Os..moment..PART 8a PAGE 13 updated on 26 august,16

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guyzzz...its first time i dare to write as there are so many brilliant writers and it always stop me to pen down.its just a thought...if you like,i will continue...


Sitting on the bench of the same park he used to sit on in his childhood,drenched in rain,whose droplets were mixed with his tears.the tears of pain,regret,love and mostly,fear.

fear of losing her!!!

how he had said those words which are tearing his heart and he was thinking,how that pure soul has bear them.Was it neccessary to come to far and back off like this? Was it neccessary to lie to her?
He wiped his tears and his eyes went to his third finger and he just froze in that moment.Her voice
"yeh sirf abhi k lye hai.jb grand announcement krn ge to sath chalyn ge"
take him to the memories of last three months and he just put his head back to the bench to drench in memories of her.

Waiting for opinions
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plzz plzz continue!
Don't refrain to write and ever underestimate yourself okay! No one's great and no one's bad...all are equal.
The feelings of dev's were awesome.
I wonder what happened.
Just please continue asap
And I'm sure everyone would like it :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Continue plz. It's good to read.
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This was lovely. Great job :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Your OS seems very intriguing.😊
Please continue soon, I'd love to read more.😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya925

Plzz plzz continue!
Don't refrain to write and ever underestimate yourself okay! No one's great and no one's bad...all are equal.
The feelings of dev's were awesome.
I wonder what happened.
Just please continue asap
And I'm sure everyone would like it :D


thanks for motivation...😛

will continue soon..

thoray comments anay do 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LilyPotter

Your OS seems very intriguing.😊

Please continue soon, I'd love to read more.😉


thanks for compliment...

i try my best to keep it intriguing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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will do it soon😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: krystle123

awesome. do continue asap

thanks😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

This was lovely. Great job :)

thanks 😃

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