Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70 - Page 43

Originally posted by: bookworm123

Malvika, another excellent update!

Once again, very good use of the memory loss plot device to provide the characters with a different perspective of the same event..

I'm loving the prose, be it the descriptions of their feelings (joy, sadness, attraction, making love..) or while setting up the scenes..

Through all of this they are two lovely people in love that endures and are there for each other. This is called a mature relationship..

Very good indeed!

Originally posted by: bookworm123

Wow another beautifully crafted chapter👏- or should I say a brilliant stroke of brush on the canvas emitting an aura drawing you into mystical, magical and blissful world of Dev and Sonakshi!

There is so much binding, belonging and caring between the two - they have managed to hang in together in spite of grudges, anger and apprehensions - I like how she sought solace in her work after the huge loss, trying to go about her routine - trying to keep her tears from him! No she doesn't blame him,on the contrary she wants to shield him from the pain, she can read in his eyes every time she looked into them, she feels responsible for taking away the biggest happiness of his life and wants to protect him - but the only outlet for her anguished cry is him, ahhh this two are sooo perfect in your beautiful tale-just like a poetry on canvas!

I loved how she was the one who reached out for him, he was whining away in guilt and pain but didn't trust himself enough to take that first step - and she knows him better than himself, the way you have brought out this aspect of their relationship is so beautiful!❤️

So the steps have been taken to make amends - waiting for the ties to cement and mature into unbreakable bond!

Originally posted by: rasika_DS

Malvika another brilliant piece of writing⭐️⭐️🤗

So fate was the one to shake Dev-Sona's paradise. Thanks for keeping Ishwari away from this. We actually thought she might be somewhere responsible for this mishap. But as you said Sona would never have forgiven them. When fate is the factor, you have no one to blame and its comparatively not that difficult to overcome from the loss.

Love how you penned down Dev's POV. Finally Sonakshi is trying to free themselves from this pain. This memory loss was surely a way to give a new beginning to their lives. I somehow now feel that Dev was not completely at fault in thinking not to reveal about the miscarriage to her.

A quote from google baba:😆

Fate is never fair. You are caught in a current much stronger than you are; struggle against it and you'll drown not just yourself but those who try to save you. Swim with it. and you'll survive.

Originally posted by: masooma98

Very very well written.. as always :)

Really loved it

Originally posted by: enchanted23

Wow another beautifully crafted chapter👏- or should I say a brilliant stroke of brush on the canvas emitting an aura drawing you into mystical, magical and blissful world of Dev and Sonakshi!

There is so much binding, belonging and caring between the two - they have managed to hang in together in spite of grudges, anger and apprehensions - I like how she sought solace in her work after the huge loss, trying to go about her routine - trying to keep her tears from him! No she doesn't blame him,on the contrary she wants to shield him from the pain, she can read in his eyes every time she looked into them, she feels responsible for taking away the biggest happiness of his life and wants to protect him - but the only outlet for her anguished cry is him, ahhh this two are sooo perfect in your beautiful tale-just like a poetry on canvas!

I loved how she was the one who reached out for him, he was whining away in guilt and pain but didn't trust himself enough to take that first step - and she knows him better than himself, the way you have brought out this aspect of their relationship is so beautiful!❤️

So the steps have been taken to make amends - waiting for the ties to cement and mature into unbreakable bond!

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Thank you so much rasikaa🤗

What a brilliant quote, and so apt for Dev and Sona of this story.

I'm glad to know you are able to sympathize with Dev as well. I wanted that to happen. That was the main intent of this chapter :) Both of them are hurting, and both have to lean on each other to help them get through this.

Once again, thanks so much for taking the time to read and review😃

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Thank you soo much aditi for your wonderful review🤗

They are perfect in their imperfection. She knows him better than he knows himself, and same goes for him. He does every thing in his power to shield her from pain, and can't bear the thought of him being the reason for her pain. These two just bring out the romantic in me!😆

Once again, many thanks for taking the time to read and review ❤️