Devakshi FF - The Intended Disguise Chapter 15 & 16 Page114 update

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#881

Originally posted by: luckyvicky2801
Nicely written and good ending.

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#882

Originally posted by: TwinFlames
lovely update..

😳 thanku

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#883

Originally posted by: ketaki9narkhede
Oh my it's too hawt and also emotional.
<font size="4">I loved ishaani - ishwari and nishaani does make sense.too good👍🏼</font>

<font size="4">~KET@K!</font>

Thanku for liking it

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#884

Originally posted by: Invictus
Beautifully written! And the ending was superb! Hats off to you! You are an amazing writer!
How I wish the CVs take some cues from your story and move ahead instead of just going round and round with the same things.

Once again, congrats for this brilliant piece of work. Keep giving us more of these.

Thanku so much for ur kind words dear
Will surely try to write something else soon

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Soumya21ag

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Posted: 8 years ago

#885

CHAPTER 15

YAAAY!!!

dev aur sona ansh ke saath finally US mein settle ho gaye

aur dev ko to badi kamaal ki birthday gift di sona ne

god only these two can be so cute and hot together

aur dev to kabhi nahi sudhrega

ansh ke samare bhi...

and sona so badly wanted to have a baby with dev

and he was so proud of her

loved it dii

it was damn HAWT!!!

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Soumya21ag

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Posted: 8 years ago

#886

CHAPTER 16

to finally sona ko pata chal gaya ki she is pregnant

loved the way she explained ki sirf behosh hona aur ultiyaan hi symptoms nahi hote

aur aapne meri wish puri kardi

i love u dii

loved to see the way dev pampered sona

and her trying to seduce him

aur dev ki dhamki to mast thi

aur aapne to meri man ki baat padhli

I've always imagined dev helping sona deliver the baby coz of her complications

aur ktna cute naam dia hai apnee-ishaani

their wish of having a baby girl got fulfilled

aur lastly ish died

thoda sa bura laga

aur jaisa dev ne jaha tha

no one can handle him the way sona does

u proved it right

and i just loved the way you justified ur title

aur lastly

main ye ff bahut zyaada miss karungi

it was an amazing journey

aapki choti behen hone ke naate ek baat puchun??

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#887

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh
Omg... Gayu di... Kitna achha likha hai aapne... A master class...

thanku jee for the housala afjaayee

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh
Pehle thank u for dedication of a chap to me... Yes I wanted one... Kya kare.. Yeh dil hai ki manta nhi... Lol..

welcome darling chaapy to tujhe dedicate karna hi tha afterall u wanted a legal consummation right😉😉

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh
I loved that chap.. Chap 15.. They settled down well in USA and ansh k saath bhi masti ki... I can understand ki maa ko chodke aya hai dev sad hoga... Bt sona ne khush kar dia... And then aya... Mera fav part... Obvio... Dev is such a despo.. Bachhe k samne sona k saath... Heights... Haha...
And then sona ne bhi shuru kiya... Haye.. Then came that oart... Devakshi just cant get enough of each other... I love them... Eeekkss.. Sona wanting a baby... That melted my heart... So love...

Obviously Dev to sad hoga hi kyunki woh thodi na sabse door jaana chahta tha, woh to Ishwari thi jisne use khud se dur kiya... @bold haan haan tera to favorite hoga hi 😉😉

yaar it was my dream to see Devakshi decide whether to have a baby or not rather than others forcing them

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh
Now chap 16... Well this chap was indeed the climactic one... I loved this too...
Sona ko pta chal gya preggy hone ka... Dev khush and ansh sudhar gya... Soo cute... Boses ne khayal rakha and dev ne sar pe chara rakha...
Sona ka tantrums were oh my... And demand for ice cream and god mein uthana and then kissing and blushing... All just perfect... Just a bliss...

Sona ki pregnancy phase to humne dekhi nahi show mein ...na hi Dev tha uske paas use pamper karne keliye...socha ki kyun na main hi likh du apne mann ki

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh
Then came the finale... Delivery... Woh part was the best... Dev ka palpitations were justified... True.. And then he went and understood the meaning of mother and her pains... I so so so loved ur explanation di... The pain of a woman... I can so feel it... Mujhe laga kisine mere dil pe koi sundar ka flower rakh dia jiska weight bht heavy hai.. Really... It felt so emotional...
And then came bitiya rani... Dev went to call par ish ka swargwaas... I felt sad at this... I admit i was sad... I thought last mein happy family hoga... Par yeh bhi okk...
I loved ur reincarnation theory... Ish k chehre pe ishaani aayi... Naam bhi Kitna Sundar dia hai di.. Loved it...

And the final paragraph... Ish ka INTENDED DISGUISE... in form of devakshi daughter...

this part I tell you...yeh likhte waqt bohot emotional hui thi main...I had to literally picturise things n then pen them down...at the end it gives u satisfation that ur efforts did pay off

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh
Lastly... I wll miss this ff... Really... It has been a grt journey... Like really grt... And di u were vry true to ur title till the very end... Indeed the intended disguise made situations lovely for devakshi and ansh and ishaani too... A Biggg round of applause for u di... Love u...
Go for another ff... All the best...

Aww...thanku so much dear...tune bhi to itna saath diya...har baar update maanga aur ensure kiya ki main likhti rahoon...thanku so much

will surely come up with something else may be after the 15th of this month...

till then TATA...

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#888

Originally posted by: Sharica
Hmmmn...lambi saans le lu pehle...
Chapter 15 - It was awesome...Sona feeling sad for seperating maa beta but actually it was not her fault..

Then that hot part, it was super duper s**y...sensuous, sizzling and what not...loved it❤️.

And their late night cute conversation that if beta hua to, fir se try karnege and will keep on trying till we get a girl...😆 (A secret- This convo happened between me and my husband as well😳)

Enjoyed reading...Thankyou..

thanku ginni dii itne acche comment keliye...

@bold accha yeh aapke saath bhi hua tha😳😳lagta hai maine kuch jyaada hi realistic si baat kardi😆😆

thanku once again

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#889

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.
Res...
Chapter 15 toh padh liya hai...
Chap 16 padhna hai...lekin papa dinner ke liye bula rahe hain...
So aane ke baad comment karti hun😊

Chapter 15
It was so good...
Sona was sad ki maa beta alag ho gaye...
Waise sach bataun toh mujhe ek paisa dukh nahiin hua...she deserves it...
Uske baad Dev ka b'day...Wow...
Waise toh yeh part 18+ tha par maine padh liya...kyonki main 17 days mein 18 ho jaungi...😆😆
It was hot and passionate...