Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70 - Page 33

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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 6

Awesome Chapter

I'm glad that Sonakshi had mentioned to both Ishwari and Dev about her memory yes it's true starting fresh is an excellent idea but if those issues of the past still hung over their heads both Ishwari and Dev would be on the path of "trying to hard " to make everything perfect but now that Sonakshi knows that Dev could not balance his relations or that Ishwari felt insecure Sona can start at this point and make adjustments.
Dev Sona moments were lovely and yeah it's her first kiss
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Part 5


Fantastic Chapter

I really like how you brought out the issues between Dev and Sona between Sona and Ishwari and the fact that Dev could make excuses for his mother believing her fake sweetness,
Dev and Sona always assuming things would get better but they never approached the root problem instead they ignored it by going on trips and now that Sona holds onto the wrapper she senses there was something more but trying to remember is difficult

Thank you so much!! I'm glad to know you're liking the story!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: BunnyObodhro368

Wow what a twist
Love it
Now I can't wait for the next part
Pleaseee update soon
Im so curious

Thank u soo much dear😃
Glad to know you liked the twist!!
Will try and update soon😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rasika_DS

Malvika ye tune kya kiya..a treat along with a bomb explosion.

Big hug to you for giving this part so quickly..much needed🤗

So finally the past is revealed..they were going to have a baby..so she had a miscarriage😭😭🤢
Now its clear why Dev was so much apprehensive and worried for what if she remembers this.

Loved the romantic DevAkshi. They both are so maturely dealing with the sort of new relationship. Looking forward to see if the past will change the dynamics of their (new)relationship or make it more strong. Now we need the next part very very soon😳
You write so beautifully.👏👏 I have no words to describe. Have you thought of it as a career option. You should definetely give it a try😳

These lines are so so beautiful.👏👏

Every time Sonakshi looked at him, it was with a tentative apology for not yet remembering. While she was regretful, he was grateful. While she looked at him hoping to remember, he was wary one day she would.

The fragments of unhappiness she'd remembered before belonged to another life, another couple. They were long gone, replaced with new memories of a man to whom she couldn't possibly feel closer. She couldn't remember smiling more in her life.

If she was honest with herself, she'd admit that she was meshing the few known pieces of her life in a disjointed picture. She was shoving mismatched edges together like an impatient child, bending corners any way she could, all to escape the realization that she wasn't playing with all the relevant pieces.

Awww that's soo sweet of you rasika😃 Big Hug.
It had to do be done in the same chapter for maximum impact😆
How, as they finally became one, comes something that has the potential to tear them apart.
Thank u soo much for your kind words dear😳 it's overwhelming!
I loved writing those lines too :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
You are just so gud at writing
Brilliant brilliant..
Completely loved it
So yeah major thing out
And they got intimate, making new memories.
Lovet it!
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Posted: 8 years ago
beautiful writing... part 8 was superb... waiting for next part eagerly plz update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Its getting better by the day! Cant believe I'm saying this but its actually much better than the serial its self!
Loving it more and more
Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 7

Beautiful Chapter

I really liked the post it scene it held so much love and depth truly beautiful . While the sexual tension is increasing between both as both not sure how to move forward
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Posted: 8 years ago
I'd be lying if I say i had not guessed this (and the photo frame had been a trigger fir thoughts) but as i said before its the way u write it...how u put it across...how seamlessly you let the words flow...its just WOW... absolutely loved it...that moment when she says we were going to have a baby and he repeats...its like ur in dat moment and everything around is still...few words said and so many emotions flying arnd... amazingly written...
And ya thanks for the good time that happened before...this is one sin he wld love to commit time and agn...and u wen brough up the marriage part i almost thought ders a new post -it ready but well it turned out to be an amazing build up for something bigger...

Next part ...jaldiii plsss...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 8

Fantastic and Shocking !

I kept on wondering what was so bad that even Dev felt it to be a sin surely their fights couldn't be it and it's revealed she was pregnant when the accident happened and that's the photo that was missing probably her sonogram of the baby , surely this news will dampen the situation but at least she remembered so now they can slowly deal with it

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