OS - I NEED YOU FOR MYSELF!!! part 3 pg 22 Sept 03

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Suvika madam,

Please continue as early as possible as this suspense is unbearable.

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Ehm... Clearing my throat...😳

I need to speak... But where to begin?😕

Okay, let's begin with a Thank You...😃

I can't thank you enough to be accepting my request...

I'm really on cloud nine!

First of all, before I begin with anything else...

Seeing you writing again in Bengali reminded me instantly of Shikha Bose... And I was like- OH haan! Ye bhi Bose hai!😆

Now coming back to the update, I really don't think we can dislike this Dev... We would rather feel pity, sorry and really sympathizing with him... He is one of the rare of the rarest case to become the victim of his own mother's love... And how heavily both the mother and son duo are paying for it...

Nothing, but this could have broken Ishwari's delusion... Oh man! What a worst case scenario for any mother to have witnessed her own son cringing and thrashing with the mere presence of his mother... But Ishwari herself called for it... Stupendous portrayal...👏👏 👍🏼

I think Ishwari got Sonakshi rather quickly, as a, HEALER, for her son... Bijoy and Asha trusted their daughter good enough to have let her go with Ishwari, but this old lady has no idea how deep she has dug her own grave by almost forcing her son to dump that girl...

I will feel it a treat to read and see Ishwari beg and plead in front of the Boses for their daughter's hand... She has just not lost her son, but the only daughter in law that she can ever get now... She had blocked that one "Barsaati Naala" that needed an immediate outlet, but did not get, and is now creating floods... Floods such that her own house has started to float on those seasonal waters...

In totality, I can surely say Suja di, that this update is far far better than what I could have expected...

I am in love with this TS of yours... Undoubtedly the BEST piece of fiction on this forum... I am so so so thankful to you for bringing this for us...

Third part, is most awaited, do please bring on... I am eagerly waiting for it...

Thank you so much Suja di... Thank you very very much!😃

Edited by Aazeen02 - 9 years ago

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Shaun

@Jade0001

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Emotional, Sad yet Wholesome

Dev is someone that only spoke his inner feelings and thoughts to Sonakshi now with her been engaged to someone else Dev just realized he has lost the battle of love it suffocated him thinking his mother wronged him , all those emotions and pain that was bottled up deep within him broke and this is the outcome.

Dev on the verge of a nervous breakdown while Ishwari finally realizes her role as a mother .

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shilpa_akki

@shilpa_akki

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

OMG OMG. ...
Wow Wow.. ...
Waiting for next part

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

finally ishwari madam ko samjh aya...

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ashwin8890

@ashwin8890

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#106

After reading this i was like 'WOW' WHAT A GREAT PIECE OF WRITING MAN!!! Hats off! to your writing skills just brilliant👏

Waiting eagerly for the next part!

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kalavathi5

@kalavathi5

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Just a brilliant update!! I cannot imagine how it would play out if the CVS actually went on this path!!!👏 Thank you for writing this!

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fanktlk

@fanktlk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Ehm... Clearing my throat...😳

I need to speak... But where to begin?😕

Okay, let's begin with a Thank You...😃

I can't thank you enough to be accepting my request...

I'm really on cloud nine!

First of all, before I begin with anything else...

Seeing you writing again in Bengali reminded me instantly of Shikha Bose... And I was like- OH haan! Ye bhi Bose hai!😆

Now coming back to the update, I really don't think we can dislike this Dev... We would rather feel pity, sorry and really sympathizing with him... He is one of the rare of the rarest case to become the victim of his own mother's love... And how heavily both the mother and son duo are paying for it...

Nothing, but this could have broken Ishwari's delusion... Oh man! What a worst case scenario for any mother to have witnessed her own son cringing and thrashing with the mere presence of his mother... But Ishwari herself called for it... Stupendous portrayal...👏👏 👍🏼

I think Ishwari got Sonakshi rather quickly, as a, HEALER, for her son... Bijoy and Asha trusted their daughter good enough to have let her go with Ishwari, but this old lady has no idea how deep she has dug her own grave by almost forcing her son to dump that girl...

I will feel it a treat to read and see Ishwari beg and plead in front of the Boses for their daughter's hand... She has just not lost her son, but the only daughter in law that she can ever get now... She had blocked that one "Barsaati Naala" that needed an immediate outlet, but did not get, and is now creating floods... Floods such that her own house has started to float on those seasonal waters...

In totality, I can surely say Suja di, that this update is far far better than what I could have expected...
I am in love with this TS of yours... Undoubtedly the BEST piece of fiction on this forum... I am so so so thankful to you for bringing this for us...

Third part, is most awaited, do please bring on... I am eagerly waiting for it...
Thank you so much Suja di... Thank you very very much!😃

Dekha Aazeen. She wrote this for you. Mein toh mana Kar rahi thi. Last part bhi aayega jaldi.

Edited by fanktlk - 9 years ago

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#109

u have written it so beautifully, i wish something like this happens in our show too where ishwari realizes her mistake and also the importance that Sona holds in Dev's life...waiting for ur next update