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Erian

@Erian

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

This , my dear , is awesome to say the least.

Loved every DevAkshi moments especially the one near the pool where she made him take his food & medicine.

You are such a beautiful writer dear. God bless you. Keep updating.

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.FlyingClouds.

@.FlyingClouds.

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

OMG!!

That was lively!!

Can't wait to read that Dev has finally recognized her!!

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rasika_DS

@rasika_DS

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Your PM made me so happy 😃 🤗

This chapter is so so beautiful. Love your style of writing.👏👏

The 1st DevAkshi scene where she was dancing and he caught her was so cute and funny 😃

The last scene was beautiful. How she gives him the required strength and makes him eat😳Even though he is unaware about her identity there is that force which pulls him towards her😳

Awaiting the next part.

I have one question she does not wears that locket which he gifted her?? As he has not seen it yet.

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

First thing I checked in the morning was if you had updated ...and yesss!! what a lovely journey of Dev and Sona...amazing ...I dont know girl how you do this , but I must say ..I loved it ...I was waiting eagerly for you to update. Thank you very much for a Sunday morning treat ...read it with black tea...⭐️

Now I am greedy ...need more ...so please please write soon .

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Sharica

@Sharica

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#125

It was lovely..You are a brilliant writer😊🤗

I could feel each and every single word...

It was so soothing. Their interactions specially the last one.

I want to see Dev himself recognising his Sonakshi...

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

amazinggg story...
read all parts in one go..
radha rani 😡
hope dev will realise sona's real identity soon..
plzz update soon& pm me

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#127

How beautifully u hv described every emotion that sona was gng thru
Waiting for your next update

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sa1234B

@sa1234B

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Wow awesome update👏

loved it...eagerly waiting for next part

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Miaprincess

@Miaprincess

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Loved it!! Thank you!! Please update soon.. :D

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gmgi

@gmgi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#130

Loved it. It is so beautiful. I loved the fact that even when Dev didn't know it was Sonakshy he got the same comfort from this unknown girl whom he seems to have this deep connection with. It just reiterates the depth of their connection. You wrote that part so beautifully. I loved all their scenes but this I liked the best.

Thank you for the PM. Please update soon.😳

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