OS - I NEED YOU FOR MYSELF!!! part 3 pg 22 Sept 03 - Page 13

Originally posted by: randomramblings

though i hate to see dev in that state, i must admit, if this were to happen for real in the show, it would be a visual feast to watch Shaheer portray these emotions.

Oh yeah. That would be awesome to watch. We would run out of tissues but wouldn't have missed it for the world.

Your story is too gripping, i can actually visualize the whole thing as if its being played on my screen.

You have an excellent screenplay skills.

Do keep writing, and i get the pleasure of reading them 😉😉😉

One more part - the last one for this OS - coming up. 😃

Originally posted by: LiveLife321

Its simply outstanding and hell emotional even to imagine Dev in that condition. 👏

You did magic with your words. Pls do post the next part ASAP Sujatha.😊

Latha. Will be posting the next part in a couple of hours.

Originally posted by: libran13

Beautifully written. If the Cv's incorporate this story line into the show, it would be so apt to the story leading to the redemption and patch up.

Thank you.🤗 They have always shown Dev as aloof. A guy who bottles things up. So it kind of made sense that he would break under the weight one day. Especially once he realizes the role his mom played in Sona's alliance.

Your style of writing is very gripping and engaging. I could actually visualize each and every scene you have written.

So very glad to hear that.

I am eagerly waiting for the next part and i have no doubt that it is going to be as engaging as this.

Hope so. Posting in a couple of hours. 😊

Please do update soon.

Originally posted by: tanya94

The nervous breakdown was a good idea to proceed with the story...waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: Lovely_KaranIka

This is master piece!!!!👏 I just loved it..! So so so beautifully written 👏 after watching yesterday's epi, Mamaji & Dev's scene.. I was just remembered about ur OS..!! There was so much similarity! I would be eagerly waiting for your next part!!

Originally posted by: bharti2887

Amazing!!! 👏 👏 👏

Its like I am already watching the best of KRPKAB on screen post Sona's wedding. You could give these CVs a serious run for their money.

Waiting for the next part...

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

She is a great writer with excellent screen play skills.

Please go to KTLK forum to enjoy her works.

She also has a number of books to her credit and are available at Amazon Kindle store.

I remember her writing an FF in Humsafars forum too.

Madamji... and a very good morning to you!!

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

Suvika madam,

Please continue as early as possible as this suspense is unbearable.

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Ehm... Clearing my throat...😳

I need to speak... But where to begin?😕

Okay, let's begin with a Thank You...😃

I can't thank you enough to be accepting my request...

I'm really on cloud nine!

but to be frank, I WANTED to write. Reasons are many but bottom line is I wanted to give some kind of closure to this OS. Something a little bit more than shaking Ishwari hard enough to face the reality

First of all, before I begin with anything else...

Seeing you writing again in Bengali reminded me instantly of Shikha Bose... And I was like- OH haan! Ye bhi Bose hai!😆

😆 😆 😆

Now coming back to the update, I really don't think we can dislike this Dev... We would rather feel pity, sorry and really sympathizing with him... He is one of the rare of the rarest case to become the victim of his own mother's love... And how heavily both the mother and son duo are paying for it...

True that.

Nothing, but this could have broken Ishwari's delusion... Oh man! What a worst case scenario for any mother to have witnessed her own son cringing and thrashing with the mere presence of his mother... But Ishwari herself called for it... Stupendous portrayal...👏👏 👍🏼

Thank you. I was, I guess, taking out my frustrations from the show in my OS. 😆

I will feel it a treat to read and see Ishwari beg and plead in front of the Boses for their daughter's hand... She has just not lost her son, but the only daughter in law that she can ever get now... She had blocked that one "Barsaati Naala" that needed an immediate outlet, but did not get, and is now creating floods... Floods such that her own house has started to float on those seasonal waters...

It's a long way before it comes to that stage where Ishwari would come to ask for Sona's hand for her son. Don't ask me to write so many parts. Part 3 is the last and I am going to post it today. And I am SOOO not ending part 3 with DevAkshi wedding.

In totality, I can surely say Suja di, that this update is far far better than what I could have expected...

I am in love with this TS of yours... Undoubtedly the BEST piece of fiction on this forum... I am so so so thankful to you for bringing this for us...

Third part, is most awaited, do please bring on... I am eagerly waiting for it...

Thank you so much Suja di... Thank you very very much!😃