guilt what he did in Indore n everytime he asks for her forgiveness...

Slowly , sona purani wali cheeku ban rhi hai n their bond is also changing...😳. Do dill mil rhe hai...Magar chupke chupke...😉

Waiting for your next update...

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Razzy03

@Razzy03

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#1512

Amazing update. Getting more n more interesting

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monika

@M.soni

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#1513

show ho ya fan fiction .PISTA sirf dev hi hai😆😆😆...bachara humara PISTA bacha...😆😆sweet khila khila kar bachi ki adhi jaan nickal di sona ne😆can u have same treatement for sona also when dev get to know its sona who is working in his office and main reason was jealousy😆...something like that😆😆😆

thanks for telling k why dev"s employees dont know about sona..werna main end tak ye hi sochti rahe jati sona is dev ki mona darling..how come tina ki mina ko hai ye nahi pata😆

or kiya likhun pata nahi bus itna k kafi acha likhti ho ladki..😆

Edited by M.soni - 8 years ago

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PY18

@PY18

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#1514

Ok lol everything as per sona planned but Dev need to know this asap. Can't wait. That's bedroom scene ws love

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Sneha

@Rhy2015

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#1515

Yet again a beautiful update by my Gaiyaaa...
Acha hua khila khila k badla liya Kuch aur Nahi kiya...
I m liking this cute nok jhok of our Devakshi coz yahi to Pyar ka pehla step hai...
Aise hi jaldi jaldi update deke khush krte raho hum sabko...
Waiting to comment on ur next chapter...
Chahiye na comment??? Fir de do jaldi jaldi next update 😉
😛 😛

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#1516

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh
Hello di... Aa gyi.. Bht achha update tha... Loved it..
Pehle bata du aaj ka comment chota hoga as time nhi hai zyada...

I loved sona and dev ka chota sa romantic moments... Its very nice..

And now sona joined.. Dev ko jaan ne do... Sona toh bolegi nhi.. Kaise bhi pta lagwao dev ko abt sona.. And sona ka monologue was awesome... Haha..

Do update soon...

Thanku so much anu
To kya hua agar chota comment tha

Ab since sona ne dev ka office join kar hi liya hai to use aaj nahi to kal pata chalega hi
Phir sona ko kya sazaa mileegi dev se sach chupane ki yeh bass dekhte jaao

Will update soon dear

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#1517

Originally posted by: Anjali333
Res
Comment kal milega😉

Hum intejaar karenge 😉

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#1518

Originally posted by: binuuu
Beautiful chapter dii...
Haha...sona made him eat gulab jamun😆bechara...
N he had all idea about her result...
Now real fun is waiting..he don't know she is working in his hospital..interesting...continue soon dii

Bichara dev
Jab poora result pata tha to bhi yeh sab karwaya usse
Socho sachmein bhool jata to kya kya jhelna padta
cheeku is very possessive n demanding baba
Dev bachke rahe usse
Will update soon dear

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#1519

Originally posted by: ketaki9narkhede
Gayu di superb
Kya chapter hai!
Yeh to kitna bada Golmaal hai ki boss ko hi nahi pata ki uski biwi uske hi office mein kaam Karti hai.
Excited to know the expression when Dev gets to knew about that😛

~KET@K!

Thanku so much Ketaki 😳
Ab golmal to hua hai
Boss khud apni employee ko nahi jaanta
Par jab jaan jayega tab kya hoga yeh soch ke main badi excited hoon
Asli mazaa to tab shuru hoga 😉
Will update soon dear