Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70 - Page 42

Originally posted by: LeslieKnope

Your writing skills are incredible! I absolutely loved loved loved this part! So intricate and deep! 😊

Originally posted by: srilotus

Superb write up👏
loved the way u narrated Dev's poitn of view,his pain,guilt,anger
update soon
Thanks for the pm.😊

Originally posted by: princesspipi

So so beautifully written... Beautiful words... Such amazing literature... Especially this part... Loved it... Passionate scenes can be written like this also... Elegantly... Simply wow...

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Yayyy you're back🤗🤗 I switched on my laptop to reply to you so that I can insert a proper hug emoji, as my cell doesn't allow me to do that. And just writing *Big Hug* wouldn't have done justice to my happiness 😆

🤗 Big hug for the warm welcome!!

I have just about given up on understanding where exactly they are going with Dev's character.

I was waiting for the jealousy track but they just screwed it up royally. His erratic behaviour is getting on my nerves now. Shades of Grey is understandable, infact I like leads who aren't perfect. But he is crossing over to the dark side nowadays. Messing with R's loan and what not. Not once has he thought about the repercussions of his actions.Be it the break up or the many other things he is hell bent on doing these days. Let's not even talk about it, we'll never stop!

Yes, I know we have a million things to say (or rant about) and I don't want to do that on this thread which should rightfully be reserved for well deserved appreciation for your story.

Coming to the story, A BIG thank you for your kind words of appreciation. I'm trying my best to stick to their characters that were promised in the initial promos. I thought I should be kind to Dev in my story, the makers aren't being very kind to his character recently.

I'm glad you liked the update, I was worried some of my loyal readers were losing interest.

The story, the prose, the characters are all making for a great read. It is time you wrote something outside of Dev/Sona and went more public..so many ways to do that nowadays.

Also, I miss your posts on the forum. Write something, pretty please?

I hope the episodes inspire us to do that. Looking at what we have lined up based on spoilers at least some of them should!

Will be updating the next part today😊

Read and commented too!

Originally posted by: gmgi

Brilliant Malavika. Finally they will share their pain. You wrote that part so beautifully. Women are blessed with so much inner strength. When we collapse our whole world collapse with us. Thank you for not making Ishwari a part of the reason for their lose. Each incidents will teach them to be there for one another and to deal with everything together as a unit. So beautifully written. Loved it.