Os..moment..PART 8a PAGE 13 updated on 26 august,16 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Jade0001

I read all in one go didn't realize you've continued already

Its a Fantastic Story , the emotions so well portrayed

please do pm me when you update next


Will be updating soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guyzz..
Eid Mubarak to all.😃

Ab yh eidi meri tarf se😉

In this part,I tried to use the 2 most beautiful scenes of original drama with my version😆

Enjoy😛

Part 7

dev.tu itni jaldi uth gya.ankhyn laal horai hn.raat ko der se aya that kia?"

"nai maa.shayad neend puri nai hui."

he moved his face so that ishwari couldn't find his expressions.

"aaachhiii.".

he wiped his hands.this fever was gift of last night rain.

"tuu kh raha hai Bahar nai gya to yh zukham kese hogya.ab tu yh choti batyn bhi chupanay LGA hai jese ..."

ishwari stopped in between and realized what she was about to speak.but,dev get it.

"woh maa mjhy der horai.hai.chalta hun."

he bow down to touch the feet.

"haldi doodh to PETA ja."

"aaachhhuuu...yh SB tmahri waja we hua.Na TM mjh se naraz hokr jati,Na mn tmhn manane at a or Na barish mn bhegta."

he was frustrated with this fever.

"to kis ne kaha tha mjhy naraz krne ko,manane anay ko,barish mn bhegne ko...aachhuuu"

"acha bachuu..idhar ao Zara..."

she was not ready and with that pull she was all on him.they had never share this much proximity.she can smell.his branded perfume and he was all lost in her hair fragrance.dev has never imagined sona so innocent,so pure and now with this much closeness,he was all.lost in her beauty.

as she couldn't bear his proximity,she finally managed to say
"dev yh doodh"
"hmmm.kiya??"
"yh doodh p..p..pi lo."
"kia karlun?? "
he removed the strand from her face which was blocking his sight.a shiver ran through her spine with his touch.

"whh yh haldi doodh p..p...piii l..oo"
"bad mn"
"wh dev mjhy janaaa h.h.hai"
"hmmm..chali Jana."
he move his hands to her back and started to feel her.sona was all lost and as he touch her lips,a soft mourn pass away from her lips.he moved his face to feel the softness of those rose petals.

*rings*
dev came back from his senses.sona was embarrassed at her lost behaviour.
he quickly went out of room.

"dev pagal hogya hai kiya.yh kia KR raha tha..pta nai kesa soch rai hogi mjhy."

'dev.doodh laon."

he came into his senses.
"nai maa.der horai chalta hn."
he went out.

"mn janti hn tera dard mgr mn tujhe nqi kho skti dev."
...
"sona yeh kesa hai."

asha show her a white bangali sari with red embroidery.
"achi hai maa."

"to yh tu Teri shadi k bad Jo phli dawat hogi Na Teri hmare ghar us mn phn k ana."

"bass sai lg rai ho."

"sai ka kia mtlab."
she pouts and look back into mirror.this white sari was choice of dev for this occasion.

"sai mtlab sai..much kami hai Jo mn puri KR skta hn."

kya??

yeh..he showed her a white gajraa.

"ohhh.to yh bat hai."she blushed on his antics.

to phnaye...

mn ?? mjhy nai at a.

apke google master se yh bhi sekh lete.

he made a pout.
"ab nai at a to kia krn.."

"itna mushkil nai...yh dekhye."
after 5 minutes,he was able to tie gajra.hugging her from back,mirror was telling them they are perfect together.

"beautiful ..!"

"beautiful sona. bht achi lg rai yh sari tujh p."
she came back into her senses.his eyes were not wet because she has no tears left to be shed.she was sitting like a piece of doll with no emotions.

and this was seen by some else and tears roll down from his eyes.!!!!
Continue😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Will do it😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Perfect Part

Dev annoyed with his fever and it almost seems as if Iswhari was going to talk about Sona
Was Sona remembering a time when she and Dev stood in fron of mirror
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Perfect Part

Dev annoyed with his fever and it almost seems as if Iswhari was going to talk about Sona
Was Sona remembering a time when she and Dev stood in fron of mirror


Yup she was remembering.
Thnx for reply😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Thnx😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Superb update..Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Amazing updates
Thanks for the pm
Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Read all parts in one go.. I just loved it..wtng for ur next part..update soon..can't wait..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Do PM when u update next this series is my favourite

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