DevAkshi SS: Hidden - Chapter 13 | Pg 53

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Lovely. Wonderful work.👏 And special applaud for that complete stretch of scene starting from when he finds the store room door open to his promise that he won't let anything happen to her. The scene is seamless, natural and intense. Above all, true to your Dev's character. 👍🏼

I think his heart has already recognised the girl. Just a matter of time for the brain to catch up. 😉

I like this Adi too by the way. Cute guy. Smart and Perceptive.

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Read all the chapters in 1 go. Good flow. The fact that Dev is attracted to Sona even without know about her is wonderful.

In this, Radha is being the pillar in between DevAkshi. I just wonder why you are not making Sona more resourceful. She is a college student, how does she pay for her fees and doesn't Radha know about it?

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Himruta_fan

@Himruta_fan

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Nice update. Thanks for the pm.

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.FlyingClouds.

@.FlyingClouds.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Wonderful part!

Really want Dev to know that the girl he can't see in pain is his Sona!!

Please cont soon

Thanks for the pm

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AngelsFlyAlone

@AngelsFlyAlone

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#165

8 chapters... Ab toh let Dev know who this girl is? Also, this whole work you've done is f*cking brilliant I can't explain how amazing it is I'm addicted to this story and this world you've spun with your web of magical words and characters... Can't wait for the next update I love you for this story omg

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rasika_DS

@rasika_DS

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#166

It was lovely. Finally the pendant is introduced again😆 Love how he cares for her even if he is unaware about her identity. Looking forward to the next part dear.

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gmgi

@gmgi

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#167

He knows it is her. His heart have already recognised her as the one. Only his mind need to catch up. So beautifully you have etched that scene. His fear of losing her again... Her finding solace in his arms. They don't need words. It is their hearts that is speaking for them.

So beautiful. Thanks for the PM n also don't mind waiting since it is so worth the wait.👏