*Complete*The Fight & The Kiss... A Devakshi Two Shot - Page 5

Originally posted by: yyy

Amazing story .I am impresed with your writing ...it was perfect .I always wanted a intense devakshi scene and this is the best one i have read so far ...i feel you should mail this script to CVs ...let them show something like this in the show minus kiss is ok with me .

Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

Amazing ... Both of the parts so beautiful
Thanks for sharing this with us...

Nd of course , we would love to read u again..
Plz write more 😊

Originally posted by: saumiee

Thank you sooo much for such a quick update. .I was waiting for it before going to bed😳

I always believed that Distance makes the heart grow fonder. . And you described it so beautifully❤️

The second part gave me so many DevAkshi feels ❤️ Amazng!

Please please do keep writing👏

Originally posted by: KaranSG_01

Beautifully written.
I could totally imagine Dev and Sona.You write really well.Is there anything else you have written?If not please do write more.

Originally posted by: masooma98

Read both parts together! They were simply beautiful... your writing flows naturally, and everything seemed so real!

Please write more :)

Originally posted by: zaara610

Loved it..read both parts in one go..please do write more on Devakshi..😛

Originally posted by: EJF_FAN

Wow! I'm at loss of words.. the way you move from Dev's POV to Sonakshi's POV-- just so smooth and with just the right words!! Kudos to you!

we have some amazing writers here... you add another golden feather to that cap!

Loved it to the moon and back... enough of my rants... now i will go back and read it again and again and again!! 👏☺️

Originally posted by: neelima_menon

Soo damn romantic ❤️

Originally posted by: Divi.C

Lovely... But i didn't like that dev never said sorry.. It was also him who hv shouted..