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Mushfika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Suvika.

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My career as a Fiction novel writer started in India Forums. So I truly do understand and connect with the sense of accomplishment that you feel when your reader catches your thoughts behind your scenes. I felt exactly the same way not very long ago.

Yup, I guessed that part [Fiction novel writer] from your DP. Plus your comments have constantly been very impressive 😳 😉 I have immense respect for you for complimenting other writer's work because most of the time, that's not what the case is when you're a successful writer. So a huge shoutout to you for that, girl friend! 🤗

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AngelsFlyAlone

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Mushfika

Oh sweetie! You have no idea how overwhelmed I am right now, after reading your comment! This is one of those precious comments I will always treasure, remember and cheer for the rest of my life. Love ya!🤗

Chalo abh update bhi karlo naaa... Also love you more

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rasika_DS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: Mushfika

[Pendant] I must say you have an extremely sharp brain and very keen eyes. 😆 Absolutely nothing goes over your head 😆 None of my readers have pointed this out to me 🤣 But that's a Very good point. Well, I refuse to reveal much in the comment. Thoda sa sabr karna pade ga aapko😉

Thanks so much for your lovely comment 😳

Hahaha dear I read the story with full focus and concentration😆😎 so I was very keen to know about this. I knew you won't reveal this in the comment😆 I am ready to wait 😳 Please update soon.

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Shaun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Chapter 4

So Sonakshi recognized Dev but he did not , he seems very much like a stern person . even though he has no idea its Sonakshi it seems that he has instantly taken upon himself to care for her .

Radha Rani is someone that has no feelings towards others but I'm glad that Dev stopped her from taking Sona out of his room .

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Shaun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Chapter 5

Excellent part

I like how you have pointed out their skype conversations ending and Dev getting to know that Sonakshi has left with her uncle .

so he has always thought about her wanting to come back to India just for her but now that he has resources he wants to Finds her .

the determination in him is admiral .

Radha Rani's cruel act was witnessed by Dev and it also seems like he is a very strong person personality wise . I liked how he pointed out that no one that lives in Dixit Mansion is allowed to ill treat the staff .

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Shaun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Chapter 6

Sonakshi thinking about the time she came to find out she suffers from Asthma and Mami ji did not want to allow her any treatment .

Dev he cannot understand why he cares for the girl that is only his staff but there is already this certain pull as he cannot see her painful eyes her wounds .

Sonakshi on the other hand is overwhelmed with the fact that Dev had noticed her wrists this is something big for her

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Shaun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Chapter 7

Sonakshi getting the chance to cook all Dev's favorite and seeing him appreciate her cooking makes her happy that she can do something for him.

Sonakshi coming to the pool area just like the time she came after he lost his father and here she comes as his mother is ill and Sonakshi pours her strength into him her presence fills that unknown void that he has within him .

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Shaun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

I'm truly sorry for such late response to your PM's

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simplesweety1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Read All The Parts In A Go! I Don't Have Words ... Seriously! You Are An Awesome Writer ! You Write Beautifully. I Loved The Poolside Wala Scene,I Could Literally Imagine Everything, Literally. Please Update Soon! I Can't Wait For The Update! And I Have A Request, Please Put An Accident Track In This FF And Declare That Namuni GKB (Radha Rani) And His Son Dead! I Feel Like Killing Them! 😆