OS - I NEED YOU FOR MYSELF!!! part 3 pg 22 Sept 03 - Page 14

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

I pakka am not going to ask for a fourth part...

Unreasonable demands nahi aayenge aapke paas...😃

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Emotional, Sad yet Wholesome

Dev is someone that only spoke his inner feelings and thoughts to Sonakshi now with her been engaged to someone else Dev just realized he has lost the battle of love it suffocated him thinking his mother wronged him , all those emotions and pain that was bottled up deep within him broke and this is the outcome.

Dev on the verge of a nervous breakdown while Ishwari finally realizes her role as a mother .

Originally posted by: gdfss

OMG OMG. ...
Wow Wow.. ...
Waiting for next part

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

finally ishwari madam ko samjh aya...

Originally posted by: ashwin8890

After reading this i was like 'WOW' WHAT A GREAT PIECE OF WRITING MAN!!! Hats off! to your writing skills just brilliant👏

Waiting eagerly for the next part!

Originally posted by: kalviswes

Just a brilliant update!! I cannot imagine how it would play out if the CVS actually went on this path!!!👏 Thank you for writing this!

Originally posted by: sinalfan1

u have written it so beautifully, i wish something like this happens in our show too where ishwari realizes her mistake and also the importance that Sona holds in Dev's life...waiting for ur next update

Originally posted by: taara113

That was an absolutely amazing piece of writing...what do i even say about dev and what has become of him...the most selfless relationship became the most selfish for his guy...i truly believe there is no one in this world who can love you as selflessly as your parents...they are the only people who love you even when you don't give it back to them, every other relationship is a give and take but this one...as children we only end up reciprocating their love by maybe passing on the same love to our kids someday ...and this belief that they love u so much despite whatever you do; while gives wings to some children to fly high (even when that means sometimes leaving your parents far behind) but there others who live lives burdened by what they think is a favor done to them...they live under that pressure of how their parents sacrificed their lives for them and now they are obliged for life...in case of dev this obligation was so overbearing that nothing else remained...you see it as your way of loving your parents back...but love can never bind you its sets you free...atleast as far as the love of a parent goes...but when it comes to ishwari as the writers of tthe show said usme khudgarzi ki milawat hai...dev is like that prize she won in a competition which she can show to everyone, even lend it to others sometimes to show her benevolence but she can never give it away even to any other kid of hers...

and then there are other extreme times when i feel its like she has put him in the place of her husband unconsciously, dev has become that emotional anchor that on looks in a partner and that is something she cannot share...

and i have now completely lost track of what i was thinking and trying to write...ufff...

@ red...😆 Don't worry about it. It happens to me all the time.

And what you say is absolutely correct. If we can't be ourselves in front of our parents, where else can we be??

coming back to your brilliant writing...it breaks my heart so much to see dev like this...and the way you explain it...i can totally visualize it

and that curled baby on the bed with no one on whose lap he could keep his head and peacefully sleep...its just sooo sad...he has wronged sonakshi in so many ways but i still just cant stop feeling bad for him...what a man did ishwari make out of that small 8 year old boy...coming to neha i have always felt she can have a more stronger presence in the show also...more than mamaji, i would want her to come and and talk to dev...

Thank you. Yes. I think Neha is the one who never sugarcoated anything while talking to her mother. And no, we can't stay angry with his guy. Because at some level, we understand him and his actions. He is getting no joy and is stuck because he has never been good at handling / balancing the emotions.

and wel yesss ms.bose came...yaaayyy...thats the devakshi fana in me going all cheery...ab heroine aa gae hai to pls kuch happy happy kardo...

i know i know angst and depression and tears are every writers favorite and love-stories with that sad longing ending leave that forever impact...but for watever its worth, id request you to end this story (wenever) you do on a happy note...our constant interaction with these characters make them so real and close that i can really not see them having a sad ending; even if that is wat wld happen...im sure there are high possibilities of a man in such a state to actually never come out of it...its not easy for the girl too just runaway frm an arranged marriage...its also not easy for a woman like ishwari to change herself forever...but id still wish that he is okay, she is der with him...and ishwari is just more saner...

Happy..happy.. I don't know. I mean I don't think I can end it with their hug / kiss. I would need more than one part to bring these two to that stage. Because love has never been the issue between the two. Right now Sona doesn't trust this guy and rebuilding trust takes time. But yes, I do plan to give an opening for Dev.

waiting for the next part very very eagerly...

PS. i ended up writing up one of my longest posts on this forum; i dont even know why...just happens at times...it is also the most disjointed confused post ever...but anyways now that i have typed so much id anyways post it...

Trust me, it was neither confusing nor disjointed. Thank you so much for your comments. 🤗

Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

Amazing update dear... U made me cry 😭 😭
Trust me I was continuously crying 😭 ... Ohhh it was so emotional yet so beautiful
Awsome write-up dear...
Egerly waiting for next part... Plz update soon