Devakshi FF - The Intended Disguise Chapter 15 & 16 Page114 update - Page 88

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.FlyingClouds.

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Posted: 8 years ago

First of all thank you for updating early dii...just bcoz of me...

I am so thankful and grateful to you...

Ab aayi chapter ki baari...

Chapter 16

Wow...Sona is pregnant...

And Dev is pampering her...even Ansh is doing so...😳

Thats so cute...

And Sona is worried of being fat😆😆

Ok...now delivery time...

Ishwari mar gayi??

Fine I admit...mujhe thoda bura laga...

And Sona is so good...she named her daughter Ishaani...

And lastly...the title is totally apt for the story...

I am sad that this story ended but the entire journey was amazing...

Ab main aaram se break par jaa sakti hun...

Thanks again Gayu dii...

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sona_naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

amazing parts ..hot n sensuous ...
beautiful journey ...
thanls for pm

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luckyvicky2801

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nicely written and good ending.

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randomramblings

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Posted: 8 years ago

A perfect end to their love story. Life is truly a full circle.

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ketaki narkhede

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Posted: 8 years ago

Oh my it's too hawt and also emotional.

I loved ishaani - ishwari and nishaani does make sense.too good👍🏼

~KET@K!

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Invictus

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Posted: 8 years ago

Beautifully written! And the ending was superb! Hats off to you! You are an amazing writer!

How I wish the CVs take some cues from your story and move ahead instead of just going round and round with the same things.

Once again, congrats for this brilliant piece of work. Keep giving us more of these.

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

beautifully written!!!!

Thanku 😳

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sona43
Nice chapters Di it ends and a happy ending I miss this story please Di keep writing such nice stories 😊 😊 [COLOR=orange]

Glad u liked it
Thanks for commenting

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: simplesweety1
i don't have words! it was awsm!

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sona_naksh
amazing parts ..hot n sensuous ...
beautiful journey ...
thanls for pm

Thanku sona diii

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