Devakshi FF - The Intended Disguise Chapter 15 & 16 Page114 update - Page 90

Originally posted by: Sharica

Coming to last chapter...

It was such a soulful chapter...It in true sense showed the love that Devakshi have each other. This is something I am missing badly in the show...

You have written this chapter so beautifully...I had teary eyes 2-3 times...One where Ansh used to sat beside Sona when she use to sleep in her pregnancy...kids I tell you..They do such things which make me wonder that why do we lose that innocence when we grow up..😭

Then Dev's realisation on what woman goes through when in labor pain or the entire pregnancy period...

I am feeling sad that this beautiful story has ended, but so happy that it ended on such a beautiful note...👍🏼

In the last title redefined beautifully with Ishwari's disguise to be with his son forever...❤️

I would say a huge thank you to you Gayu for taking out time from your busy schedule and writing such beautiful chapters for us and that too when so much negativity is going on in the show...

Hats off to you guys for keeping sane in such situations and writing something extraordinary for us...

Kudos to you👏

Do write more if time permits...⭐️

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

First of all thank you for updating early dii...just bcoz of me...

I am so thankful and grateful to you...

Ab aayi chapter ki baari...

Chapter 16

Wow...Sona is pregnant...

And Dev is pampering her...even Ansh is doing so...😳

Thats so cute...

And Sona is worried of being fat😆😆

Ok...now delivery time...

Ishwari mar gayi??

Fine I admit...mujhe thoda bura laga...

And Sona is so good...she named her daughter Ishaani...

And lastly...the title is totally apt for the story...

I am sad that this story ended but the entire journey was amazing...

Ab main aaram se break par jaa sakti hun...

Thanks again Gayu dii...

Originally posted by: Soumya21ag

CHAPTER 15

YAAAY!!!

dev aur sona ansh ke saath finally US mein settle ho gaye

aur dev ko to badi kamaal ki birthday gift di sona ne

god only these two can be so cute and hot together

aur dev to kabhi nahi sudhrega

ansh ke samare bhi...

and sona so badly wanted to have a baby with dev

and he was so proud of her

loved it dii

it was damn HAWT!!!

Originally posted by: Soumya21ag

CHAPTER 16

to finally sona ko pata chal gaya ki she is pregnant

loved the way she explained ki sirf behosh hona aur ultiyaan hi symptoms nahi hote

aur aapne meri wish puri kardi

i love u dii

loved to see the way dev pampered sona

and her trying to seduce him

aur dev ki dhamki to mast thi

aur aapne to meri man ki baat padhli

I've always imagined dev helping sona deliver the baby coz of her complications

aur ktna cute naam dia hai apnee-ishaani

their wish of having a baby girl got fulfilled

aur lastly ish died

thoda sa bura laga

aur jaisa dev ne jaha tha

no one can handle him the way sona does

u proved it right

and i just loved the way you justified ur title

aur lastly

main ye ff bahut zyaada miss karungi

it was an amazing journey

aapki choti behen hone ke naate ek baat puchun??

Originally posted by: coolmeet

Beautifully written

Loved that 6mths preg Sona and seducing Dev(realistic approach)

Loved this story.

Thanks for writing it.

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

accha laga na chappy

thanku jii thanku

accha gussa mat hona ki lamba reply nahin diya maine

kyunki main sirf patience se story likhti hoon

yeh commenting mere bass ki baat nahin

par ek word ka bhi reply doon to samajh jaana ki main bohot jyaada happy hoon

Originally posted by: Soumya21ag

are nahi dii gussa nahi hongi

lekin aapne mere question ka jawaab nahi diya

main aapse ek sawaal puchun??

Originally posted by: binuuu

Unres on pg 114