Devakshi FF - The Intended Disguise Chapter 15 & 16 Page114 update - Page 91

Originally posted by: binuuu

Gayuu dii...frst of ol big wali huggiee🤗

Updates were superb...

Loved both d prts...areh wah...devakshi blessed with tiny sonakshi..yoo...so hppy 4 dem...

Oh Goddd...Ish died.. .😲never xpectd tht...felt vry bad for dev atlast whn he heard abt his mthr's death...

This was such an amazng jrny di...enjoyed evry chptrs vry mch

Thnkuu somuchh for wrtng this...

Waitng for ur nxt stry di...

Thanku for commenting here everytime n appreciating me everytime
This means a lot
Haan yaar mujhe bhi likhte likhte khayaal aaya ki ishh ko maar doon
Sad but the story needed it
Thanks once again for commenting

Originally posted by: write2neetha

Amazing last 2 chapters...😊 loved ur ff in a whole.. 👏👏will miss this😭.. Ishwari in disguise tat was really well thought ...😊

Thanku so much for appreciating dear
Glad u liked it 😃

Originally posted by: Erinasingh69

Omggg such a beautiful n hearttouching end dear ...

Totally loved ur ff. ...somewhere u were very naughty while writing too😆but d story was indeed fabulous. ...

Lil bit sad that this beautiful journey has finally reached its destination. ...

Love to read ur story more. ...

Come back again with another fabulous storyline. ...

Lots of love and hugs to you🤗😳

Thanku dear
Yes sometimes get carried away to write some naughty stuff 😳

Will try to rght more once free from daily hwctoc schedules
Thanku once again for liking it
Lots of love n hugs to u too

@Soumya21ag

Jo poochna tha woh to poocha hi nahi tune
I'm still waiting

Humph!!!!! Pehle tou so so so sorry for being so late yar, actually I have met an accident and was just not able to come to you guys at all 😭 😭 😭
And now let me see where should I start?!!!
Ok from chap 14, that was amazing how how Dev just threw everything out in front of Dixits. Banda aik hee baar bola par zabardast bola. Hamare haan aik kahawat hai, I mean saying hai k jo chup betha ho usay bilkul mat chhero! 😃

Acha both the climax updates were on the same page, was the biggest treat of the day for me sacchii 😃
Everything was just so perfect. It was like watching a movie or something. Loved the way he was troubling Sona in front of lil Ansh, the way they finished their most favourite duty, the way Sona was crying and that too in the washroom 😃 even I tou liked the way she was sitting actually *hahaha* sach mein yaar, you were more than good !!
And then when they got to know and the excitements and the whole time period, her mood swings everything. It was indeed a compete package. You just didn't left anything for to ask about!
And believe me I got a lil tear when she finally gave the birth *yes I'm an emotional kinda person*. That labour scene was the best one. Dev realized and wanted to talk to his mother but yah God is always with some other plans.
And finally the way Sona calmed him down, being there for him as always. What bond, what ideal bond they share !! BEAUTIFUL is the word that can describe this ff for me.

In addition, this is the first ever ff that I witnessed completing 😃 tou I'm even more liking it.
Thank you so much. A biggg wala hug for you!!!!
👏 👏 👏

*Sighh..*

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

arrey haan poocho poocho

why asking seedha pooching

Originally posted by: Iqqa

Humph!!!!! Pehle tou so so so sorry for being so late yar, actually I have met an accident and was just not able to come to you guys at all 😭 😭 😭
And now let me see where should I start?!!!
Ok from chap 14, that was amazing how how Dev just threw everything out in front of Dixits. Banda aik hee baar bola par zabardast bola. Hamare haan aik kahawat hai, I mean saying hai k jo chup betha ho usay bilkul mat chhero! 😃

Acha both the climax updates were on the same page, was the biggest treat of the day for me sacchii 😃
Everything was just so perfect. It was like watching a movie or something. Loved the way he was troubling Sona in front of lil Ansh, the way they finished their most favourite duty, the way Sona was crying and that too in the washroom 😃 even I tou liked the way she was sitting actually *hahaha* sach mein yaar, you were more than good !!
And then when they got to know and the excitements and the whole time period, her mood swings everything. It was indeed a compete package. You just didn't left anything for to ask about!
And believe me I got a lil tear when she finally gave the birth *yes I'm an emotional kinda person*. That labour scene was the best one. Dev realized and wanted to talk to his mother but yah God is always with some other plans.
And finally the way Sona calmed him down, being there for him as always. What bond, what ideal bond they share !! BEAUTIFUL is the word that can describe this ff for me.

In addition, this is the first ever ff that I witnessed completing 😃 tou I'm even more liking it.
Thank you so much. A biggg wala hug for you!!!!
👏 👏 👏

Ohhh dear...so sry to hear u met with an accident
I hope u r doing fine

Despite of being unwell aapne mere liye itna bada comment likha


Thats so touching!!!!!!!!!

I dnt have enough words to thanku
So just consider this small reply as my graditude

Originally posted by: Soumya21ag

humein ek epilogue de do please

pretty please...