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hi guyzz!its a little long part.thanks for appreciations.but i am finding very less comments,if you are not liking it or something else,do write it down.

if you want pm...like 1st page.😛

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PART 4


"Dev tuu agaya. kesa din guzra ajj."

"Maa bauhaut hectic tha. 1 fuzul larki ki waja se deal jatay jatay bachi magar ab sb thek hai."

"Larki!!! Magar aesa kia hua."

"Kuch nai maa.bauhaut bhook lgi hai kuch khanay ko dena."

Dev look at ishwari face and found it a little weak."maa kuch hua hai kiya.yeh tera cehra ithna utra hua kun hai."

"Aray kuch nai.bss thak gai hn gi."

ishwari try to change the topic"tu mun dho k a mn khana lati hn."

Dev came out of cold shower and as he was about to leave room, his phone rang.

"ji bolye...sir apka kam hogya."

A successful smirk came to dev face "thank you!yeh apke hospital k lye bhi bhtar hai."

He had taken his revenge...with a high paid interest!!!

...

"maa mn ja rai hn hospital.late hora hai"

"sona nashta karti ja!! Khud nutritionist ho aur mjhy breakfast ki importance btani parti hai"

"maa mn ne salad lelya hai..rastay mn kha lun gi"

Asha was smiling on her antics as she left home!!

...

"Good morning dr.khanna kese hn app."

"1 minute dr.sonakshi.ap mere room mn aye."

As she step in,she felt some sort of seriousness in room.

"Please be seated."

"Dr.sonakshi apke against bauhaut sari complains arai hn as your patients are not satisfied with your prescribed charts and even unko apni health mn bhi koi progress nai ml rai. so we had decided to replace you.ap apna account setlle krlyjye and apna room aj hi cleanup krdijye"

Sonakshi was in utter shock and couldnot speak for minutes.

"but sir,how its possible.i cannot believe k mere patients aesa kahin.zarur kuch misunderstanding hai."

"Ji nai dr.sonakshi.we are very clear about our decision."

Controlling her tears,she just said"sir app mujhy patient ka nam btayn please."

"We cannot do that miss.you know hospital rules.feedback are strictly for management not for doctors.i think you should leave now."

She gather herself and came out of room.

"ji mr dixit.kam hogya.ab dev dixit ksi ki complain kre aur uske against action na ho aesa hoskta hai"

Sona was dumbfounded listening it.

"who is this dev dixit.in k khne p meri job gai.i need to meet him."

She came out of hospital and called sharubh."dada,please 1 kam karyn.dev dixit k baray mn mjhy btayn jaldi"

"But sona hua kiya."

"Dada please mn akar apko btati hn."

"Thek hai ruko tm."

"Mr.dixit !you have to answer me!!!"

...

Dev was busy in his files when tina call him"sir apse koi dr.sonakshi mlne ayi hn"

Dev was surprise at her name "khdo mn busy hn"

He was again engrossed in his files when his door open and was shut and locked.

"excuse me!ap andar kese ayn.you don't have manners that you should take appointment first"

"Kun apne mjh se poch k meri job churwai.kon hain ap.mn apko janti bhi nai aur ap ne mere against complains kr k mjhye nkalwa dya."

"Please miss.mn apko nai janta to apki job kun churwaon ga and by the way,apke attitude se lg ra hai k apko kun nkala gya hai."

Dev give a small laugh and started to work. sona couldnot bear this attitude and snatch papers from him and tear them.

"you have to answer me mr.dixit"

"How could you do that."

Dev in his anger,pulled sonakshi's hands and as she was not ready,she hit with his chest.

"leave me."

"shhh."dev pulled her second hand and she was all encircled in his arms,with his face two inches away from her. his eyes,full with anger and somewhat revenge, was on her. dev look at her and for a moment was engrossed in her eyes which were widened by his actons. they were pure,fill with anger,questions and he was lost in her!!! may be forever!!!


CONTINUE😛

Edited by attiya1.3 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Anger & attitude
Nice update
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Nice update
He took his revenge but Sonakshi won't sit quite. She reached Dev office & asked him. He lost in her eyes. Curious to know what happen next. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: cherrynicolem

Anger & attitude

Nice update
Thanks for pm


Thnxx 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
He took his revenge but Sonakshi won't sit quite. She reached Dev office & asked him. He lost in her eyes. Curious to know what happen next. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm


Will update in next 3 days...

Thnx😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Nice update... TFS.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: JyotiBThakur

Nice update... TFS.😊


Thnx😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww I read all the 4 parts ... Its awsome...plz cont soon and add me to ur pm list😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvflicksgirl

Aww I read all the 4 parts ... Its awsome...plz cont soon and add me to ur pm list😳


Thnx for such sweet comment😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyanvs

wow dear nice update


Thnx😃

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