*Complete*The Fight & The Kiss... A Devakshi Two Shot - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Amazing ... Both of the parts so beautiful
Thanks for sharing this with us...

Nd of course , we would love to read u again..
Plz write more 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Thank you sooo much for such a quick update. .I was waiting for it before going to bed😳
I always believed that Distance makes the heart grow fonder. . And you described it so beautifully❤️
The second part gave me so many DevAkshi feels ❤️ Amazng!
Please please do keep writing👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Loved it..read both parts in one go..please do write more on Devakshi..😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Read both parts together! They were simply beautiful... your writing flows naturally, and everything seemed so real!
Please write more :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Beautifully written.
I could totally imagine Dev and Sona.You write really well.Is there anything else you have written?If not please do write more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Beautiful writing , could totally imagine Dev and Sona in that writing ...
Keep it up
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Soo damn romantic ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Wow! I'm at loss of words.. the way you move from Dev's POV to Sonakshi's POV-- just so smooth and with just the right words!! Kudos to you!
we have some amazing writers here... you add another golden feather to that cap!

Loved it to the moon and back... enough of my rants... now i will go back and read it again and again and again!! 👏☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Lovely... But i didn't like that dev never said sorry.. It was also him who hv shouted..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Aww.. this is so cute n romantic

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