DevAkshi SS: Hidden - Chapter 13 | Pg 53 | 06.09.2017 - Page 14

Originally posted by: binuuu

amazinggg story...
read all parts in one go..
radha rani 😡
hope dev will realise sona's real identity soon..

plzz update soon& pm me

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

Can I just say how freaking gorgeous this is? Okay just so you know, I basically live for those moments when I get a pm from you saying you've updated this. I find myself inside the story and feeling it all happen in front of me. Thank you so much for this beautiful piece of heaven your writing is magical, xo. Keep writing take care and hugs <3

Originally posted by: rasika_DS

Your PM made me so happy 😃 🤗

This chapter is so so beautiful. Love your style of writing.👏👏

The 1st DevAkshi scene where she was dancing and he caught her was so cute and funny 😃

The last scene was beautiful. How she gives him the required strength and makes him eat😳Even though he is unaware about her identity there is that force which pulls him towards her😳

Awaiting the next part.

I have one question she does not wears that locket which he gifted her?? As he has not seen it yet.

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Tough to say which DevAkshi scene I liked the best.

One showed them slowly bonding.

Second showed them coming together - when Dev watches the playful side of Sonakshi and she manages to get a chuckle out of him.

Third one makes the bonding almost complete. Because until now Dev had always been in the role of protector. But now she has become his protector / pillar of support. Someone he leaned on for that short while. A first for both of them (as grown ups)

Another sweet chapter. Loved it.

Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: mgram505

just loved...all devakshi scenes..I loved thoroughly...I am sad only for dev sudden decision but happy for sona leaving dixit house but got angry on ishwari after today's segment...but then your story I am just relieved...too good devakshi scenes which is so good and both supporting each other..and ..ur story is so much unique...u just cover very movement and every emotion they just handle...the way u write the story is so good...keep your writing and your story is best among any ff stories...
and also thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Mushfika

You summarized the entire chapter 7 and understood the hidden message I wanted to convey with perfection!

@red: I feel honored to have a reader like you for you interpreted and analysed their bond and characters to a certain depth! You're absolutely correct, darling 👍🏼

Thank you so much for making me feel accomplished in doing my job.🤗