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Miaprincess

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

A good read.. Continue soon.. :)

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Every time I read your story , I feel I am reading a story by Bengali author. The way you treat your story is somewhat in line with them. All of them have this way of depicting love in similar way.

Not sure if you understood..just wondering how to word it ...like...when you read the story you feel nice but at the same time , deep down in ur heart you feel this pain for the lead lady. ...and that feel of pain is maintained thru out the story...I loved ur story...

I really loved it . Nice flow and pace too...do write soon...eagerly waiting for the next part .

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Fantastic!!

A different Dev. A very different Sonakshi. But a pair just as easy to fall in love with!! Read all 4 chapters in one go!!

A very impressive start. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Can you please PM me once you post the next part??

Edited by Suvika. - 9 years ago

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
Every time I read your story , I feel I am reading a story by Bengali author. The way you treat your story is somewhat in line with them. All of them have this way of depicting love in similar way.

Not sure if you understood..just wondering how to word it ...like...when you read the story you feel nice but at the same time , deep down in ur heart you feel this pain for the lead lady. ...and that feel of pain is maintained thru out the story...I loved ur story...

I really loved it . Nice flow and pace too...do write soon...eagerly waiting for the next part .

I can't put it in words how much this means to me.I'm so glad I succeeded in bringing such emotion out of my reader. Thank you so much for all the love and support.🤗

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Suvika.
Fantastic!!

A different Dev. A very different Sonakshi. But a pair just as easy to fall in love with!! Read all 4 chapters in one go!!

A very impressive start. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Can you please PM me once you post the next part??

Hey darling, I'm so glad that you read and enjoyed the chapters! Thanks so much for dropping your thought 😳

And about receiving PMs for this SS, all you have to do is just send a buddy request to my other account called Devakshi_PM :)